The Beginning

Love In The Snow ( LONGER VERISON)

 ~sorry for any grammar mistakes

               

(6:00 a.m) ~joo chan point of view~      

      “ Neon nareul weonhae, neon naege bbaiyeo, neon naege micheyo, he enonal su esobse, I got you under my skin, neon –“

    “okay! I got it phone it’s time to wake up” I said as I turned off the alarm

   “Damn, I’m still sleepy” I thought to myself as I tied my hair in a messy pony tail.

 I opened the door to the bathroom and grabbed my toothbrush. I put toothpaste on it and began to brush my teeth while I looked at the mirror.

                My name is park Joochan and I am 18 years old. But where I am staying at now I am 19 years old.  Begin one year older is awesome, isn’t it? But strange at the same time. Anyways, I’m from England but I have traveled to South Korea, Seoul. I wanted to explore a new place, even though it’s not cheap. My plans are to stay here for four months. Since I’m going to be freshmen in university in the fall of 2011. I mean I could stay here longer but I have no reason because I don’t know anyone in South Korea.

                I already got accepted to the University of Cambridge in England, UK. But I thought of taking a gap year to visit the place my umma was born in. I thank my umma because she has made my life here easier because she taught me how to write, speak, and read Korean since I was a little girl. So I was able to get a job and I already knew I would have to get a job once I got here. But now I having working two jobs for a month because I didn’t expect things to be this expensive.

                My umma and appa would have sent my money but I didn’t want to bother them. If only they knew I was working to jobs they would disapprove of this. So I didn’t tell them because I wanted to do something on my own even if it was hard and tiring.

                During the day I work as a waiter in a bar. But don’t get the wrong idea because I don’t work as a dirty kind of waiter, if you know what I mean. Then in the night I work at another bar. The two jobs are great and everyone has been very friendly with me. Even though, girls around me only talk about some group named DBSK; I mean they are really big fans of them and sometimes it could get annoying.

                But I have to admit that they do have talent and I wish I know more about them. Although I don’t have time to be thinking about idols, so I asked one of the girls that works with me to if she could download their songs into my phones. Now I use one of the songs as my alarm, I believed that it is called “Mirotic”, it is really catchy.

                Well, in South Korea it is winter, which means it is snow time. I’m still to get used to the weather because it is extremely colder than it is in England during winter.

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(4:30 p.m)

“Okay, Ms. Lee my shift is over, so I am going to change now okay” I said

“Yes, sweetie go ahead and change, you did a great job today” responded Ms.lee

(locker room)

1…26…86  * I made Jae Joong B-day her combo for her locker lol

                Okay now I need to change to go and get something to eat. Then I will pick up my cleaned uniform at my apartment and go to my second job. I don’t know if I will be able to go on for another 3 months like this. I already feel so exhausted.

(after eating & etc, towards the ending of her night shift) (11:25 p.m)

“Barami momun gu shigan jocha naegen nomu mo jarangol hanbone miso majimak insa saranghaminda gu del

Shigane jichodo sarang-e apado gu shigan jocha chuogigo majimak insal haneyo

Saranghaminda saranghaminda

Fly away, fly away love, fly away, fly away love

Fly away, fly away love, fly away, fly away love

Neseng-e dan hanbone sarang-a ahyoung” * for those who don’t know the song it is Insa by hero

 Audience: clap, clap, clap, clap,clap

“Thank you everyone, have a good night” I vocalized as I bowed down to the audience.

“You did a good performance, who knew you had such a phenomenal voice and you picked the right song to end with because everyone loved you. Even if it was a sad song” commented Mrs. Park

“Well, I am glad they loved the song but my throat hurts too much from singing” I uttered

“Joo Chan you should take a cab home because it is snowing like crazy out there”

“Yes, Mrs. Park I will change now” I responded

(locker room)   

                Well, I am going to walk home in this coldness because I could really use the taxi money for something else.

(Jae Joong pov) (11:43 p.m)

“Guys I don’t want to go home yet~” I said as we were in the car heading home.

“Hyung! You are still not exhausted after our performance tonight?” asked changmin

“Nope! In fact I actually want to have some fun, you guys in?” I asked

“Jae Joong you know I will go with you anywhere but I got to film Sungkyunkwan Scandal  early in the morning” replied Micky yoochun

“How about the rest of you guys?”

“No, thanks too tired” the rest answered.

“Araso, I will go by self then. Manager hyung could you drop off at the house and then could you please drop me off 8 blocks from the dorm?” I asked

“ Araso” said manager hyung

(in front of the house)

“Jae Joong-ah would you be okay by yourself?” asked Yunho in concern.

“yes, don’t worry if anything you will be the first I call okay”

“araso” yunho asserted

“bye bye” said the guys together.

(11:55 p.m)

“hyung you could leave me here, I am going to be at the bar across the street” I claimed

“Araso. Don’t drink too much, don’t do anything that could stir up a scandal, and please! Don’t be so late home even if you have no schedule tomorrow” said manager hyung

“Araso, bye bye hyung!”

“araso, take care Jae Joong”

                I waited for the van to leave and then I started to cross the street. When all of a sudden I saw a girl collapsed on the snow in front of the bar. So I ran to her as quickly as possible.

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striped-cat #1
Chapter 1: i was brought here by the promoted short version!
lanternofhair #2
ahh!!
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SONELF101586
#3
Like the story~
kikichai
#4
annyeong! i love you story, update soon? ^^
EastSeaFishy_lover #5
The story is great please update soon
creatingfaith #6
liking the story already<br />
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ms_yeolliepop
#7
hi~!!<br />
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just read yesterday Love In The Snow (Short Ver.) ....<br />
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and i TOTALLY LOVED IT!!!!!<br />
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hahaha... it's a good thing you made a Longer one!!!!<br />
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Hope you update soon~!!! :)))