Chapter 9.

Fix that Spoiled Brat!

It was that time of the month again - your period. Your dad called in saying that you should check into the building and take a look at what the employees do. You were frustratingly lazy so you decided to put on a hoodie, jeans and shades. You finally stepped into the building and employees started to take notice of you by bowing 90 degrees with a greet. You started to walk past them but Myungsoo's voice was heard in your mind, "Respect your elders by greeting them back."

You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody, "Good morning, Have a nice day."

You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing. For the past few minutes, all you saw were employees drinking coffee, employees making copies of unnecessary papers, and talking on the phone. You headed to the bathroom to change your pad but you heard annoying females blabbering.

"I heard there's a new worker coming in today! He's so hot!"

"You saw him before?"

"I saw his picture and he's my type! So dreamy!"

You rolled your eyes and flushed the toilet. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened. They bowed at you and you just nodded. While you were washing your hands, curiosity got the best of you.

"What's his name?"

"N-n-neh?"

"What's the new worker's name?"

"L."

"Mwoh?" you harshly said. The female worker took a step back and told you that was his name listed on his profile. You nodded and left.

As you got out, you saw a swarm of female workers hovering the main floor's entrance.

"Ah! You can work in the office next to me!"

"Omo, I don't think I can work if you're here!"

You rolled your eyes at the corny-ness of the workers. You walked over to the entrance and coughed. Immediately, the workers made room for you and as you faced the new worker, you scoffed, "Tch, Myungsoo?!"

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You were now sitting across from Myungsoo in a cafe that was located in the company's building. You were slightly annoyed by the fact employees were following you guys saying how lucky you/Myungsoo were for knowing each other. It turns out Myungsoo has a little job at your company and being your mentor as well.

"What are you doing?" I asked him furiously. I already have to see his face in mentoring sessions and that is good enough already!

"Why, you don't want to see 'Oppa'~" he said 'Oppa' in a girly voice.

"Tch, NO. I already have you for mentoring and I don't want you bothering me at work."

"You WORK? The only thing I imagined you doing something was even close to work is shopping online for clothes." he smirked.

"Yah, you bast-" I cut off my word, knowing that he would lecture me in cussing,"."

The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food... and my cupcake.

"Tch, a cupcake is all you ordered? I thought you ordered a huge cheeseburger for 6 dollars, but a cookie?" he said in disbelief.

"What, you have something else to say?" I snapped at him.

"Snappy, hey try this." he shoved a french fry near me.

"DO NOT, I AM ON A DIET HERE!"

"Are you scared of a french fry?" he said in a teasing voice. I took the french fry threw it at him, hitting him on the nose. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.

"BWOH? That was 6 dollars and-and I'm taking that off your salary!"

"6 dollars off my salary, oh, big deal."

"Hmph, maybe I should take it all for myself..."

"Selfish." I smeared icing from his forehead to his nose.

"You are SELFISH! Making me give you salary in the first place."

"I work for you and workers get salary, get your facts straight." he munched on his french fry.

"I wonder how you're not fat, eating all that grease."

"Maybe you should stop being self-conscious because people already know that you're beautiful." he winked as he left the cafe, making me pay. What a gentleman.

Wait...

Did he call me beautiful?

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Meanwhile at the Kim Corporations, Sunggyu barged into his father's room.

"Yes, son?"

Sunggyu smirked, "Myungsoo's in."

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A/N: Thanks for 54 subscribers and 1000+ view~ You guys are freaking awesome<3. Check out my newest fic, "The Outcaster's Journal." @HeyAsian had a spazz attack because Myungsoo called her beautiful haha :) NO SILENT READERSSS

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Rini6189
#1
She's still not making much of a progress. Myungsoo would have to get more creative about getting her to actually take in what he's teaching her. It's good that he's being patient with her. Knowing him, he definitely won't give up easily even after some setbacks. That is an awkward position for the two to be caught up in. It sounds like he's just teasing her about giving him a kiss to make up for her misbehavior.

Chapter 11 (12) mistakes:

1. "Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"
* Comma after "breakfast"

2. LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK.
* Comma after "me"

3. "This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"
Correction: "This is so stupid. Since I hired you, can't you do it?"

4. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.
Correction: tried
Rini6189
#2
It's not wise to have more than a little drink when you can't handle that much. Since I'm not a drinker myself, I wouldn't be able to hold my alcohol well if I had a few drinks. It's good that she has Myungsoo there to keep her from getting herself into more trouble. In addition to being a mentor, he's practically her babysitter--keeping her in check. His father is heartless. Myungsoo has done the right thing by not complying to his father's dirty deeds even at the risk of letting his family down. He really does care about her to not want to hurt her. That's "love."

xD It must be a "spur of the moment" thing for HeyAsian to mention Sunggyu's solo song, "Because," as she's typing his part. That tends to disrupt the mood that the readers get into while reading a serious part. If that's done in a comedy, it'd fit the mood well.
Rini6189
#3
Chapter 10 (11) mistakes:

1. you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.
Correction: on your desk
*The beginning of each sentence that's not a part of the dialogue must be capitalized.

2. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.
Correction: An employee next door came into your, and Myungsoo's, office without knocking.

3. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.
*Extra comma needed after "glass"

4. he said as he literally threw you in the car.
Correction: into

5. I took her bridal style back to her house,
Correction: carried

6. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.
Correction: cold temperature

7. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt.
Correction: on the inside

8. I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.
* A pair of commas need to be added before and after "either way."
daesooxxz
#4
Yeah man! I get it (when it comes to Sunggyu's solo song). Hahaha. *high five!*
Rini6189
#5
Because of his capabilities that make him suitable for a position in the Lee company, it must be easy for him to land that job (in addition to mentoring her). It must be his father's order to apply for a job at the company. He really is that attractive to draw in a swarm of ladies. That little food fight they had going on between them is childish. Despite being mature most times, he has a playful side to him. Showing her this side of him in front of her must be his way of getting her to lighten up and not be uncomfortable around him. Giving her a compliment is a form of flattery--to get in her good graces. Though, Myungsoo doesn't seem the type who'd say something that he doesn't mean. For him to know some things about her already, her parents must've informed him about her and her attitude/behavior/habits that displeases them so that he'll be aware of what she needs to change about herself as her mentor. This is to prepare him beforehand in order for him to figure out how to deal with her. The more he hangs around her, the more opportunities they'll get to know each other better. Things could turn ugly once they find out that their rival company's plans to take them down from the inside.
Rini6189
#6
Chapter 9 ("Chapter 10") mistakes:

1. You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody,
Correction: You rolled your eyes--thank God you were wearing shades--and replied back to everybody,
* The phrase that starts with "thank God" is obviously not a part of the sentence. The hyphens are placed there to separate the interruption.

2. You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing.
Correction: You took a look around the main floor and rolled your eyes at employees who were just sitting in their chairs doing absolutely nothing.

3. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened.
Correction females' eyes

4. The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food...
Correction: The waitress came and took our orders then came back a few minutes later with his food...

5. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.
Correction: my nose and my cheeks

*Note: It's written as "French fry."
gongturchan #7
@woohinfinite - soon! :)
@GeekInspirit - maybe, maybe not! stay tuned ~
@aNONAmous - hehe
@tamiyoung - maybe maybe not kekkeke
tamiyoung
#8
aww they just didn't realize that they already fallen in love with each other ^^ i think myungsoo is the one who gonna rebel his father
GeekInspirit
#9
HE CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL!! BUT is he going to betray her? :'(