Where were you last night?

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Annyeong~!

This is my first proper fanfic to be published, so do me a favor, would ya n_____n? Be as honest as you can. As a beginner I need to know if something is a bit off. 

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* Characters *

You

YES, YOU. NOT AN ULZZANG GIRL. 

An 18 year old girl, living alone in an apartment. You've just graduated from high school and you're trying to get a job. Until you find something stable, you do random errands.

Hyuna

19 years old, your best friend. Basically the only one you still talk to on daily basis. Has alot of friends, likes to party. Although she doesn't know alot about history or maths, she is very experienced in life and relationships. 

Lay

A 20 year old guy with a golden heart and a calm personality. 

Sehun

18 years old. Seems to have a cold exterior, but once you get to know him, he is a very warm person.

Kai

18 years old. A mystery for everyone, holds alot of emotions inside. 

Chanyeol

19 years old. The moodmaker. Kind to everyone.

Kris

21 years of age. The down-to-earth guy. A great person to ask for advice.



/ Just in case. This is all fictional. These people probably are the opposite of this fic /

Foreword

The phone rang. I could bet on a hundred bucks that it was Hyuna. By the ringtone I could tell that it had been ringing for a while also, so I did my best to pick up before she gives up. Only then did I realize that I hadn’t cleaned the apartment for a while due to having to jump over all different kinds of things on the floor. „Yes, Hyuna, I’m alive and I’m not trying to ignore you, what’s up?“ I quickly asked while thinking that talking faster than normally would prevent her from hanging up. Hyuna seemed to be anxious. „Yah! It’s already been an hour, shouldn’t we meet soon? The bars will be packed in no time!“ she basically yelled. On that night we were going to celebrate my half-birthday. We always found reasons to party. I was turning 18 and a half. „Just give me a few minutes, I’ll call you when I’m leaving the building“ I responded and hung up so I wouldn’t waste any more time. I’d already done my make up and everyting else. I just forgot myself browsing the web. After quickly grabbing my bag and having a final look at my make-up, I left, ran to the bus-stop while almost missing my last bus and headed towards the city. I really hoped that it’s going to be one of the cool, memorable nights. 

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dreamshop
#1
author-nim... the foreword seems nice though. I hope you will update?
panzym
#2
Chapter 37: It's your story so you should do what you feel is best, but I personally like the back and forth drama of the plot. Since you keep questioning whether it's worth it to keep going or not, maybe you could end it in a chapter or two? But it's totally up to you in the end and I'd personally like you to keep going! It's just that if you're tired of the story or don't know what to do with it, no one can help that. My two cents ^_^
abcdezza
#3
Chapter 37: NO. DON'T YOU EVEN DARE STOP WRITING. You killed Luhan then you're gonna leave it hanging like that?! ;AAAA; Don't stop, continue writing and make the main lead happy because I'm not all in for sad endings. Jebal. ;AAAA; fightingg!
abcdezza
#4
Chapter 33: oh my god why did you kill luhan?!?!? ;AAAAA; GOD DAMMIT WAEEEE w
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Wolley
#5
Chapter 36: Aish..... Seriously you poodle D: making me cry at school and all D: don't stop writing I need to know how it ends (btw I vote Chanyeol)
Malioo #6
Chapter 36: The thing with the liquor was kinda sweet :)
Thanks for the update! I hope she can let Luhan go someday...
I would want her to end up with Chanyeol it just feels right for me..however I wob't mind with your decision after all you are the author and know the characters the most!
All i want ist that she isn't confused anymore about her feelings and the other boys can also get over her :D
panzym
#7
Chapter 36: Daww thank you so much!! Even if you would've written more anyway, it's nice to be acknowledged ^_^
And dang, what a chapter! Still super depressing, but I'm glad Kai and the rest of the boys were there to help her through. I hope she won't be delusional anymore!