Color Coordinated Writing

Fanfiction Pet Peeves (Tips & How-to's)

Rant 17

Heyoo. Today's rant is going to be about color coordinated writing.. does that title even

make sense? Yeah.. err.. if you don't get it.. let me show you. 

Example: 

Blue - Donghae

Green - Yoona

Pink - Jessica

Orange - Eunhyuk

Yellow - Taeyeon

Purple - Leeteuk

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"But I don't want to.." He said, pouting & rolling his eyes. 

"You have to."

"Seriously?"

"Yes. He does."

"Leeteuk never wants to do anything, anyways."

"Not true."

"Yes, true."

"Yoona, aren't these guys a bit annoying?" Donghae questioned.

"Yes. Very. Now let's leave." Yoona grabbed Donghae's arm & walked out the door.


Can you guys imagine reading that? First off, my eyes hurt. Second, I had to scroll up the page every 6 seconds to look at the damn 'key' to see who was speaking, and it's just so annoying. etj.h.dfgoxkoil m,[jpr[p;[ UGH.

Oh.. and don't laugh.. I've been deprived of Super Generation fics this past week.. 

Anywho...

the bottom line is that no writer should ever do this. And no reader SHOULD EVER HAVE TO GO THROUGH THE SAME PAIN I DID.

(Did you see that? I even bolded & underlined the word 'pain.')

IF I SEE ANOTHER FIC LIKE THIS AROUND AFF...

      

     

- mooncake (Tiffany/Joonmyun's long lost secret lover.)

woah.. guise.. i'm a senior now. ^v^ bet you didn't know that. yuup. my life is pretty good right about now.

be jealous homie. oh! and i'm curious. how many of you guys have heard of or even like AOA? (Ace of Angels)

if you haven't heard of them, they're under the same label as FT ISLAND, CNBLUE and JUNIEL.

So yeah.. make sure you check them out. I absolutely love them. <3

I also love the new girl groups EVOL & EXID. Omfg they are so hot and BADASS.

did i mention HOT AND BADASS?

kbye..

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flytothesKAI
#1
Chapter 20: Totally WTF. please go back to school and take biology for god sake!! ><

I can never see food the same way as before gosh
EXOSeohyunShidae
#2
Chapter 15: Rant #15 I hate it when I see fanfics written like that.
LavenderAlisa19
#3
Chapter 7: "Did they rub a damn lamp three damn times and a damn genie came outta nowhere and granted them 3 damn wishes and one of them was to vanish from the damn story? Or what?! WHAT FRIGGIN' ELSE."

Ahahahaha! Had a good laugh at this xD and gotta love all the gifs that you guys included <3
KpopKeepsMeCrazy
#4
Chapter 21: Loki!! YEAH! I LOVE THE AVENGERS MOVIE~!!! *-*
wintermelody #5
Chapter 18: I HATE it when writers write a really good description thing, and then when you actually read the story, the grammar and spelling is disgraceful. I'm just like ASDFGHJKL GO BACK TO SCHOOL ALREADY! It annoys the hell out of me.
Mnetruinedmylife
#6
Chapter 21: This would probably tie in with the Mary-Sue chap, but I think it deserves its own mention-- stories where EVERY single member of a group falls in love with ONE girl. I especially see it in Super Junior and EXO fandom, like 12 guys in love with one perfect girl that understands them all...There are no words for this...and then to make it worse, all of the boya act out-of-character and backstab/fight with each other in order to get the girl, and then she makes some cliche declaration about not fighting each other and dates them all at the same time and nobody ever calls her a ____ because it's twoo luv >_>. Rant over, sorry about that, once I get started I dont stop.
Onepenny #7
Chapter 21: I have a slight visual impairment and some fonts just make me cry, and I mean this literally, as size 8 curly wurly script in a pastel colour burns my eyeballs. I hate it when I read a really good description in size 12 black arial and then chapter 1....bam!!! Bye bye eyeballs.

If the story seems worth it, I have been known to send a message to get the font changed. And god bless those who do. And screw those who don't!
cxsmicskies
#8
Chapter 17: May I rant here too? O3O

Oh well since we're talking about fan fiction pet peeves. I hate it when the story is just absolutely random when the plot line is so serious or if the twist is just so ____ing stupid. Like this one Big Bang story I read, the girl couldn't even defend herself in the first chapters then all of a sudden she's the mother ____ing best female gangster out there? It's just wrong or the author should've just foreshadowed the twist in some way so that we wouldn't be sitting here saying "WTF?"
ddilfany
#9
Chapter 11: I agree too, 'When it All Collapses' is one of my favorite fanfictions of all time! :) It's so beautifully written :)