I Loose My Mind

Hipnotist who Hypnotized
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“REN!”, Minhyun shouted while he ran down chase the bank robber.

The robber running with a bag of money and still directs a gun to every customer, make them fear. Minhyun ducked when the robbers shot. Baekho who use hearing devices and follow Aron’s instruction chase from the front, making the robber panicked and pulled out a knife.

Suddenly Ren came out of nowhere. “REN!”, Shouted Minhyun and Baekho shocked, the thief managed to scratch Ren’s cheek make  the blood come out. Ren pissed off and give him a deep stare, he can’t avoid Ren’s eyes and he faint.

Baekho quickly arrested and handcuffed the robber’s hand. Minhyun touch Ren’s cheek, provide tissue in an attempt to stop the blood flowing. Ren ignore him. “Are you okay?”, Minhyun asked. Ren just nodded and take the tissue from Minhyun’s hand, wipe his blood. “Mission complete”, Aron said.

After that incident this already a week, Ren became a police and catch many criminals with his power. Finally, he getting closer with them but Ren never smile or laughed. He never do that too while he with JR. Today, Ren just lied on the bed didn’t know what to do and to lazy. Minhyun still curious and search Choi family’s new address.

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 “Ah! I already read until pages 700 but nothing”, JR explode and throw the book. “I already reached pages 1005 but same with you”, Aron said who read an half. “Hoahm, it’s crazy”, Baekho mumbled while he wipes his eyes. “Let’s take a rest now”, JR said and he leaned back against the wall and then sleep. Baekho and Aron looked at JR. “He might be tired”, Baekho said. “Yeah, he do that for Ren”, Aron mumbled. “He love Ren?”, Baekho asked. Aron nodded. “Triangle love?”, Baekho chuckled. “Yeah”, Aron nodded with his hand on his hips.

Ren finally out from his shared room. “Oh, already awake?”, Baekho asked. Ren nodded. “Where’s JR?”, he asked. “Sleep”, Aron said. “How about Minhyun?”, asked Baekho. “I don’t know, he still looked at his phone like an abnormal”, Ren said. They laughed.

Suddenly Minhyun rushed out from the room. “Where do you want to go?”, asked Baekho. “I’ll be back!”, Minhyun shouted and slam the door. “See? He’s weird”, Ren said and grab a towel, he want to take a shower now. “I guess Minhyun found something”, Baekho said looked at Ren. Ren just shrugged his shoulder and get in the bathroom.

Minhyun arrive at the big dormitory at Incheon. He goes in and asked the receptionist. “Excuse me? Is Choi family live here?”, Minhyun asked. “Ah, Choi family? Yes, they are here”, She said. “May I know what room?”, Minhyun asked again. “Do you have an appointment?”, She asked. Minhyun shook his head. “I’m sorry, if there’s no appointment we can’t tell the number and floor of their room”, she said. Minhyun nodded, disappointed.

Not the suspect, the woman came from shopping with her husband and met the eye with Minhyun.

“Annyeonghaseyo”, Minhyun said. ‘What a great time’, though Minhyun happily. “You? What are you doing here?”, She asked. “Who is he?”, the husband asked. “He really wanted to know about Minki”, she said in disgust.

‘Minki? So her child name Choi Minki?’, Minhyun paused and tried to memorizing that name.

The husband looked angry. “Go away now”, He said. “I’m sorry, but why you hate your child?”, Minhyun tried to asked. “None of your business, he already passed away so leave now”, he said again. “Because of his power?”, Minhyun asked he was irritated by the words of this irresponsible parents.  “Yes! So leave now!”, He said in angry. “Excuse me”, Minhyun pissed off and left.

“Hatchuuu!”, Ren sneezing. ‘Looks like there was a talk about myself’, though Ren wipe his nose.

‘I’ve found this already’, Minhyun walked back to home.

He stopped when he felt someone watching him, he looking around but no one there.

 ‘What are my feelings?’, Minhyun though and get in to the dorm. His feeling is right, someone smirking on him somewhere.

Minhyun open the door slowly. “Where have you been?”, Ren asked while he hold a pillow. “None of y-your business”, Minhyun said. “You still nervous when you talked with me, do you like me, huh?”, Ren asked harshly.

Minhyun take out a breath and facing Ren. Ren just look at him and waiting for his reaction. “Yes, Choi Minki”, Minhyun said he dare to met the eye with Ren. Ren eyes started widened while he heard Minhyun called his real name.

“Oh, Why did you know my real name?”, Ren asked he feel boiling. “Why? Are you angry, Choi Minki?”, Minhyun asked.

‘Damn, what came over my mouth?’, Minhyun though it will hurt Ren. Ren still give Minhyun a death glare. “Just once I say this, listen, I fell in love with you, Choi Minki”, Minhyun’s heart beating so fast now neither than Ren. But Ren’s angry now, he really hate because Minhyun called his real name but he feel happy because Minhyun said if he love him.

“So you finally fall in love with

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reyaakoh
#1
Chapter 18: But this one can still stay. Its a good BL story
JoshuaJHong
#2
Chapter 18: Here's my overall comment.

1. Thank you for writing this story! I really love Minren and it made me so happy to see someone write something new for them.
2. It took me a while to finish because I noticed that your first language isn't English. Which is completely fine!!! I just had a harder time following your story.
3. Don't give up writing, if you enjoy it keep working on it.
JoshuaJHong
#3
Chapter 4: Aron, your friend is a thief too! Stop this! Lolol. This has been cute so far, I can't wait to finish!
JoshuaJHong
#4
Chapter 2: Okay, they have esclated pretty quickly, which is nice! I'm excited to see when Ren will fall for our Minhyun!!
JoshuaJHong
#5
Chapter 1: Thank you SO MUCH
FOR WRITING MY OTP, I LOVE THEM TOGETHER
AHHH, MINHYUN IS ALREADY FALLING FOR REN
I CANT WAIT FOR REN TO FALL FOR MINHYUN
amenguyen007 #6
Hello.
Nice to meet you. My name is Amelia and I'm MinRen shipper. I want to ask you something about this fanfic.
First, I've read all of this and was totally impressed by the story. Therefore, I want to translate it into Vietnamese for the V-MinRen shippers read it.
Would you mind letting me translate your fanfic into Vietnamese?
I promise to give full credit and the link to your fanfic whenever I post it to my wattpad account.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Amelia.
Yara-chan #7
Chapter 17: Aaaish!!i really wanted some ya know=3=
But the story is amazing anyways:)
Thank u <3
stanwendy
#8
Chapter 2: Interesting story~
aung-aung22 #9
Chapter 9: How old Nana is?