Deltha Powered

Hipnotist who Hypnotized
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JR opened the door harshly, he carrying Ren’s body. His come make all servants and maids panicked nor nana who saw Ren fainting. “What happen?”, asked Nana. “Shut up, called doctor now”, JR said to Nana. Nana pout but she obeyed him now, she immediately called the doctor. JR put Ren’s body on the bed, he wipe Ren’s sweat.

‘What happen with him?’, that’s question still spinning in JR’s brain.

The doctor finally arrived, he immediately checked Ren who fell limp on the bed. But oddly, there is nothing wrong with Ren’s health. Doctor say Ren only exposed to anemia but JR felt the other, he feared that this has to do with his eye and his power. JR said thanks to the doctor and wait until Ren conscious.

1 hour passed…

Ren opened his eyes slowly, gathering all his energy. He tried to sit up and look around. He stopped to see JR who was slept next him. JR apparently accompanied him. ‘He’s really my best friend’, thought Ren. Nana came up. “Whaa”, she smiled after see Ren has awake. She was immediately struck JR’s head with book, made him gasped and woke. “Ouch!”, JR shouted rubbing his head but he look at Ren and hug him tight. “Hey, move away, you’re heavy”, Ren said pushed JR slowly. “Here is the porridge, just for you”, Nana said and put that on the table. JR just silent and look at Ren who eat the porridge. “Is there anything wrong with your eyes?”, asked JR. “I just felt a knife stab in to my eyes”, Ren said. “Really?”, JR asked. Ren nodded. “Don’t worry, I’m okay”, Ren said. “I just realized, you never smiled or even laugh”, JR said. “Yeah, no one is funny here”, Ren said coldly. “Geez”, JR upset and made Ren’s hair messy.

‘Is his power become worse?’,

-0-

2 Days Later…

Ren wear his shoes and clap his hands. “Where do you want to go?”, Nana asked, she using a masker. “Damn you, you scared me”, Ren said hold his chest. “Tsk, don’t be late since JR not here, I’m the one who need to protect you”, Nana said puffed her check. JR was in Japan now, such a busy rich young master. “Okay, nana”,  Ren said with ‘okay’ sign and left. He really wanted to walk around Seoul but he can’t so he just walked around the street near JR’s house. He looked around and want to eat dd

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reyaakoh
#1
Chapter 18: But this one can still stay. Its a good BL story
JoshuaJHong
#2
Chapter 18: Here's my overall comment.

1. Thank you for writing this story! I really love Minren and it made me so happy to see someone write something new for them.
2. It took me a while to finish because I noticed that your first language isn't English. Which is completely fine!!! I just had a harder time following your story.
3. Don't give up writing, if you enjoy it keep working on it.
JoshuaJHong
#3
Chapter 4: Aron, your friend is a thief too! Stop this! Lolol. This has been cute so far, I can't wait to finish!
JoshuaJHong
#4
Chapter 2: Okay, they have esclated pretty quickly, which is nice! I'm excited to see when Ren will fall for our Minhyun!!
JoshuaJHong
#5
Chapter 1: Thank you SO MUCH
FOR WRITING MY OTP, I LOVE THEM TOGETHER
AHHH, MINHYUN IS ALREADY FALLING FOR REN
I CANT WAIT FOR REN TO FALL FOR MINHYUN
amenguyen007 #6
Hello.
Nice to meet you. My name is Amelia and I'm MinRen shipper. I want to ask you something about this fanfic.
First, I've read all of this and was totally impressed by the story. Therefore, I want to translate it into Vietnamese for the V-MinRen shippers read it.
Would you mind letting me translate your fanfic into Vietnamese?
I promise to give full credit and the link to your fanfic whenever I post it to my wattpad account.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Amelia.
Yara-chan #7
Chapter 17: Aaaish!!i really wanted some ya know=3=
But the story is amazing anyways:)
Thank u <3
stanwendy
#8
Chapter 2: Interesting story~
aung-aung22 #9
Chapter 9: How old Nana is?