Chapter 7 (the other half)

Fix that Spoiled Brat!

 

maroon = you

blue = myungsoo

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Your POV:

I woke up to the unusual smell of pancakes... the chefs only make eggs and bacon, so I figured it must be a special occasion. I sat up and stretched, noticing that my walls weren't pink anymore and I didn't have a balcony in my room anymore. I was super confused... until I noticed that was because I wasn't in my room.

"OH MY GOSH!" I yelled at the top of my lungs.

Myungsoo ran inside the room, but slid on the carpet, face planting the floor. I would've usually laughed, but one thing was circling in my mind... what did I do last night with HIM? He got up quickly, his face was red as he placed his hand on his cheek.

"Yah, what's wrong?"

"What did you to to me you ? Did you drug me or something?"

"Hmm, you can say that." he smirked. That stupid smirk.

I blushed and threw a pillow at him, but he dodged it.

"I made breakfast, pancakes and cereal."

He walked off to the kitchen, his heavy footsteps echoing the place. What did he do to me last night? I got up out of my bed and walked to his kitchen, looking at him flipping pancakes. He was busy, so I watched some TV, until something brushed my legs. I looked down to see a huge dog staring back at me. Did I tell you that I'm afraid of them ever since one chased me when I was little?

"AH!" I yelled as I picked up my feet.

"What happened?" Myungsoo frantically yelled from the kitchen.

I heard a loud bang then a sizzling noise, so I looked at what happened. The pancake landed on his head, sizzling as he tried to shake it off. The dog wagged her tail and jumped on the couch with me. I shrieked, jumped off the couch, and ran behind Myungsoo who was still trying to get the pancake off his head. He spun around with his hands in the air and bumped into me, making me fall into his arms. My eyes grew wide noticing that my head was buried in his chest, his arms around me. I felt him looking down at me as he took his hands away from me. He cleared his throat and motioned me to sit down.

"You know you liked it." He whispered as I took a seat.

"WHAT? YOU CRAZY ERT, OF COURSE I DIDN'T!"

The dog came to the side of my chair without me noticing, her hair brushing against me again. When I saw her, I screamed in fear.

"OH MY GOSH!" Myungsoo smirked.

"I see you're scared of Hye Mang." he said as the dog went over to his side. He petted her.

"...Am not."

"Then pet her." This guy is crazy.

"Can you just take me home? I'm tired of seeing your stupid face."

"Then pet her." Hye Mang came over to me and sat down at my side.

I hate you Kim Myungsoo.

I stretched my hand slowly to her... centimeter by centimeter... until her tongue touched my hand. I pulled my hand back quickly and looked at Myungsoo, who got up and petted the dog and took my hand to her fur, making me blush. She was so soft! I started to rub her soft back, my hand colliding with Myungsoo's, but he didn't seem to care.

"After you're done eating I'll drop you off, arasso?" then he went inside the bathroom. To be honest, I didn't really want to leave anymore... this place seemed like home.

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Myungsoo's POV

I started the car and placed on my seatbelt, placing my hands on the steering wheel. I looked at ~~~~ to see if she placed on her seatbelt, but she just sat there looking out the window. I tried to reach over and put on her seatbelt, but she hit my hand away.

"What are you doing?"

"Putting on your seatbelt? I figured since you're a lazy rich girl, your butlers do it for you." she glared at me.

"I'm not lazy! I walk, talk, and shop by myself!" she placed on her seatbelt, "There, are you going to drive now Mr. Safety?"

A couple of minutes passed. The sun blinded her, so I handed her my sunglasses. The silence was very awkward, but I didn't mind.

"How do you know Hoya?" I blurted out. Her face grew tense.

"How do YOU know Hoya?" she asked back. Attitude.

"Let me guess, he was your ex-boyfriend."

"Stop talking to me."

As I pulled up the drive way, she immediately got out of the car.

"Don't come inside and by the way, don't even talk about him around me. Don't even pretend like you know me so well, ok? I -"

Ok, at that moment, I had no clue what I was doing. I hugged her. She kind of just stood there stiffly, then cried on my elbow... pushing me away.

"Just leave me alone, ok!" she yelled as she walked up to the door.

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Author's Note: HAY GUYS, @HeyAsian (co-author) wrote this chapter for you guys!!!!!

doesn't she write so amazinggggg-ly? :)

THANKS FOR 41 SUBSCRIBERS<3

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Rini6189 #1
She's still not making much of a progress. Myungsoo would have to get more creative about getting her to actually take in what he's teaching her. It's good that he's being patient with her. Knowing him, he definitely won't give up easily even after some setbacks. That is an awkward position for the two to be caught up in. It sounds like he's just teasing her about giving him a kiss to make up for her misbehavior.

Chapter 11 (12) mistakes:

1. "Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"
* Comma after "breakfast"

2. LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK.
* Comma after "me"

3. "This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"
Correction: "This is so stupid. Since I hired you, can't you do it?"

4. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.
Correction: tried
Rini6189 #2
It's not wise to have more than a little drink when you can't handle that much. Since I'm not a drinker myself, I wouldn't be able to hold my alcohol well if I had a few drinks. It's good that she has Myungsoo there to keep her from getting herself into more trouble. In addition to being a mentor, he's practically her babysitter--keeping her in check. His father is heartless. Myungsoo has done the right thing by not complying to his father's dirty deeds even at the risk of letting his family down. He really does care about her to not want to hurt her. That's "love."

xD It must be a "spur of the moment" thing for HeyAsian to mention Sunggyu's solo song, "Because," as she's typing his part. That tends to disrupt the mood that the readers get into while reading a serious part. If that's done in a comedy, it'd fit the mood well.
Rini6189 #3
Chapter 10 (11) mistakes:

1. you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.
Correction: on your desk
*The beginning of each sentence that's not a part of the dialogue must be capitalized.

2. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.
Correction: An employee next door came into your, and Myungsoo's, office without knocking.

3. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.
*Extra comma needed after "glass"

4. he said as he literally threw you in the car.
Correction: into

5. I took her bridal style back to her house,
Correction: carried

6. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.
Correction: cold temperature

7. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt.
Correction: on the inside

8. I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.
* A pair of commas need to be added before and after "either way."
daesooxxz #4
Yeah man! I get it (when it comes to Sunggyu's solo song). Hahaha. *high five!*
Rini6189 #5
Because of his capabilities that make him suitable for a position in the Lee company, it must be easy for him to land that job (in addition to mentoring her). It must be his father's order to apply for a job at the company. He really is that attractive to draw in a swarm of ladies. That little food fight they had going on between them is childish. Despite being mature most times, he has a playful side to him. Showing her this side of him in front of her must be his way of getting her to lighten up and not be uncomfortable around him. Giving her a compliment is a form of flattery--to get in her good graces. Though, Myungsoo doesn't seem the type who'd say something that he doesn't mean. For him to know some things about her already, her parents must've informed him about her and her attitude/behavior/habits that displeases them so that he'll be aware of what she needs to change about herself as her mentor. This is to prepare him beforehand in order for him to figure out how to deal with her. The more he hangs around her, the more opportunities they'll get to know each other better. Things could turn ugly once they find out that their rival company's plans to take them down from the inside.
Rini6189 #6
Chapter 9 ("Chapter 10") mistakes:

1. You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody,
Correction: You rolled your eyes--thank God you were wearing shades--and replied back to everybody,
* The phrase that starts with "thank God" is obviously not a part of the sentence. The hyphens are placed there to separate the interruption.

2. You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing.
Correction: You took a look around the main floor and rolled your eyes at employees who were just sitting in their chairs doing absolutely nothing.

3. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened.
Correction females' eyes

4. The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food...
Correction: The waitress came and took our orders then came back a few minutes later with his food...

5. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.
Correction: my nose and my cheeks

*Note: It's written as "French fry."
gongturchan #7
@woohinfinite - soon! :)
@GeekInspirit - maybe, maybe not! stay tuned ~
@aNONAmous - hehe
@tamiyoung - maybe maybe not kekkeke
tamiyoung #8
aww they just didn't realize that they already fallen in love with each other ^^ i think myungsoo is the one who gonna rebel his father
GeekInspirit #9
HE CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL!! BUT is he going to betray her? :'(
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