DORM 1,2, & 3

Hana Kimi (super junior version)

‘’oh my god, what if he finds out??? Is this the end?? But I’m just getting started’’ you

thought

 

Narrator POV

‘’hmmmmm, there’ nothing special too in your upper body’’ Donghae walking away from you

 

‘’that it??’’ you questioned him ‘’ Wae?? Do you expect me to say anything??’’ Donghae looked at

you

 

‘’aniyo’’ *phew that’s a closed one* you thought

 

‘’ aish, I can’t believe I lost to a guy like him” Donghae look at you from head to toe ‘’ well that’s

not my fault that I’m fast right’’ you mumbled to yourself. ‘’bwoh??’’ Donghae said ‘’nothing’’ you

smiled at him

 

‘’0-okay’’ Donghae sit in front of Kyuhyun who’s still playing a game.

 

‘’then why don’t we see in the upcoming marathon if he truly run faster than Donghae??’’ Zhou mi

said

 

‘’marathon??’’ you said looking at them

 

‘’yes, there will be a 100 meter marathon so think of running away’’ Donghae point at you “that’s

right, that’s right’’ the cute guy said and leaned on donghae

 

‘’ your being noisy you know’’ Kyuhyun finally speak up again without taking his eyes in the game

 

‘’ bwoh’’ Donghae said to him

 

‘’ you’re like a screaming monkey who got out in his cage’’

 

 “YAH, I’m the monkey, right?’’ Eunhyuk said

 

‘’well, looks who talked. The ghost of track and field, Kyuhyunnie’’ ‘’wow, you’re so mature’’ Donghae

came closer to him

 

‘’ Because you guys are IMMATURE’’ the kyuhyun look at him so they looking in eye to eye

The Kyuhyun packed his thing out and walked to the classroom.

 

‘‘YAH, we’re not finished here’’ Donghae yelled at him

 

YOUR POV

You see Kyuhyun pack his things and get out to the room.

 

I quickly followed him then I heard Donghae yelled but I didn’t care I need to follow

Kyuhyun-shi.

 

‘’Kyuhyun-shi’’ I see him then he stop and look at me ‘’kamsahamnida (thank you)’’ I take a bow right

infront of him

 

‘’Wae??’’ kyuhyun looked at me like he don’t understand me

 

‘’thank you for helping me out there?’’ then he just look at me like I’m crazy

‘’ what are you saying??’’ ‘’ I didn’t do that for you’’ then he walked away

 

‘’but –‘’ I reasoned out then he stop

 

‘’what is it?’’ Kyuhyun started to get irritated because his voice starting to sound irritated

 

‘’*gulped* the thing is-‘’I look to ground kinda embarrassed

 

‘’sorry, if you think that way but I’m not like that’’ then he walked away

 

He left me here dumbfounded.

 

NARRATOR POV

‘’hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm’’ a girl smelled the fresh air as she enter the school

 

‘’ OH! Principal, when did you come here? I didn’t know you’re going to be back soon ’’ the Mr.

Lee said SHOCKED

 

‘’ well, it’s a long time seen the school’’ the PRINCIPAL said

  

‘’but you still have work in the L.A.???’’ Mr.Lee said

 

‘’yeah, but its ok I really want to go back here’’ looking around

 

‘’and I want to see the new student here that’s why I came back’’ she smiled cheekily

 

‘’ oh ~ I bring something from L.A.’’ she touch the plant

 

‘’ thank you principal’’ mr.lee take a bow

 

‘’oh I remember… if it’s wilt… you will get fired, OK??”

 

‘’*gulp* yes principal’’ mr.lee sweating like he’s running all day

 

‘’ I wonder what kind of flower will blossom this year’’ the PRINCIPAL looked at the window

 

YOUR POV

I run to the nearest bathroom ‘’AISH’’ you knock all the doors but it’s all lock ‘’ come on open up”

then there’s one guy asked

 

‘’Are you going to poop? (sorry for the word hahhahha) while urinating

 

‘’a- aniyo’’ you still waiting for the door because you really need to pee

 

‘’then why you just urinate here’’

I think twice but I slowly went to the urinals then I look the guy how to pee the he noticed me he

tried to hide HIS ( you know what is it)

 

‘’what are you looking at??’’ looking at me suspiciously

 

‘’mianhe’’ I was about to pee when the doors are open

 

“yes’’ I quickly go to one of the cubicles

 

NARATOR POV

‘’You know guys that our school compete with 3 dormitory right??’’ the guy that has a big body

said

‘’no, I didn’t know’’ PAKthe guy was hit by a stick

 

‘’babo’’ the guy that has a big body said ‘’mianhe’’ the student said

 

‘’next week the marathon will be held… hahhahahah… Of course, dorm 1 is going to win’’ he laughed

evily

 

Then one guy running to the guy

 

“CAPTAINNNNNNNNN~~~”

 

‘’aish,why so loud???’’ he was about to hit the guy

 

‘’Captain,ahh.. wait a second’’ holding to his knees because he’s panting from running

 

‘’faster, babo’’ he hit his head

 

‘’there’s new transfer student in our classroom’’ rubbing he’s head

 

‘’so what? you shout because of that??’’

 

‘’aniyo, he run in his school a 100 meter marathon in just 10 second’’

 

Showing his ten fingers……

 

‘’chincha? 9 seconds’’ look shocked

 

*on the other side*

‘’did he really run the marathon in 8 second ah?’’ a guy with a cape.

‘‘hahahha’’ he laughed weirdly ‘’with his help the dorm 3 will definitely win’’ ‘’and beside some of as

lacks of energy’’ while he look at his student ‘’hmmp’’

 

‘’oh, there he is’’ one of the student pointed at you as he sees you walking

 

‘’hmmp .. what a lucky day hahahhahah’’ he laughed again ‘’follow me guys’’

 

Your POV

I was walking in some part of the school when many guy with a different color of cape. Now that

is weird. Then when I turn around there is another guy.

 

‘’I am..’’ he turned around posed in a weird way

 

“KIM RYEOWOOK’’

 

I tilt my head because my head because I don’t understand what is just happening right now

 

‘’eh??’’ that’s all I can say

 

‘’ hahahhahahaha, I probably shocked you with my appearance do I?? But you will get used to it

if you joined our dorm.’’ Then he came closer to me

 

‘’ you beautiful face and leg will perfectly fit in the dorm 3??’’ while he examined you

 

‘’dorm 3??’’ you questioned him

 

‘’neh… anyway’’ he takes something out of his clothes

 

paper?

 

‘’you will just sign here and you will be part of us, hahahahahah’’ then he showed me the content

and gave me a PEN??

“DORM ENTRANCE AGREEMENT’’ then he smiled at me

 

‘’ahh..ANIYO’’ then I run away to the entrance

 

‘’wow his really fast hahahhaha’’ ryeowook said amazingly

 

I still panting ‘’ha~ha~ wo~ now that is weird’’ I tidy up myself walked then someone blocked me

again. *sigh* they have judo costume …

 

‘’HAJIMA’’ and they pose like they going to fight

 

‘’aish, not again’’ I’m about to run when someone hold my hand

 

‘’___________’’ he called out my name

 

‘’We are the dorm 1’’ I think he’s the captain.

 

‘’let’s test your ability’’ he pointed at me

 

‘’okay, I… declined ’’ then I run away but the dorm 3 blocked me again

 

‘’join dorm 1 and you will be stronger’’ the ‘’captain’’ said

 

‘’ahhh, Kangin shii’’ Ryeowook said. So that’s what the captain name. KANGIN.

 

‘’ I won’t let you have _______’’ ryeowook said

 

‘’ you think ________ will joined you nerd????’’ as he came closer to Ryeowook

 

‘’AYYY, how dare you RACOON?’’ kangin holding a stick and about to hit Ryewook but he

blocked. They keep fighting like word war happening again. Then I found a little opening and

there I escaped.

 

‘’*sigh* what school is this?”

 

‘’yah, transfer’’

 

Oh my god another one. I hide in my backpack…

 

‘’Are you ok???’’ a hear him say

 

‘’neh??’’ I was shocked because I thought he’s going to do something weird again. Then I lowered

my bag and I finally see him.

 

Wow~ he’s handsome…

‘’are you ok, transfer??’’ he said it again

 

‘’ahhahah, I’m ok thanks’’ I laughed awkwardly. I stand up then came to him.

 

‘’ I’m leeteuk, you are __________. Right???’’ he offered he’s hand out

 

‘’neh, ___________ imnida’’ I shake hand with him

 

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We are sitting in the bench

 

“hahhahahhahha’’ I heard a UNIQUE laughed when I said the story about ryeowook and kangin.

It’s my first time to hear that laughed.

‘’ you sure got through a lot of things today ha… and it’s been your first day’’ I heard him

chuckled

 

‘’yeah, I know. I mean, what’s up with dorm 1 and 3???’’ I said wondering

 

Then he stands up and he pulled something in his pocket… wait??? Is that a remote? Is he taking

that remote anywhere?Then he pressed something there and in the front there is a chart that

going down.

 

‘’ whoa~ what is that???’’ I was shocked

 

‘’I this school, there 3 dorm that are competing with each other’’ he went over there

 

‘’ And you can choose in dorm you like’’ he smiled at me showing his dimple ‘’cute”

‘’the dorm 1 is a martial arts department that managed by Kim Youngwoon but we called him

KANGIN. Its means strong person that describe him so we called him that’’ pointed the stick in

the red dorm

‘’the second dorm is a sport department that managed by Kim Heechul. He is the playboy of this

school.’’ He pointed at the blue dorm

 ’ and the last dorm, dorm 3 is a performing art class that managed by Kim Ryeowook. You

actually meet him already and Kangin right???’’  just nodded to that.

 

They always compete in all school events. Like now, there’s going to be a marathon so they

already getting ready.

 

‘’Why are they competing with each other? Is there a prize or something?’’ you asked him

 

‘’yes, there will be a special award who wins in every school events’’ ‘’ for example you get a

dessert coupon all the year ‘’ he explained and I just nodded

 

‘’ and this upcoming marathon, there will be a reward too, I think.’’

 

‘’ahhh~ so that’s why...’’ I walked to him

 

‘’So that’s why they been chasing you because of the fact that you run a 100 meters in 10

seconds.They need you in order to win…’’

 

‘’ahh~ can I asked you something?’’ I looked in the ground.

 

‘’sure, ask anything’’ he said smiling again. ‘’he’s so cute, ok snap out of it. You’re a boy now ok’’ I

thought

 

‘’ uhmmmm, what dorm is … Kyuhyun staying in??? ‘’aish, hope he doesn’t suspect anything’’

 

‘’ah~ same as me, Dorm 2’’

 

‘’neh, kamsahamnida’’ I take a bow and then run

 

‘’0- ok’’ I left him dumfounded…

 

NARATOR POV

You went to find the 2nd dorm and then you stop at the door that said “DORM 2’’

 

‘’ohh~’’ then you hear something in the back. Then you see a man making out with a girl.

0_0 your eyes widened like that

 

Then he break the kiss and heard him say “SEE YA’’  ‘’ok oppa’’ then you see the girl blow a kiss

with that ‘’guy’’. You see him coming then you hide to the bushes.

 

‘’YES, another one. GOAL!!!!’’ then he see you. You turn away and you keep hiding your face. Then

he came closer to you ‘’ ah~ AH’’

 

‘’ are you… are you _________??’’ he asked excitingly

 

You just keep hiding your face then you stand up ‘’neh’’ but you still didn’t face him.

 

‘’ah~ I’m right. Hehhehe, I’m the dorm leader of dorm 2 3rd year kim heechul. Why are you still

at your back? ’’ Then he hold your shoulder and then he turn you around so that he will see your face.

 

‘’come on, I’ll show you around. Follow me, Follow me’’ he said in weird english accent.’’ Then he

dragged you into the dorm.

 

‘’aniyo, ah. Its ok’’ but he keep dragging you into the dorm.

 

‘’It’s ok, don’t be shy. Come on man yo’’ he’s said like his a rapper ‘’what a weird man’’ you thought.

He put his hand into your shoulder you feel uncomfortable. Then his phone rings…

 

‘’Yoboseyo, oh So hee ah, I’m sorry I can’t be with you this week. I have something to.

 

“WHAT A PLAYBOY”

 

Then someone suddenly appeared somewhere

 

'' omo, i can't believe that guy is showed around in the dorm by heechul hyung.. aish!!! im jealous''

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COMMENT REPLIED

@kim_seul_young
i'm not really into kyuhae but i love them both
i just think of that Eunhyuk being monkey
tnx for commenting

@aki-chan
of course kangteuk it is...
suju is immature but i like them like that
tnx for commenting

@fairydreamer02
tnx for loving my story?? you're a new commentor. am i right?? tnx..
it's ok if you don't like the taiwan.. me too,i don't really hate nor like it.. it's just that japanese version is much greater
tnx for waiting
OK SIWON IT IS
tnx for commenting

@bluesujulove15
yes yuri is the pprincipal
i can't really think of anybody
hehheheh
tnx for liking it and
tnx for commenting

@Maiaxox
tnx for loving it
tnx for commenting

@aki-chan
you really love osacar, do you???
hehhehehhe
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@sungmin_pumpkin96
haahha
i know right
but i think in real life kangin and ryeowook
never fight each other....
hehehhe
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@kim_seul_young
tnx for loving it....
i really actually dont know
i already forgot
hehehheheh
tnx for congratualting me
tnx for commenting

@iheartyou15
tnx for finding it funny
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@bluesujulove15
i know... he's really funny and weird
am i saying weird many times hahahah
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@Cherishgal
hahahhaha
i know
tnx for loving hae
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@fairydreamer
heheheh
tnx for commenting again
actually heechul is the head of dorm 2
leeteuk is the captain of high jump
again, tnx for commenting

 

@fairydreamer
heheheh
tnx for commenting again
actually heechul is the head of dorm 2
leeteuk is the captain of high jump
:)))))
again, tnx for commenting


@aki-chan
yes, i'll update noe
it's ok ireally like it that your taking interest in my story
tnx for always reading my updates
hehhehehehh....
tnx for commenting


@HeebumBaengshin
your welcome
anything for my fellow readers
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mistressdean
#1
I love how you match the characters up perfectly haha they totally fit their roles ^^ especially kyuhyunnie
hairdryer
#2
I clicked on the randoms tory button and it brought me here ^^
Love Hana Kimi XD
kazeryu23
#3
yesung as kayashima?? gawd. that was the best! :))))
I can really imagine yesungie playing his part! XD
tenmachan
#4
hahak..i love hana kimi so much... when i read that SM will release hanakimi korean version,i always ask who suit for oscar chac??? heechul?? then i read this foreword..laughing so much that my stomach hurt.. u very good choose the characters...lol..poor wookie.. and yoona 4.. aigoo~ but bout sungmin...he too cute!
ChoKyute
#5
PLEASE UPDATE SOON~~~~;w; T^T
naznew #6
i falling in love with your story..please update soon..
KyeopTaemin #7
I BEG YOU ( kneels down ) please update your story.... THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ
zhiara25
#8
update soon...<br />
please i want to read more of this...
Ainaeunchul
#9
update please..
zhiara25
#10
new reader here i think yesung fit to be Kayashima Taiki the one who reads aura hehehe...<br />