omg you're a superhero, you actually got it done before leaving! thanks so much!!!

will post a link back and comments on the fic itself that you can (hopefully?) look forward to reading when you get back from your trip!

hi there!

AFF Username:missterious
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/163667/2/ (part of a series of one-shots, all-missTER pairings ... i know, i know..who the heck is missTER, right?)

I understand what you mean...
Kind of hoped to hear the overall thoughts on the story. I guess I forgot that you had a rubric to go by T.T I understand your scoring, though, and I don't disagree with it.
I wanted to find a way to improve the story, I guess. Or I dunno... make it a little more enjoyable and realistic. But, yeah, I forgot you had to judge every single aspect that my story - a oneshot without a real plot - wouldn't really contain.

But either way, thanks ^^ I understand your review :)

Hello!

AFF Username: aintyoufunny
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/143874/i-still-care-oneshot-angst-kibum-oneshot-superjunior-bandfic

It's a oneshot, Kibum-centric. ^^ Thank you <3

Hi, thank you so much for the review :)
Yes, I purposely didnt say anything much about the father because the oneshot is about motherhood. I also wanted someone who hasnt read the original story to review it because I want to know a difderent perspective. The explanation about where her father is is on the origina story xD u can check it out if u want. lol this is like advertising, but I mean if u're curious xD

Oh the tenses seem alright to u? That's good xD I was worried. English is my 2nd language, so yea I'm trying to write it as accurate as I could xD I will go through it again to find the spelling mistakes.

What do u call nappies in America? XD
Oh thank God, somebody finally appreciates the fact that I've brought out the woman in Amber!! >_> 

I will credit u when I get on my laptop.

AFF Username: KPossible21
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/160562/

I think I have problems with my tenses. I wasn't sure whether I should keep some sentences in the past tense because it's still happening in the present, so I put them in present tense. It would be great if you could help with this.
Thank you in advance :)

thank you

"I have read it all" when you said 'all', you meant 'all'? 'cause I could come up with something that makes people pop their eyes out :D
I just ask for future reference when I really need feed back for my crazy stuffs.

Thank you so much!!!! ^^
I will credit you in my foreword!

Username:dancesingkpop
link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/178286/all-that-s-left-of-him-oneshot-eunhyukbreakup