Our memories...

Our fate..

Sooyoung pov—

I want into Kyuhyun's room with apologetic smile on my face. "Really sorry for just now..but it is just not my fault you know...it is also yours..apology? Friends?" I asked him with my sweetest voice. "Sure why not being friends? I am also sorry for my outburst earlier as well..really sorry!" as he said, he held out his hands. "nice to meet you Cho Kyuhyun imida!" "Anneyoung Choi Soo young imida!" I introduced myself. "wait..wait..I have heard your name before...have we met before in random places and you know what this is my first time in this hospital..have you work in other hospital as well??" Kyuhyun asked me. "Ahh..no..this is my FIRST time working in a hospital and I....Kyuhyun..let's see.."I was deep in thought when, "Sooyoung you don't remember me?!! I am your childhood friend...we went to the same school, lives beside each other..Aissh..no wander I have heard your name before!" he grined at me and I then I suddenly remember him.."KYUHYUN Ahh!!where have you been? Why did you move away?! I misses you a lot during those times you know! How evil of you!" he gave me blank face. "look who is talking, you have FORGOTTEN me and you said you misses me?! Choi Sooyoung I wish I could kill you now!"he yelled. "Mianhae..how is Donghae oppa, Eunhyuk oppa and...." I trailed off not seeing Kyuhyun's expression. "you are asking me all about other boys EXCEPT me!!" Kyuhyun glared at me.."Opss but you look fine to me.."I replied back. And Kyuhyun gAve me a look of 'are-you-nuts-?' face...You know how it feels great when you found your best friends? It feel—so tremendous! Then something interrupted us...

knock..knock..

it was Fany..(Tiffany) "Youngiee Soory to interrupt your chit-chatting with your *ahem*" "Kyuhyunshii" "yes Kyuhyun, there is  new nurse..you are in charge of her, I guess?" "Ooo thanks Fany, I will be there soon!" I give her  a smile. I shrugged my shoulders and went out wandering who is the new nurse will be...

 

 

A/N: So update is here! Sorry for the late update! I definetly hate silent reader..cooments are Loved..subscription will make me happy.. ^.^

 

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byunkeyk
#1
Chapter 10: Please update soon.
Va_asianloverz
#2
Chapter 10: please update soon
chosandy1
#3
Chapter 10: idiot kyuhyun, he just broke sooyoung heart. keep updating
haeraa
#4
@21diadems: yep, English is not my mother tongue. For spelling mistakes, sorry! Don't worry, you are not naggy! I know someone who is more naggy than you—my mother. (The word 'naggy' does not exist in dictionary) thanks for the compliment!! Anyway, since I updated, yours turn to update!!!
HelloPinkPlanet
#5
Chapter 10: yay! finally an update! X3
I think your writing got a lot better now, as you try to explain the situation a little more than you used to do.
But what I just noticed is...you have quite a few spelling mistakes and sometimes you're jumping between the tenses...It's probably because of English not being your mother tongue(?), but maybe you should let someone proofread your chapters?
I know that I'm making lots of spelling mistakes too and sometimes I overlook many of them by accident, so I might also look for a proofreader, but I think it would help the reader so that he doesn't get distracted so often while reading
*sighs*
I'm always just nagging...I'm sorry...
haeraa
#6
@21diadems: don't worry, your comment doesn't sound negative to me and I really happy that someone had pointed out my weak areas where I could improve on.. :D
@Chocolate_loves: there will be tons of kyuyoung moments but you just have to wait for this stupid author to update LOLzzz...
And lastly, I am sorry to say this I won't be able to update until October 3rd because of my exams and wish me good luck because in Singapore it is really important for us the primary schooler. Thx a lot and really for all my fellow readers! :D Mianhae but please support me and please try to understand mt bad English and bad writing. After all I am just a teenager. Thanks alot once again!! Oh holy ____! I had blurted out so much things!! So sorry!!! >.<|||
Chocolate_loves #7
Kyuyoung moments plz
Also longer chs plz
Update soon
HelloPinkPlanet
#8
nuuuuuu! >.< don't say this. I think your story is quite charming...and also...my stories are far away of being perfect...but as time goes by your writing style will improve, so don't think that your story isn't nice or the story of someone else is way better^^

and about this chapter...well...it's really short...but ok...mmmh...but it's a little...choppy? I don't know if you know what I mean but I think you should try writing out more so that the sentenced are more linked to each other...
Right now your story is more like a listing of the things that happen. Just try out linking them^^

mmmh...I'm really sorry if it sounds that negative, but I think this will help you improving your writing style. Cause after all the plot of the story is really good *thumbs up*
shanaa12
#9
ooh, short chappie -,-
haeraa
#10
Thx 21diadems but I think yours story are much more nicer! Mine is0.000000000000009%nice but yours 100% nice! —.— (V)