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Mute


 

 

 

    "Good morning class," The young female teacher greeted as she got to her desk in front of her class. No one heard her, it was way too noisy between the students. "Wait, calm down, guys, calm—YAH!" She screamed, hitting hard with her books on her wooden desk. Wow, that surely startled me. Apparently, not only me, but the rest of the class as well. "Finally! Dealing with you guys is so hard, I'm getting older everyday because of you." She cleared . "Anyways, we have a new student joining us this semester." The pretty teacher glanced at me, at last. "Come in!" She nodded, smiling.
    
    I cleared my throat and straightned my backpack. This is it. I stepped in and was welcomed by a whole classroom full of guys staring at me. Not to be racist, since I'm also one of them, but they all looked pretty much the same. I walked until I got to the teacher's side, and then bowed to my new classmates.
    
    "Hello, I'm Lee Byunghun." I tried to glance at everyone, but I was actually getting nervous for so much attention. "Nice to meet you all, hope we get along!"
    
    No response.
    Gah, this is so embarassing.    
    I tried not to sound too enthusiasic but not too boring either, so I don't see where did I fail, to receive such an uninterested reaction from my new colleagues.
    
    "Ugh, right, don't mind them, they are all shy around new people." I felt teacher's hand on my back, pushing me forward. "Go ahead, choose your seat. But do it fast," She added.
    
    I made my way to the back of the class, where all empty seats were. I sat down on the closest to the door. I felt like an outsider right when I sat down: that row had no one. Like, no one; empty. No one was paying attention to me either, which made me even more nervous. I had read about Korean high schools before enrolling this one and let's say it didn't exactly make me feel comfortable. But I'm sure it couldn't be that bad. As long as I blended in, nothing could happen to me... right?
    Well, that wasn't very reassuring, L. Joe. Wait, Byunghun. Gotta get used to my real name now.
    
    "Byunghun there came from the States a few weeks ago, if I'm not wrong...?" She added, I nodded. "So he may not be used to our culture; please take care of him. I mean, like, really take care of him. Don't just walk around with your little group of friends. Homeroom's over, stay quiet until the following teacher comes in. See you kids."
    "Kids? Please, we are seniors now." Some guy answered her back, in a rather offended tone.
    "Then act like one!" The teacher laughed and walked out of the room.
    
    Everyone went back to their chit-chat, leaving me out of it. I tried not to show affected by it as I looked over to them. It's understandable, it's only the first day.    
    Suddenly, the door next to me flung open and a rather emotionless guy came in. Everyone stopped talking to greet him: "Hey L", "Myungsoo, late again?", "Long time no see, bro", however he shrugged all them off with a single nod and walked to his seat, on the furthest end of the same row where I was.
    Well, guess I won't be that alone anymore.
    
    School passed by rather quickly, nothing really happened; but hey, it's only Monday.
    So, as soon as the bell rang, I ran to the bus stop near the school and impatiently waited for the bus that would take me to my dear mom.



    "I'm here to visit Lee Min Hee," I said as soon as I got to the reception, and handed her my ID.
    "Yes, just a moment please." She took my card and started typing on the computer.
    "Ha Jinnie! You're here again?" A lady worker next to me spoke in a rather sweet tone, not professional at all. I looked over to them and saw a girl wearing my school's uniform. She handed the lady a letter, smiling. "Dr. Park? Oh, you know where it is, right, sweetie?" The lady smiled and the girl called Ha Jin nodded. "Second floor, room 483, she's waiting for you there." The girl nodded, gave a small smile and slightly bowed, before making her way to the elevator.    
    "Here you go," The lady in front of me handed me a visitor card. "Patient Lee Min Hee is on the fourth floor, room 1132."
    "Thank you."

    I followed the girl Ha Jin and we both waited for the elevator. I let her get in first, even pressed the second floor before pressing the fourth for me, but not once I heard her say those "thank you" words for me. Well, it's not the first time I meet rude people, but it's always disappointing.
    I managed to shrug it off and leaned my back against the lifter's wall, seeing how slow it was going. I sighed, crossing my arms.
    
    
    
    "Hello, beautiful~" I grinned as I caught a glimpse of her.
    "Byunghun!" Before doing anything else, she pressed a button somewhere on her hospital bed that lift her until she was in a rather comfortable sitting position. "Come here."
    
    I carefully hugged her and sat on her bed, by her side, holding her hand.
    "How was your first day of school?" She asked in her usually calm voice, between some unsteady breaths.
    "It was fine."
    "Made a lot of friends?"
    I chuckled, "Not really." I looked at her. "Yet, of course."
    
    I curled a strand of her hair behind her ear and caressed her cheek. I smiled at her and she smiled back. I felt my heart warm up, my cold features melting at her lovely presence. My mom. My gorgeous Mother. Seeing her in this state, so pale, so fragile, saddened me. However, the way she always smiled as if nothing was wrong, surely brightened up my day.
    I ran my hand through her dark hair and it shocked me seeing strands of her hair following my fingers, hanging apart from their original place. I stared at them and slowly felt my chin tremble. My eyes grew watery. I glanced at her, her eyes all over me, filled with worry.
    When I should be the one worrying.
    
    "It's okay," She whispered as she wiped away my tears with her thumb. "I'm alright. I'm alright, Byunghun."
    
    I felt her once strong hands on my shoulders, lightly shaking me. Hands that took care of me, of a family, hands that fought and worked hard to support us, to raise me.
    Her hands cupped my cheeks and our foreheads leaned against each other's. I remember biting my lip and closing my eyes.

    I don't want to lose her.
 


 

A/N: Room 483? Anyone? Zimmer 483? No...? ;___;

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MayAndJune
#1
Chapter 7: Omg I can't believe you updated a day after I mentioned this to you! :'D

Why didn't Byunghun go for Hajin's door immediately? Why did he have to wait until Myungsoo came and, in the end, didn't go for it at all?

And Hajin's look of disappointment.... is Byunghun the one she expects? Haha, they've gotten closer after all.

And why did Myungsoo suddenly approach Byunghun? I have a feeling that his intention is more than just 'being nice to a potential friend'. Did something happen between those two at Hajin's house? Hahahah

Anyways....... Mute is going to end soon? Waeeeeeee D: I
MayAndJune
#2
Chapter 6: 'a wild tao appears'

Pfft hahahahahaha you have no idea what happened when I read the random Tao madness (if you're wondering, I have a hint for you: when I read that, I was drinking water....)

Hajin didn't come to school? It must've been hard for her to digest all that information in one day. Byunghun cheered her up by making fun of himself, but that of course isn't enough.

I don't understand her feelings because I never got to experience that, but I might do almost the exact same thing if I were on her shoes. To know that there's no hope of you getting your voice back, especially if you love singing is very harsh. But it's not wrong to be hoping that there's still hope right? :D

And I love Byunghun and his dad's relationship. They're like, very close, but Mr. Lee still have the father side of him. He worried and scolded Byunghun, but not that harsh kind of scolding.
And Mr. Lee didn't go all 'oh how did it go son did you kiss her yet' and tease Byunghun either, like in those typical romcom fics. Honestly, I hate that kind of fictional parents most. Like, come on.....

In midst of the negativity of the news, at least there's a little good in it (I tend to view things in a positive way haha). Byunghun and Hajin's friendship have gotten deeper, thanks to that night. Right now, I don't wish for them to end up together quickly, I still want some of the cute friendship of theirs progressing into something more slowly, hahahahah

Anyways, thanks for the update! I really enjoyed it:3
Thekpopobsessor
#3
Chapter 6: Tao XD kekeke so cute~
derpychannie
#4
Chapter 3: loving this story alreadyyyy <33

tbh it kinda makes me sad that such a sweet girl like ha jin is actually mute ;_;
byunghun is cute, in this story, and i like that :3

well even though this relationship between byunghun and ha jin is still a new lovely friendship, i hope in the end it grows into something more lololol cause that's what i am expecting x)
dolittle123
#5
Chapter 6: Ha Jin is such a sweet girl. :33
MayAndJune
#6
Chapter 5: OMG you updated! It's been a while and sometimes I wonder where's the newest update. lol Byunghun must be in some kind of dilemma since Hajin likes Myungsoo and he likes her too.

Uncurable? Officially disabled? Poor Hajin. Not only she lost her father in the accident, she also lost her voice. It must be hard for her since even Byunghyun (and I) was surprised by the letter. Hajin is officially mute and her chance of speaking again is less than usual.

Byunghun is nice enough to take Hajin home, and he even got to sleep under one roof (not one room, though....) with her. Score one for Byunghun lol! (since I doubt Myungsoo ever slept over Hajin's house...)

And since your friend mentioned it, I realized that Byunghun is...... a teeny weeny bit of..... gay. But I love is personality, which means..... I like gay guys? WHAT. Hahahahah, just kidding, by the way. Byunghun has traits that most men don't have, and it's great. Girls might swoon over him if he used it without sounding gay. LOLOL sorry Byunghun. Besides he is very sensitive because of something right? Plus he likes Hajin which makes him pretty much straight lol

Poor the girl whose father was shot in front of her eyes! Plus she is about my age now, I feel sad for her. It must be hard when one second you're talking to your dad and the next second he laid dead before your eyes. Bet the crazy citizen is jailed...... for life I hope. Besides, I thought it wasn't legal to own a gun? (from where I come from though)
Marianations #7
Chapter 4: Obrigada pelo capítulo ! Nós as duas aqui a falarmos de coisas quando eu devia estar a comentar a tua história HUL !
Esse rapazolas apaixonado... rapaz, rapaz... temos que sofrer ás vezes, sabias ? As coisas não podem ser sempre como nós queremos, darling.

Ó meu Deus pareço louca a comentar em português misturado com inglês XD

Obrigadaaaaaaaa !!!
Marianations #8
Ó caraças. Eu sei que devia ter comentado antes mas bem T.T
Estes dois tão a ficar mais e mais próximos cada dia ! São totalmente adoráveis, que posso dizer ? Mesmo assim, é uma pena que ela seja muda. Deveria ter outra oportunidade, pobre desgraçada !
E a mãe dele... T.T

Pobre mulher, ainda a sofrer...


Obrigada !
MayAndJune
#9
I am smiling throughout the last 2 chapters of this fanfic (since the first one is kind of an introduction(?) to the story). I actually found out this story when a reader promoted this fanfic on her blog post. So not regretting on clicking the link to this fic lol

I love the relation of Hajin and Byunghun, though it's just been 3 chapters and the closest they got is at the park when Hajin confronted Byunghun. Hajin seems to be a very beautiful girl, inside and out & Byunghun seems to be drawn by her. You did a great job in writing this fanfic, and I'm sure you'll do as great (or even better?) for the upcoming chapters.

You made me fell in love with this fanfic hahaha great job on that, especially I'm not a Teen Top fan. At all. :x and I voted too haha, I knew I just had to give my vote as soon as I finished readin the 3 chapters
caramelfrappucino
#10
Chapter 3: This story is soooo good! :D
Update soon please author nim~