Fire !

I don't know where it goes

JR POV

I sat in the car next to Aron who was driving, Minhyun, Ren and Baekho sat in the couch on the back still talking and laughing about the Ice cream jokes.
I closed my eyes and enjoyed the moment.
‘Hey JR what do you think that was the most cute: Baekho or Ren with Ice cream?’
I laughed about that question ‘Definitely Ren.’ Ren smiled, he likes to get that kind of attention
We where almost home when we saw a dark gray smoke ‘That’s not good’ Said Aron while was looking really shocked.
When we came at the Dorm we've got the biggest shock ever: the dark smoke came from our dorm!
The dorm was on Fire!
‘Is everyone out the building’ I asked to a Fireman ‘we think so.’ he Answered
‘you think so? You think so??’ JR looked in panic. At that moment we heard our dog Fluffy barking, ‘Nooo Fluffy’ cried Ren.
I didn't think about how dangerous it was and I ran into the building I ignored the fireman who said it was too dangerous.
Inside the house was so much smoke that I hardly could see a thing.

 

Aron POV

I gave A hug to Ren who was Crying when I saw JR Running into the building. ‘Nooo JR’ Baekho shouted and he wanted to follow him. I pushed him back ‘I must go I have the most fire protective clothes on.’ I ran away while I was still talking.
Leaving Minhyun, Ren and Baekho worried behind me.
I could barely see a thing inside the building
‘JR! JR’ I shouted.
I heard nothing back
‘JR!!’ I tried again.
This was driving me insane, why isn't JR answering, where in the building could he be?
What if he's hurt.
What if….. I couldn't finish that thought
No……..
NO!
He isn't!
I ran through the house.
Suddenly I heard JR coughing and Fluffy barking|
He is still alive!
I ran towards the sounds.
I saw JR lying on the ground looking totally weak.
Fluffy his face ‘JR, JR what are you doing?’
‘I-I got out of breath’ he also sounded like he was out of breath.
At that moment I saw a part of the ceiling almost falling down above JR.
‘JR watch out!’ I shouted
JR tried to stand up, but I saw he would never make it in time.
I quickly grabbed his arms and I pulled him away
'Aaah!' yelled JR of the pain.
‘I'm sorry JR but I had to do that.’
And At that moment fell the part of the ceiling at the place where JR just lay 2 seconds ago.
JR looked shocked, ‘thanks for saving me, I wouldn't have make it in time.’
We looked around us.
Every where fire!
‘How can we get out?’ shouted JR in panic.
I lay next to him, hugging him tight.
We both cried
Until we saw someone come toward us…..

 

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sorry we didn't update for such a long time. But the new chapter is up now!!

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jamyung #1
Chapter 7: he fell alseep so cute
update soon
jamyung #2
Chapter 6: me love pizza too
update soon
this is wonderful
tang_swim26
#3
Chapter 4: update soon! and faster!
jamyung #4
nice she saw him again
update soon
jamyung #5
so sweet to her
update soon
hope they will get closer
jamyung #6
such a sweet fisrt chapter
update soon
love it
Missfifteen
#7
I Wanna hug too! ^^ cute and Interesting story~ I like it! Update soon