Oh crap!

Our fate..

"Yah! Fany you know the name of the new nurse?" I questioned her. "I am older than you so if you have respect do you mind calling me Fany unnie or Tiffany shii?" "fine. Fine. Fanny unnie, do you the name??" "Sadly no." "WHAT!! You forced me to call you Unnie and you don't know?! You are so going to die Tiffany!" "Yah! As a friend, don't you at least forgive me once?" she pleaded, giving me her puppy looks. "Tiffany stop giving me your puppy looks, it is—so—" "So what?" "So cute that I have to forgive you." *sigh* ," I didnt knew that you were this cute you know mushroom!" we went into my brother room again. A girl was  standing beside him—my brother and she looks so 100% more prettier than me! Oh god, why are you unfair? When she saw us coming into the room, she bowed 90 degree and greeted us. "Anneyoung haseyo! I am Seohyun, a trainee nurse. I hope you can take care of me. Tiffany nudged at me and whispered ," Yah see see she is way more polite than you!"

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On the other hand, I was rooted to the ground. Am I hearing things wrongly? Did she just said that she is Seohyun?! The girl that broke my bestfriend's heart? " You are..Seohyun? Anyway nice to me you I am Choi Soo young!" I just slightly bowed and Fany nudged at me and whispered," yah have some manners when you are greeting! Seriously!" "Ne I am Seohyun is there anything wrong?" " of course there is! DUH! You just hurt my bestfriend and cause him to suside and now you asked me humph!" of course all this things, I just said it in my mind...

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"So Sooyoung why don't you guide her and she can help you with Kyu—" "No need!" I rejected as fast as I could. How could I ever let that girl to know that Kyuhyun is in this hospital unless I am an idiot!

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Seohyun pov

Was Dr Siwon mentioning about Kyu? Or was it my hearing problem? Why is that Sooyoung girl does not want me to help her?! 

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byunkeyk
#1
Chapter 10: Please update soon.
Va_asianloverz
#2
Chapter 10: please update soon
chosandy1
#3
Chapter 10: idiot kyuhyun, he just broke sooyoung heart. keep updating
haeraa
#4
@21diadems: yep, English is not my mother tongue. For spelling mistakes, sorry! Don't worry, you are not naggy! I know someone who is more naggy than you—my mother. (The word 'naggy' does not exist in dictionary) thanks for the compliment!! Anyway, since I updated, yours turn to update!!!
HelloPinkPlanet
#5
Chapter 10: yay! finally an update! X3
I think your writing got a lot better now, as you try to explain the situation a little more than you used to do.
But what I just noticed is...you have quite a few spelling mistakes and sometimes you're jumping between the tenses...It's probably because of English not being your mother tongue(?), but maybe you should let someone proofread your chapters?
I know that I'm making lots of spelling mistakes too and sometimes I overlook many of them by accident, so I might also look for a proofreader, but I think it would help the reader so that he doesn't get distracted so often while reading
*sighs*
I'm always just nagging...I'm sorry...
haeraa
#6
@21diadems: don't worry, your comment doesn't sound negative to me and I really happy that someone had pointed out my weak areas where I could improve on.. :D
@Chocolate_loves: there will be tons of kyuyoung moments but you just have to wait for this stupid author to update LOLzzz...
And lastly, I am sorry to say this I won't be able to update until October 3rd because of my exams and wish me good luck because in Singapore it is really important for us the primary schooler. Thx a lot and really for all my fellow readers! :D Mianhae but please support me and please try to understand mt bad English and bad writing. After all I am just a teenager. Thanks alot once again!! Oh holy ____! I had blurted out so much things!! So sorry!!! >.<|||
Chocolate_loves #7
Kyuyoung moments plz
Also longer chs plz
Update soon
HelloPinkPlanet
#8
nuuuuuu! >.< don't say this. I think your story is quite charming...and also...my stories are far away of being perfect...but as time goes by your writing style will improve, so don't think that your story isn't nice or the story of someone else is way better^^

and about this chapter...well...it's really short...but ok...mmmh...but it's a little...choppy? I don't know if you know what I mean but I think you should try writing out more so that the sentenced are more linked to each other...
Right now your story is more like a listing of the things that happen. Just try out linking them^^

mmmh...I'm really sorry if it sounds that negative, but I think this will help you improving your writing style. Cause after all the plot of the story is really good *thumbs up*
shanaa12
#9
ooh, short chappie -,-
haeraa
#10
Thx 21diadems but I think yours story are much more nicer! Mine is0.000000000000009%nice but yours 100% nice! —.— (V)