Chapter 2.

Fix that Spoiled Brat!

maroon = you

green = dad

purple = mom

blue = myungsoo

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"Hello Lee ~~~. My name is Kim Myungsoo." he gently smiled as he took out his hand for ~~~ to shake.

"APPA! IS THIS MY ARRANGED FUTURE HUSBAND? I TOLD YOU I'M NEVER GOING TO MARRY ANYBODY!" she yelled, simply ignoring Myungsoo.

Myungsoo raised his hand back up to his neck to seem like he was itching his neck.

"Darling, this your new mentor."

"Mentor? Ah...you mean mentor as in shopping right? I just HAVE to get the new Louis Vuitton Collection that came out yesterday night!" ~~~ grinned in front of Myungsoo.

~~~'s father rolled his eyes.

"Sweetie, I'm only going to explain this once. Kim Myungsoo is an excellent advising mentor in society. He's the best envoy of your issue in the nation! Ah, that's right. Your issue. Your attitude missy. You're basically taking our whole family for granted! I know you weren't like that during your wonderful childhood years but I don't know what's gotten to that small brain of yours, ~~~. You're going to be CEO anyway since you are our only child. Plus, you never know if Mr.Kim might become your future hus-"

"Ahem." Myungsoo coughed and pointed towards ~~~'s direction.

"Is something wr-"

There you were standing, sleeping peacefully with your eyes closed.

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You woke up to the smell of disgusting onion and garlic chips an hour later after your father rambled with Myungsoo awkwardly standing there.

"Ughhh ew what is that smell.." you murmured.

"hehe"

You shot your eyes open after realizing you heard a voice you've never heard in your life.

"Hola." Myungsoo held up a peace sign after taking his hand out of the bag of chips.

"YAH. GET THE HELL OUT OF MY ROOM. NUMBER 1 RULE IS TO NEVER COME TO MY ROOM UNLESS I ASK! MAID! HURRY AND DRAG THIS DISGUSTING PIECE OF -"

Myungsoo covered your mouth with his warm, bare hand. You made a disgusting face, as your chin area was now scented with garlic and onion chips. You stayed silent and slowly walked over to the bathroom as Myungsoo was staring at you.You then picked up the mop, which you thought you would have never hold one before and ran as fast as lightning to attempt hitting Myungsoo's head with it. Myungsoo's fast reflexes caught the wet mop as the dirty muddy water droplets from the mop dripped on your face.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH YOU JERK!"

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You and Myungsoo were sitting at the dinner table, sitting across from your mother and father.

"Don't sit next to me." you said to him.

He took a seat next to you and smirked.

"So, I see you two are getting along."

"Are you serious? I don't even know him, appa! His hands smelled like and he made my face all dirty. Like, who touches a stranger?! AND I had to go shopping with Sungjong earlier -"

"Now ~~~, where are your manners? You would have understood why this fine gentleman is sitting next to you, but you fell asleep. Remember?"

You put your head down and an idea popped into your head. You walked over to your mother and did aegyo.

"Umma! Can I have my allowance back? I haven't gone shopping for 1 day!" you cutely said as you motioned bunny ears.

"No."

"Umma pleassss -"

"Lee ~~~ sshi. You should return to your seat." Myungsoo interrupted.

You were surprised, indeed. What kind of stranger dare to interrupt your attempt at conversing with your mother, especially about the money topic.

You stood up, "Excuse me? Who are you to tell me what to do?"

"I'm your -"

"I don't care what or who you are. I don't know who you are. This is my house. I'm probably richer than you, so I suggest you stop talking and get out snce you don't know who the hell I am either." You shot back.

"ENOUGH ~~~!"

You jumped back in surprise, since your father has never raised his voice around you like that.

"Sorry about that, Myungsoo sshi. Do you see what I have to deal with everyday? Thank god I hired you. I apologize. You should go home for now. I'll e-mail you about the next appointment. As for you, ~~~. We need to talk in the living room."

Myungsoo got up and bowed. He slowly walked past you but stopped as his side was facing your side.

"See you soon, patient." he smirked while whispering.

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Author's Note: This ain't even the beginning~ Thanks for 7 subscribers!  :)

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Rini6189 #1
She's still not making much of a progress. Myungsoo would have to get more creative about getting her to actually take in what he's teaching her. It's good that he's being patient with her. Knowing him, he definitely won't give up easily even after some setbacks. That is an awkward position for the two to be caught up in. It sounds like he's just teasing her about giving him a kiss to make up for her misbehavior.

Chapter 11 (12) mistakes:

1. "Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"
* Comma after "breakfast"

2. LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK.
* Comma after "me"

3. "This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"
Correction: "This is so stupid. Since I hired you, can't you do it?"

4. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.
Correction: tried
Rini6189 #2
It's not wise to have more than a little drink when you can't handle that much. Since I'm not a drinker myself, I wouldn't be able to hold my alcohol well if I had a few drinks. It's good that she has Myungsoo there to keep her from getting herself into more trouble. In addition to being a mentor, he's practically her babysitter--keeping her in check. His father is heartless. Myungsoo has done the right thing by not complying to his father's dirty deeds even at the risk of letting his family down. He really does care about her to not want to hurt her. That's "love."

xD It must be a "spur of the moment" thing for HeyAsian to mention Sunggyu's solo song, "Because," as she's typing his part. That tends to disrupt the mood that the readers get into while reading a serious part. If that's done in a comedy, it'd fit the mood well.
Rini6189 #3
Chapter 10 (11) mistakes:

1. you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.
Correction: on your desk
*The beginning of each sentence that's not a part of the dialogue must be capitalized.

2. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.
Correction: An employee next door came into your, and Myungsoo's, office without knocking.

3. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.
*Extra comma needed after "glass"

4. he said as he literally threw you in the car.
Correction: into

5. I took her bridal style back to her house,
Correction: carried

6. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.
Correction: cold temperature

7. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt.
Correction: on the inside

8. I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.
* A pair of commas need to be added before and after "either way."
daesooxxz #4
Yeah man! I get it (when it comes to Sunggyu's solo song). Hahaha. *high five!*
Rini6189 #5
Because of his capabilities that make him suitable for a position in the Lee company, it must be easy for him to land that job (in addition to mentoring her). It must be his father's order to apply for a job at the company. He really is that attractive to draw in a swarm of ladies. That little food fight they had going on between them is childish. Despite being mature most times, he has a playful side to him. Showing her this side of him in front of her must be his way of getting her to lighten up and not be uncomfortable around him. Giving her a compliment is a form of flattery--to get in her good graces. Though, Myungsoo doesn't seem the type who'd say something that he doesn't mean. For him to know some things about her already, her parents must've informed him about her and her attitude/behavior/habits that displeases them so that he'll be aware of what she needs to change about herself as her mentor. This is to prepare him beforehand in order for him to figure out how to deal with her. The more he hangs around her, the more opportunities they'll get to know each other better. Things could turn ugly once they find out that their rival company's plans to take them down from the inside.
Rini6189 #6
Chapter 9 ("Chapter 10") mistakes:

1. You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody,
Correction: You rolled your eyes--thank God you were wearing shades--and replied back to everybody,
* The phrase that starts with "thank God" is obviously not a part of the sentence. The hyphens are placed there to separate the interruption.

2. You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing.
Correction: You took a look around the main floor and rolled your eyes at employees who were just sitting in their chairs doing absolutely nothing.

3. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened.
Correction females' eyes

4. The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food...
Correction: The waitress came and took our orders then came back a few minutes later with his food...

5. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.
Correction: my nose and my cheeks

*Note: It's written as "French fry."
gongturchan #7
@woohinfinite - soon! :)
@GeekInspirit - maybe, maybe not! stay tuned ~
@aNONAmous - hehe
@tamiyoung - maybe maybe not kekkeke
tamiyoung #8
aww they just didn't realize that they already fallen in love with each other ^^ i think myungsoo is the one who gonna rebel his father
GeekInspirit #9
HE CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL!! BUT is he going to betray her? :'(
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