PILLOW FIGHT P.2

A/N:Sup Everybody it asianrocker here! xD Recaps:Kiseop, who had been taking a bath in the shower, walked into the room only to have a pillow meet his face. Everyone froze. Uh-oh ______________________________________________ Kiseop:"YAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HOW THE FREAK DID THIS!!" *everyone pointed at Mary* Mary:"Hehe...I DID NOTHING WRONG!!" Kiseop:"Dont worry Mary im not made at you!" Mary:"Bwoh?why?" Kiseop :"You're just to adorable to be mad at." *pinch cheeks* Dongho:"YAH!!! My mary!!"*Went infront of Mary* Kibum:"Mary Sorry for my bands foolish behiavor . " Soohyun:"WE ARE NOT!!!!!" ______________________________________________ Hi guys sorry for the ate update! Hope you guys forgive me,So for the short story but i have to end here for now when i have free time ,because i start school tommrow ,SAVE ME!! -__-

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EXOEXOEXO88 #1 Jan 4, 2014 05:02:41

UKISS XD !!

yurifan14 #2 Sep 30, 2011 19:37:21

lol i dont understand this its like all over the place but i love my u-kiss

Chippy #3 Sep 9, 2011 21:08:48

CUTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! 
Update soon! <3

neverland #4 Mar 15, 2011 01:37:53

haha! the pillow fight? haha! NICE

asianrocker721 #5 Feb 23, 2011 17:57:07

thank you!!!

neverland #6 Feb 22, 2011 18:39:19

U Kiss fanfic eh? Cool!!!

asianrocker721 #7 Feb 22, 2011 18:33:35

hwaiting to you too!!!!!!

ShadowYin #8 Feb 22, 2011 18:10:56

A very short and sweet fanfic ^___^ 
Hwaiting~

PrinceAeu #9 Feb 21, 2011 12:10:32

LOL. I love how Kiseop acts before he thinks! He didn't even realize that the cookies would be steaming hot, since he wanted to eat them so much. XD U-Kiss's such a cute, amusing group here! Mary's an easy going kind of girl - I really like her~ Ahahaha, she and Kevin will be the ones who get along with the more childish ones! :D Kevin will take the legs, Mary will take the arms, and they will drag him out of the house to the park! I love how your chapters show so much with so little. <3 It's a good thing to be able to write like that! 
 
I don't have much to say for critique, especially since the writing format has noticably gotten easier to understand and read! :D Plus, there are the quotation marks, too, that indicates when a new person is speaking. Awesome! The most I can say is to use punctuation other than exclamation points and question marks, such as periods, colons, semicolons, and commas! Try to capitalize the first letter of the first word of a new sentence, too. Other than that, great! :D I'll be awaiting the next chapter rather eagerly~ <3 HWAITING! 
 
- Ae