Chapter 10

Our fate..

"Aissh...Seo jin Hyun look at what you are doing?!" Choi Sooyoung yelled wich startled the younger one. "Soo, Dont forget you are in hospital." Hyoyeon reminded. "But look at what she is doing! She is giving the patient the wrong medicinne which might lead to death!" Sooyoung yelled again. Seo hyun held her head low as she finds her face burning with embarrassment as the people started to stare at them.

"Soo that is enough!" reprimanded Tiffany. "Now, everyone is scolding me instead of her?! She is the one who is t the fault, HWANG TIFFANY!" Sooyoung yelled.

"Mia..mianhae.." Seohyun mumbled. "You are saying you are sorry to ME?! You should said to the patient not me!" Sooyoung rolled her eyes with annoyance. Although she understand that she was a bit too mean but what happened in the morning had really upset her. Especially that Cho Kyuhyun.

-FLASHBACK-

CRASH! "What was that?" Sooyoung wandered herself. She soon find herself attracted to the sound and find herself in Kyuhyun room. Sooyoung barged into the room and only to find herself starring at the shattered pieces of glass on the floor and some brownish liquid on the floor which she had guessed that it was tea for her best friend.

"What happened here?" Sooyoung asked while rolling her eyes. Seo jin hyun couldnt get anything right. She seemed to be breaking everything that she touches like it was a curse or something.

"Unnie, i am..very..sorry...i accidently broke the cup..."Seo hyun stuttered and for some reason she was very scared of the tall brunette standing in front of her.

"Soo, you dont need to scold her. I distracted her." Kyuhyun explained. Sooyoung once again rolled her eyes.

"I cant believe that there will be such a clumsy person as you are on this earth. You are not just a "Ms. heartbreaker" but also "Ms.Queen of Clumsy"?" Sooyoung said sarcasticlly as she eyed her "prey".

"CHOI SOOYOUNG! That is enough! I said it was MY fault, not HERS!" Kyuhyun yelled which causes Sooyoung to widen her eyes.

Since young, it had always be Choi Sooyoung who yelled at Cho kyuhyun. But today was different. It was because of her.

"you are a witch." Sooyoung glared at Seo hyun.

SLAP.

It left a red mark on what it was used to a white skin. Slience take over the room. No one spoke after Cho Kyuhyun had slapped his own bestfriend, Choi Sooyoung.

"Soo..I..am..so..sorry..i had no intention-" But kyuhyun was cut off by the loud bang of the door as sooyoung left the room.

Hatred and sadness overwhemled her as tears fall down one by one and she sat there on the spot--sobbing out loud.

Someone had just broke a newly repaired heart by just one simple swing of one hand.

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byunkeyk
#1
Chapter 10: Please update soon.
Va_asianloverz
#2
Chapter 10: please update soon
chosandy1
#3
Chapter 10: idiot kyuhyun, he just broke sooyoung heart. keep updating
haeraa
#4
@21diadems: yep, English is not my mother tongue. For spelling mistakes, sorry! Don't worry, you are not naggy! I know someone who is more naggy than you—my mother. (The word 'naggy' does not exist in dictionary) thanks for the compliment!! Anyway, since I updated, yours turn to update!!!
HelloPinkPlanet
#5
Chapter 10: yay! finally an update! X3
I think your writing got a lot better now, as you try to explain the situation a little more than you used to do.
But what I just noticed is...you have quite a few spelling mistakes and sometimes you're jumping between the tenses...It's probably because of English not being your mother tongue(?), but maybe you should let someone proofread your chapters?
I know that I'm making lots of spelling mistakes too and sometimes I overlook many of them by accident, so I might also look for a proofreader, but I think it would help the reader so that he doesn't get distracted so often while reading
*sighs*
I'm always just nagging...I'm sorry...
haeraa
#6
@21diadems: don't worry, your comment doesn't sound negative to me and I really happy that someone had pointed out my weak areas where I could improve on.. :D
@Chocolate_loves: there will be tons of kyuyoung moments but you just have to wait for this stupid author to update LOLzzz...
And lastly, I am sorry to say this I won't be able to update until October 3rd because of my exams and wish me good luck because in Singapore it is really important for us the primary schooler. Thx a lot and really for all my fellow readers! :D Mianhae but please support me and please try to understand mt bad English and bad writing. After all I am just a teenager. Thanks alot once again!! Oh holy ____! I had blurted out so much things!! So sorry!!! >.<|||
Chocolate_loves #7
Kyuyoung moments plz
Also longer chs plz
Update soon
HelloPinkPlanet
#8
nuuuuuu! >.< don't say this. I think your story is quite charming...and also...my stories are far away of being perfect...but as time goes by your writing style will improve, so don't think that your story isn't nice or the story of someone else is way better^^

and about this chapter...well...it's really short...but ok...mmmh...but it's a little...choppy? I don't know if you know what I mean but I think you should try writing out more so that the sentenced are more linked to each other...
Right now your story is more like a listing of the things that happen. Just try out linking them^^

mmmh...I'm really sorry if it sounds that negative, but I think this will help you improving your writing style. Cause after all the plot of the story is really good *thumbs up*
shanaa12
#9
ooh, short chappie -,-
haeraa
#10
Thx 21diadems but I think yours story are much more nicer! Mine is0.000000000000009%nice but yours 100% nice! —.— (V)