Hipnotist who Hypnotized

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“Comeback you girl!”, that man shouted while someone who was wearing a black cape ran away.

Oh , they're still chasing me! Why the hell is he called me girl?!' the person muttered as they still ran. He climbed over a fence to make it so that man can’t chase him anymore. Suddenly his phone rings and answered it while his breath kept coming out in pants as he ran.

 “Hey you, brat JR!” he yelled into the phone.

Hehe, are you okay?” asked the one who called.

How can you ask if I’m okay?! I’m not okay now!”, he shouted.

Haha, calm down Ren.” said JR with a laugh.

Stop laughing or I will hypnotize you and make you become a loser!” Ren warned trying to hold in his anger.

Okay, okay, I’m sorry, where are you now?” the caller asked.

I’m on a small street, I don’t know what it's name, it’s near Busan’s road.” he replied angrily.

Okay, wait there.” he said and laughing again.

Don’t make me wait too long! Or I will throw this necklace that you want away!” Ren threatened then closed the phone.

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Foreword

‘Don’t look at my eyes or you will die’.

Ren

He is a good looking boy and also beautiful. He’s a hypnotist, he's had that power since he was 5 years old and    it made his parents throw him out of his home and forcing him to be alone. Until JR came and helped him, but he made Ren into a thief to help him steal and collect unique and mysterious objects from certain people. His attitude makes his name famous but the media and also police considered him a girl because of his appearance.

Minhyun

A smart boy with good looking face, he is young detective with his friend Baekho. He really wants to catch Ren, the thief that always make him curious. Minhyun met Ren in the museum, the place where Ren was targeting a strange sculpture. Strange thing is, Ren can’t attack Mihyun, because Minhyun never fell to his power. Minhyun thinks he has falled in love with Ren because of his eyes, but Minhyun didn’t know that Ren is a boy.

JR

He is kind young master and also ambitious boy. He love unique things and also loves Ren. He thinks Ren is unique and he wants to help him, of course to heal his power. Ren always said he doesn’t like that power. Sometimes JR will go unconscious when he accidentally looks at Ren’s eyes.

Aron

Full-blooded American man, he is America’s the most famous detective. Came to korea to solve the Hypnotist case. But until he knows that JR, his best friend,  is the who recommended that Ren be a thief, he just keeps calm and sometimes he helps Ren escape.

Baekho

Sweet guy, noisy, and friendly guy. But if you get him angry, his words would pierce like a knife which already sharpened. He's Minhyun’s partner. Only Minhyun and him can’t go unconscious if they look at Ren’s eyes, that makes Ren really hate them and always want to kill them. Baekho realized that Minhyun loves Ren.

 

Yo yo! My second fanfics!

I really love this OTP !

MINHYUN x REN

or

MINREN

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reyaakoh
#1
Chapter 18: But this one can still stay. Its a good BL story
JoshuaJHong
#2
Chapter 18: Here's my overall comment.

1. Thank you for writing this story! I really love Minren and it made me so happy to see someone write something new for them.
2. It took me a while to finish because I noticed that your first language isn't English. Which is completely fine!!! I just had a harder time following your story.
3. Don't give up writing, if you enjoy it keep working on it.
JoshuaJHong
#3
Chapter 4: Aron, your friend is a thief too! Stop this! Lolol. This has been cute so far, I can't wait to finish!
JoshuaJHong
#4
Chapter 2: Okay, they have esclated pretty quickly, which is nice! I'm excited to see when Ren will fall for our Minhyun!!
JoshuaJHong
#5
Chapter 1: Thank you SO MUCH
FOR WRITING MY OTP, I LOVE THEM TOGETHER
AHHH, MINHYUN IS ALREADY FALLING FOR REN
I CANT WAIT FOR REN TO FALL FOR MINHYUN
amenguyen007 #6
Hello.
Nice to meet you. My name is Amelia and I'm MinRen shipper. I want to ask you something about this fanfic.
First, I've read all of this and was totally impressed by the story. Therefore, I want to translate it into Vietnamese for the V-MinRen shippers read it.
Would you mind letting me translate your fanfic into Vietnamese?
I promise to give full credit and the link to your fanfic whenever I post it to my wattpad account.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Amelia.
Yara-chan #7
Chapter 17: Aaaish!!i really wanted some ya know=3=
But the story is amazing anyways:)
Thank u <3
stanwendy
#8
Chapter 2: Interesting story~
aung-aung22 #9
Chapter 9: How old Nana is?