Heart Of Space by captaintycoon [Special Request]
Tagimpan Review Services — open & accepting!Hey bestie! I managed to read the story and write the review one after the other. While I have my personal biases with liking how you write your stories, I think I'll still be able to give an objective feedback. That is to say, I'm almost certain there's not really much to complain about this one.
Title / Description / First impression (20/20)This portion is judged by the overall impression the fic is able to evoke at first encounter.
It's simple, but it was able to encapsulate the entire point of the story. Heartfelt, given the subject matter that the story discussed, while keeping the theme visible. It's poetic despite its simplicity. Good choice on this one.
Plot / Concept / Theme / World-building (20/20)This part talks about the general point of the story, from the plot, to the setting and world-building, as well as the genres and themes that the author has chosen to tackle.
With the short length, it was able to bring to life an entire world with its system and ways of being. We focused on a family dynamic, but it was well-incorporated in the grand scheme of things in a Sci-Fi universe. Narration-wise, it didn't seem to cram the information together, but not in a detrimental way. If anything, it worked because the exposition didn't take up too much space in the narrative. It was there to provide insight and pain the picture of the universe we are working with; it didn't lack perspective and we aren't lost in the vastness of space colonies and century-old histories.
Characterization (20/20)This criteria judges the way characters are developed, how effective their arcs have been in terms of fleshing them out, and how convincing the parts they've played in the story.
No notes again! We stayed with Jungeun the whole time; the emotional and practical moments blended well together, nothing was left behind or overly focused on. We were able to sympathize with her during tender moments, and we were able to move with her when she wanted to pick herself up and focus on tasks at hand. She is a reliable character, and we were showed that. Minjeong, despite being the secondary c
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