Alpha (She/He)

Hipnotist who Hypnotized
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At JR’s house:

“I can’t hypnotize him” Ren mumbled. “Who?” JR asked giving Ren some tea. “Dunno, I think he's a young detective and he already saw my face.” Ren drinking his tea. “I think their names are Minhyun and Baekho, the greatest young detectives in Korea.” JR said. “Maybe, this is because of you.” Ren give JR a death glare. “Fine, I’m wrong. But look what I found." JR chuckled and handed Ren a newspaper. “I hate reading.” Ren said. “Just look at the front page. I think you’ll read this one till the end.” JR assured him and sat next Ren.

‘Girl with a mysterious power, the beautiful thief who always hypnotizes the police’

“WHAT?! They think that I’m a girl?!”Ren shouted angirly, his face going red. “Yep.” JR replied with a nod. “But look at the advantages you have now.” JR ruffled Ren’s hair in amusement. “What?! You mean disadvantages! This makes me so angry!” Ren yelled at JR angrily. JR's sister Nana came into the room. “Stop yelling at my little brother, sissy!” she sneered at the blonde boy. “I’m not sissy!” Ren shouted feeling much angrier. “Stop it, Nana. Leave Ren alone.”  JR scolded his sister. “He's more beautiful than me! How can he have that y face? I’m totally jealous.” Nana pouted. Ren could feel his blood boiling. “Just say  whatever you want! Like I'm not even here!” Ren yelled and slammed the door to his bedroom.

“REN! WAIT!” JR called after his younger friend and ran after him. Nana grabbed JR’s hand. “I think you like him, JR.” Nana teased with a smirk. JR furrowed his eyebrows. “Yes, as a friend. That's all!” he said angrily. “No, you definitely like him more than just being friends.” Nana said after she released JR’s hand. “What are you talking about?” JR didn’t understand what his sister meant. Nana just danced Orange Caramel’s Shanghai Romance and didn’t answer him. JR muttered something about her being a brat and went to Ren’s room to chekc on him.

Minhyun’s POV:

I still can’t believe this! She's so beautiful and adorable. Why is she a thief? And her eyes... they've made people faint just by looking into them. But she looked so sad. I shook my head and slapped my cheeks. Why am I thinking about her? I just need to catch her and ask her everything. Wait? Why am I thinking about her? Wake up, Minhyun!

“Are you still thinking about her?” Baekho teased from the behind me. I jumped surprised and immediately turned around and looked at him. “N-No!” I lied shaking my head. “Tsk, from the look on your face the answer is yes.” Baekho laughed at me. I hate it when he does this to me. “Stop teasing me, Baekho.” I sighed. “Okay, you saw her face, right?” he asked me curiously. I nodded. “I don’t know why, but I think that's a bad thing.” he said with a weird look. “What? Why do you say that?” I asked confused. “I think she is he,” Baekho chuckled. I laughed at his statement. “How could she is he? You think she’s a boy? A beautiful girl like her?” I said shaking my head. “Ha, but you'd still think about him.” he teased me. “Stop it Baekho!” I shouted. why he keep said she is a boy? I thought confused. “We need to catch this he/she and then we will know the truth, I’m really interested in their power.” Baekho said before he left the room. I just shrugged and decided to write in my diary.

End

It’s already been 2 months, since Ren was stealing more mysterious objects again. No one can’t catch him, he always would have trouble if he ran into Minhyun and Baekho. Ren abandoned his thefts until JR found the way out more about his power.

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reyaakoh
#1
Chapter 18: But this one can still stay. Its a good BL story
JoshuaJHong
#2
Chapter 18: Here's my overall comment.

1. Thank you for writing this story! I really love Minren and it made me so happy to see someone write something new for them.
2. It took me a while to finish because I noticed that your first language isn't English. Which is completely fine!!! I just had a harder time following your story.
3. Don't give up writing, if you enjoy it keep working on it.
JoshuaJHong
#3
Chapter 4: Aron, your friend is a thief too! Stop this! Lolol. This has been cute so far, I can't wait to finish!
JoshuaJHong
#4
Chapter 2: Okay, they have esclated pretty quickly, which is nice! I'm excited to see when Ren will fall for our Minhyun!!
JoshuaJHong
#5
Chapter 1: Thank you SO MUCH
FOR WRITING MY OTP, I LOVE THEM TOGETHER
AHHH, MINHYUN IS ALREADY FALLING FOR REN
I CANT WAIT FOR REN TO FALL FOR MINHYUN
amenguyen007 #6
Hello.
Nice to meet you. My name is Amelia and I'm MinRen shipper. I want to ask you something about this fanfic.
First, I've read all of this and was totally impressed by the story. Therefore, I want to translate it into Vietnamese for the V-MinRen shippers read it.
Would you mind letting me translate your fanfic into Vietnamese?
I promise to give full credit and the link to your fanfic whenever I post it to my wattpad account.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Amelia.
Yara-chan #7
Chapter 17: Aaaish!!i really wanted some ya know=3=
But the story is amazing anyways:)
Thank u <3
stanwendy
#8
Chapter 2: Interesting story~
aung-aung22 #9
Chapter 9: How old Nana is?