When we met at home

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it all begins when SHINee becomes to tired from all the work and the manager gives them a few week break. they visit a special place with special girls, for special people... but what happens when the need to return?.... read and see.

Foreword

Sorry this is really my 1st and i know it ...i ppreciate any readers :D

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oliviardo #1
Chapter 5: your poster is fabulous! its so pretty! continue the story, because I think your central idea is interesting and should be expanded on. practicing and other's input is what gets you to good writing.
big-bang-SHINee-SNSD #2
Chapter 5: Update soon!
Kjerena #3
Chapter 5: What HaruSensei said about the plot is sort of true, I think. Who will she get entangled with? Maybe Jonghyun? Or Taemin?
But I like it! :D so PLEASE update!
PS: Raul is not her first love, right? The guy who they saw at the amusement park together with Jongyuns 'girlfriend'?
HaruSensei #4
These are just my opinions though. I hope it helps and if not, sorry :)
HaruSensei #5
Well hi! I read the story. I think the problem is the character introduction that you haven't done well. I'm pretty confused about what the plot even is about. There's not such a really clear setting either. Maybe you shouldn't change the font when you're trying to state the POV either but that's just my opinion.
kpoploverlee2 #6
SO, when I was reading this to my sis, and she said all this was uncoordinated...... can someone else give me their opinions
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