The Promenade

Description

 

Jaejoong and Choi Sooyoung were said to be the perfect couple back in the High School. Though after what the others think about their relationship, they still know within themselves that theirs was not as perfect as the others thought. They argue, make up and sometimes have fights with each other, though they still try their very best to keep their relationship and it becomes stronger in each passing day. Well, not until prom.

 

“You were the best thing that ever happened in my life!”

“I’m sorry, but I can’t do this anymore.”

“Will you wait for me?”

“I.. I will always love you ‘till the my last breath.”

 

CHARACTERS:

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CHOI SOOYOUNG

 

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KIM JAEJOONG

Foreword

 

 

It was senior year when everything fell apart. I didn’t know what happened, I myself can’t believe upon hearing what she’s saying myself.

“I can’t do this anymore. I’m sorry oppa.” Was all she ever said to me and I feel my world suddenly shattered. On the most important day of our lives, graduating high school, she went to me and said those words.

“But why? What happened and you want to break up with me? What did I do to make you want to do this to me? Worst of all, why is it has to be graduation day?” I said as I hold her face up and make it face me.

“I don’t think this will work out. You, studying at Cambridge, while I’ll stay here. I can’t see myself committed to someone whose far away from me.” Sooyoung said as she looks at me, tears falling in her eyes. “I’m..I’m sorry oppa.” She said and looks down.

“So, you just decided it on your own without even discussing these things to me? What about me Sooyoung? Haven’t you even tried to think if I want what you want to happened?” I said and hold her hand. “I can’t do this Sooyoung. I won’t allow you to break up with me.” I said with tears flowing unstop in my face. I don’t care if my toga is wet.

“I’m sorry oppa.. I just did.” She said, wiping her tears away and look up at me. “I’m going now.” She said and went off.

 

 

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Annyong~! :)) this is baboiefrelin with my newest fanfiction..:) I know that I haven't finished anything yet but I'll really try my best to update and finish all of them in due time..:)

Anyhow, please support my newest fanfiction "THE PROMENADE". I posted this one last year but I haven't started it yet..

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Leonitatic #1
Chapter 9: Great story. But it seems like you have to update soon. Merry Xmas!:)
Leonitatic #2
Chapter 3: Just opened the story and just started to read. Read first and then comment. Thanks!?
K-SoulHeart #3
Chapter 9: update soon pretty plz^3^
ohMySoo
#4
Chapter 9: KYAA! The feels >< OMG this chap sends butterflies to my stomach.^^ I like how Soo looks Jae straight in the eyes. <3 I burst from this chap! Everything revealed. Lol I think SooJae will be happy ^^ Thanks for updating! <3
KreaseSYeol
#5
Chapter 9: KYAAAAAH! SooJae <3
DearTalullah #6
Chapter 9: You update! I can almost cry of joy T.T thank you thank you....
ohMySoo
#7
Chapter 8: haha I can picture the choking Soo XD kyaaa!! The cliffhanger! aish! Why now? Oh please update soon. I really love both characters from their perspective group, they are my biases ^^
ohMySoo
#8
Chapter 7: I love both main characters! Please continue on writing about Soo and Jae! ^^ they are my most bias in the world of kpop.
CharmingSmile
#9
Hahaha! As promised. I've subscribed. Hehehe! Now it's time for the comment. You have a good story line there. Continue with this amazing drama fanfiction. When a writer writes, they must have a sincere heart and mind. Oh, I think it's better for you to use different size and add colour for POVs and flashbacks. It's just my suggestion. Great job!! Hwaiting!!!