Inspired Corrections Review Shop (Closed)

Description

I am back and taking requests again :)

Struggling with your grammar? Puzzled by your own plot? Or rather just looking for some feedback when the comments don't cut it?

Well, you have come to the write place. Here I will tear you down, beat your writing to a pulp and spit you out the other side a better writer and possibly a better person. At least, one who has grown a bit of a spine.

About Me:

I'm a University student in the good old U.S. of A. I've been writing for about a year and a half now and now that I have gained a bit of knowledge about the breadth of literature (dare I call it that) here on AFF, I feel as though assitance may be needed. If you are doubting whether or not I can actually write, go read a few of my stories. Just not the old ones, they .

Groups I Like: Super Junior, SHINee, Big Bang, SNSD, f(x), 4minute, 2ne1, Tablo, Se7en, b2st, EXO, B.A.P, B1A4, Block B, Boyfriend, BTOB, Infinite, Nu'est, Teen Top

I don't have biases or OTP's. I will generally ship anybody with anybody.

I'm really not as mean as I come off in this description.

Rules:

1. I love rules, so you have to follow them.

2. Be nice. It is my job to be cruel and with all due respect, you asked for it. (I'm not really going to be mean, just critical. So please don't mix up the two.)

3. Rated stories will be accepted. I highly doubt you will scare me with something, I have read it all (as soon as I say this somebody is going to scare the living daylights out of me).

4. I will read /yuri/het pairings, I do not care.

5. I will only accept one-shots and two-shots.

6. No or mpreg or gender swap (I have nothing against transgender, but these are actual people so to turn a guy into a girl or vice versa when they aren't is just insulting to their identity). Come on guys, these are just freaking wrong.

7. BE PATIENT!

To Request:

Comment below with your AFF username and a link to your story. I will only review completed stories, so make sure it is done before you comment! If not, chances are I'll forget about it.

Foreword

Table of Contents:

Chapter 1: Rubric

Chapter 2: How, Sungjonggie Oppa? -ashhhwx3

Chapter 3: All That's Left of Him -dancesingkpop

Chapter 4: Moments I Don't Forget to Remember-Kpossible21

Chapter 5: Lingering Letters-aintyoufunny

Chapter 6: Second Ride-missterious

Comments

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missterious
#1
omg you're a superhero, you actually got it done before leaving! thanks so much!!!

will post a link back and comments on the fic itself that you can (hopefully?) look forward to reading when you get back from your trip!
missterious
#2
hi there!

AFF Username:missterious
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/163667/2/ (part of a series of one-shots, all-missTER pairings ... i know, i know..who the heck is missTER, right?)
aintyoufunny
#3
I understand what you mean...
Kind of hoped to hear the overall thoughts on the story. I guess I forgot that you had a rubric to go by T.T I understand your scoring, though, and I don't disagree with it.
I wanted to find a way to improve the story, I guess. Or I dunno... make it a little more enjoyable and realistic. But, yeah, I forgot you had to judge every single aspect that my story - a oneshot without a real plot - wouldn't really contain.

But either way, thanks ^^ I understand your review :)
aintyoufunny
#4
Hello!

AFF Username: aintyoufunny
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/143874/i-still-care-oneshot-angst-kibum-oneshot-superjunior-bandfic

It's a oneshot, Kibum-centric. ^^ Thank you <3
KimPossible21 #5
Hi, thank you so much for the review :)
Yes, I purposely didnt say anything much about the father because the oneshot is about motherhood. I also wanted someone who hasnt read the original story to review it because I want to know a difderent perspective. The explanation about where her father is is on the origina story xD u can check it out if u want. lol this is like advertising, but I mean if u're curious xD

Oh the tenses seem alright to u? That's good xD I was worried. English is my 2nd language, so yea I'm trying to write it as accurate as I could xD I will go through it again to find the spelling mistakes.

What do u call nappies in America? XD
Oh thank God, somebody finally appreciates the fact that I've brought out the woman in Amber!! >_> 

I will credit u when I get on my laptop.
KimPossible21 #6
AFF Username: KPossible21
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/160562/

I think I have problems with my tenses. I wasn't sure whether I should keep some sentences in the past tense because it's still happening in the present, so I put them in present tense. It would be great if you could help with this.
Thank you in advance :)
dancesingkpop
#7
thank you
euisgelo
#8
"I have read it all" when you said 'all', you meant 'all'? 'cause I could come up with something that makes people pop their eyes out :D
I just ask for future reference when I really need feed back for my crazy stuffs.
GaijinLoser
#9
Thank you so much!!!! ^^
I will credit you in my foreword!