It's Not a Happy End

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Ren fell to the ground, his stomach full of blood. Minhyun’s eyes widened and hold Ren’s body. “ YOU! KAHI!”, yelled Doyun didn’t want Ren to died. “I’m sorry”, Kahi said trembling because Doyun’s eyes so scary that’s change to ruby red now. “I will kill you!”, Doyun yelled make Kahi scared and run away. “REN!”, Minhyun’s eyes started teary. “I’ll be back to get him”, Doyun said and disappeared.

“Ren! Hey! Ren!”, Minhyun yelled patted Ren’s cheek.

“Mi-Minhyun, a-are you o-okay?”, asked Ren with a pale face. “Hang on Ren! JR will come! Please”, Minhyun hug Ren tightly.

“I-I hope I c-can”, Ren hit Minhyun’s chest after that collapse.

“REN!!!”

Hospital…

Ren’s POV:

‘Where am i?’, asked me where I tried to open my eyes. “R-Ren?”, someone called my name.

His face still blur, I blinked my eyes two times. “Bae-Baekho?”, I said. Baekho smiled. “JR, Minhyun he already conscious”, he called JR and Minhyun.

‘Minhyun?’, why I keep blushing after hear his name. They came in, JR looked so worried and suddenly he hug me. “Ren, are you okay?”, he asked. I just nodded and pushed him slowly. “Minhyun”, I called him. He turned away to face me.

“Thank you”, I said. Minhyun furrowed his brow, I think he’s blushing. “No No..i’m sorry, because of me she shoot you”, he said nervously. I chuckled.

‘Oh? Am I smiled before?’,

End

Seeing Ren laughed. JR, Aron, Baekho and Minhyun silence.

“You can smile”, Baekho said happily. “So cute”, tease Aron. JR just coughed while Minhyun’s face became really red. Ren just turned away didn’t care of their reaction, he suddenly quiet and look down.

“Ren?”, asked JR. “I’m sorry”, Ren said looked at Baekho, JR, Aron and Minhyun one by one. “Why you keep apologizing?”, asked JR pissed.

“Because of me, all of you in danger”, Ren said. “Yah! Don’t ever say that again”, JR yelled. Ren shocked and keep looked down. “JR right, we are willing to help you”, Aron said. “We are family”, Baekho continued and smile. Minhyun just nodded didn’t know what to say.

“I know that and for you I’ll make my eyes blind”, Ren said tried to gouging out his eyes. “REN!!”, shouted all of them. Minhyun bit his lower lips, he can’t held his anger and slapped Ren’s cheek very hard.

Ren paused and hold his cheek. JR, Aron and Baekho look at Minhyun with widened eyes.

“Stop saying your fate isn’t good, stop wanted to blind, stop blame your self, stop apologizing!!”, Minhyun yelled. Ren look startled and he start to cry.

“You still have perfect body and live at a good place! Don’t you think people out there? Who ar

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reyaakoh
#1
Chapter 18: But this one can still stay. Its a good BL story
JoshuaJHong
#2
Chapter 18: Here's my overall comment.

1. Thank you for writing this story! I really love Minren and it made me so happy to see someone write something new for them.
2. It took me a while to finish because I noticed that your first language isn't English. Which is completely fine!!! I just had a harder time following your story.
3. Don't give up writing, if you enjoy it keep working on it.
JoshuaJHong
#3
Chapter 4: Aron, your friend is a thief too! Stop this! Lolol. This has been cute so far, I can't wait to finish!
JoshuaJHong
#4
Chapter 2: Okay, they have esclated pretty quickly, which is nice! I'm excited to see when Ren will fall for our Minhyun!!
JoshuaJHong
#5
Chapter 1: Thank you SO MUCH
FOR WRITING MY OTP, I LOVE THEM TOGETHER
AHHH, MINHYUN IS ALREADY FALLING FOR REN
I CANT WAIT FOR REN TO FALL FOR MINHYUN
amenguyen007 #6
Hello.
Nice to meet you. My name is Amelia and I'm MinRen shipper. I want to ask you something about this fanfic.
First, I've read all of this and was totally impressed by the story. Therefore, I want to translate it into Vietnamese for the V-MinRen shippers read it.
Would you mind letting me translate your fanfic into Vietnamese?
I promise to give full credit and the link to your fanfic whenever I post it to my wattpad account.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Amelia.
Yara-chan #7
Chapter 17: Aaaish!!i really wanted some ya know=3=
But the story is amazing anyways:)
Thank u <3
stanwendy
#8
Chapter 2: Interesting story~
aung-aung22 #9
Chapter 9: How old Nana is?