Challenge

Hana Kimi (super junior version)

 

 

‘’y-you’re a girl???’’ another person got to know my secret

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YOUR POV

Mrs. Kim and I are now sitting at the bench… she just keeps on staring me and I am feeling a

little uncomfortable, not little, A LOT

 

‘’are you really a girl???”’ she already asked me that earlier

 

‘’is that the only thing you would ask me Mrs. Kim??? If so, I will be going and go to work’’ I said

standing up but she pulled me back to sit

 

‘’I just never thought that you will be a girl… I just thought you’re a cute boy like Sungmin’’ she

said to me

 

‘’uhmm, Mrs. Kim can you keep this secret just between us???’’ I asked her

 

I hear her sigh ‘’ even though you’re the reason Kyuhyun stop jumping, you shouldn’t be doing

this… it’s just too dangerous for a GIRL like you to enter a boy school’’ she emphasized the word

GIRL

 

‘’How did you know???’’ my eyes just widen

 

‘’I hear it from Hankyung’’ she just casually said it

 

‘’Dr. Tan???’’  I still couldn’t believe it

 

‘’neh, Dr. Tan Hankyung the school doctor and also my little brother’’ she said

 

‘’little brother??? B-but how…’’

 

‘’he’s my brother and GAY so it’s kinda complicated’’ she said

 

‘’so Dr. Tan and Heechul hyung are… ‘’

 

‘’uncle and nephew’’ she finished my sentence and I just nodded

 

‘’Anyway, let set it aside and talk about your problem… Honey, your lies will be find out sooner

or later… you can’t hide forever’’ she cupped my face

 

‘’but I really want to see Kyuhyun to jump again’’ I just said to her

 

‘’you really love this person don’t you’’ she released me

 

‘’ANIYO, it’s not like a love him, it just that…’’ I don’t know what to say

 

‘’this will be more difficult if you continue doing this’’ she said and I just look at the night sky

 

‘’I know…’’ I whispered

 

NARRATOR POV

 ‘’___________, could you put the dishes there???’’ Mrs. Kim said and you follow her

 

‘’__________, come on… Let’s go’’ Donghae, Sungmin and Yesung called you and throw you a

water gun and you follow them

 

‘’Wait, where are you going? What about the work here???’’ Eunhyuk asked while they are

washing the dishes

 

‘’well, we will be switching with you until next week’’ Donghae said

 

‘’but we will all go home next week’’ Henry said pouting

 

‘’that’s your problem’’ Donghae said smiling

 

‘’you just want to spent time with _________, don’t you?’’ Zhou mi mumbled but unluckily

Donghae hear it

 

‘’BWOH???’’ Donghae glared at Zhou mi and he just hide behind Eunhyuk

 

‘’why? Isn’t that the true?’’ Eunhyuk more

 

‘’yah, go back to work’’ Donghae sprayed the water guns to them and then he quickly run away

with Sungmin, Yesung and __________

 

‘’Yah, Donghae-‘’ they all screamed but cut off by Mrs. Kim

 

‘’why are you screaming about? You will scare my costumer away and you need to do work. You

need to wash dishes, grabbing garbage, clean the toilet, do the laundry, cook, serve to the

costumer and etc.’’ she said to the student and they can’t just believe

 

‘’she’s really are HEECHUL MOM’’ Henry said

 

‘’aniyo, she’s even worst that heechul-hyung’’ Zhou mi said

 

‘’what are you yapping about? Go back to work’’ Mrs. Kim shouted

 

‘’YES, MAM’’ they said it like soldiers

 

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‘’ the beach, bikinis, THIS IS THE LIFE” Donghae said as he see the beautiful scene in front of

him

 

‘’ and turtles’’ Yesung said and they just look at him strangely

 

‘’by the way, __________ why aren’t you in your trunks??’’ Donghae asked ___________

 

‘’eh??? I forgot it beside you all just drag me to come here right?’’ you said

 

‘’then buy a new one’’ Sungmin said and you just glared at him then you just run away and went to

the water

 

‘’I really can’t imagine what kind of swimwear will suit to _________, right Donghae-ah???”

Sungmin said while looking at you

 

‘’well, _________ fit the best in… hmmmmmmmmm’’ Donghae keep thinking

 

  

‘’hmmmmmmm’’ Donghae keep thinking of you in swimwear

 

‘’oh~ isn’t that the IDIOT GROUP???’’ someone said then you all look at him

 

‘’Siwon-shi’’ you said as you look at him in anger

 

‘’Yah, who are you calling idiot?’’ Donghae went to him

 

‘’hmmmmm, someone who’s bleeding his nose with an idiot face’’ Siwon teased Donghae

 

Donghae touch his nose and he was shocked…Siwon was right, his nose was bleeding. He quickly

wipes the blood from his nose

 

‘’that is because… it’s really hot so I nosebleed’’ Donghae explained but Siwon just scoffed and

went to you… you backed away as he came closer to you

 

‘’where’s Kyuhyun?’’ he asked you but you didn’t answered

 

‘’is he walking the dog again?’’ he said cockily

 

‘’Aniyo’’ you quickly said as you felt insulted to what he said

 

‘’Ah, Kyuhyunie went to the training camp’’ Donghae said to him proudly

 

 

‘’Really? He really starting again’’ Siwon said

 

‘’yeah, that’s right and you can’t disturb him’’ you said as you pointed the water gun to him

 

‘’I won’t do that’’ Siwon said as he shoved away your water gun to him ‘’ I can still beat him even

if my eyes were close’’ he continue

 

‘’WHY YOU!!’’ Donghae was about to attack him but Yesung and Sungmin stop him

 

‘’before you beat Kyuhyun, you have to get through me first’’ Donghae said

 

‘’ahhahahaahah, are you really sure about that??? You’re just a bunch of talentless people’’ Siwon

said to him

 

‘’Yah, you could insult Donghae all you want…’’ Sungmin said then Donghae glared at him ‘’but you

can’t insult our school’’

 

‘’how about a challenge?’’ Siwon said and you all just look at him confused

 

‘’Garam vs. Nadam: who’s the more handsome???’’ Siwon said

 

‘’BWHAHAHAHAHHA’’ Donghae laughed himself ‘’your only one army’’

 

Siwon just give them a mischievous smile and whistle… they all just looked at each not knowing

what will happen

 

Then the ground start shaking ‘’what’s happening???” you all said

 

‘’Meet my army’’ Siwon said and then Siwon started to taking off his shirt and all of you just

stared at it

 

(from left to right)

‘’I’m Wooyoung-imnida’’ the boy that look like a bird

 

‘’I’m Chansung-imnida’’ the Italian-guy

 

‘’I’m Junsu-imnida’’ the panda-like guy

 

‘’I’m Taecyeon-imnida’’ the look-like-rabbit-because-of-his-bug-teeth

 

‘’I’m Junho-imnida’’ the look-a-like-of-Rain

 

‘’and I’m Nickhun-imnida’’ the-guy-that’s-really-handsome

 

 ‘’they are my classmates from Garam high school’’ Siwon as he introduced themselves

 

‘’Y-you’re lying right??? They c-can’t be a high school student too’’ Yesung said

 

‘’why??? What’s wrong? Oh~ you just scared because Kyuhyun is not here right here’’ Siwon said

cockily

 

‘’WHAT???’’ Donghae said angrily

 

‘’Donghae’’ you called him ‘’he’s right we can’t win without Kyuhyun’’ __________ said to Donghae

but Donghae just look at him

 

‘’this challenge… WE ACCEPT’’ Donghae said and they just glared at him

 

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‘’did I wait you for too long???" So-hee said

 

Heechul was just staring at the beach then turned around when he see So-hee

 

‘’it’s been a long time since we spent time together’’ Heechul just smiled to her

 

They are now both walking to the side of the beach

 

‘’So… how are you??? This is your last year of your high school years, right???’’ So-hee said to

him

 

‘’yeah, it’s kinda sad though… I’m gonna miss those members of mine’’ Heechul simply said

 

‘’You? How are you??? You’re kinda bit of chubby when-‘’ Heechul said but cut off by So-hee

 

‘’Yah, I’m not that fat…’’ she hits heechul then they accidentally looked at each other’s eyes…

So-hee quickly looked away and walked ahead, Heechul just look at her disappointed

 

They are now sitting at the sand… playing with silently

 

‘’Mianhe…’’ So-hee said to Heechul and he just look at her

 

‘’for my sudden disappearance. I left you without saying anything’’ So-hee said looking at the

sand

 

‘’I don’t care about that anymore’’ Heechul said while looking at the sky and So-hee just look at

him

 

‘’the most important thing is now, you’re with me right now’’ then he suddenly look at So-hee then

So-hee look away because she blushed

 

‘’ah~ I remember, you like watching movie right? We should watch, what you want to watch…

Horror? Comedy? Chick flick…’’ Heechul said like a little boy

 

‘’or your favorites: 8 women, science of sleep, or cruel intentions…’’ Heechul keep saying things

 

‘’Heechul-ah’’ So-hee cut him off and Heechul looked at her

 

‘’I’m g-getting m-married’’ So-hee said stuttering because she’s kinda scared of Heechul might

exploded

 

‘’mwoh???’’ Heechul said calmly but he already have tears in his eyes

 

‘’mianhe…’’


 

*back in the rest house*

‘’AHHHHHHHHHHHHH’’ Donghae scream and ruffles his hair

 

‘’Hae, what’s wrong my baby?’’ Eunhyuk came closer to him

 

‘’Yah, don’t disturb me and you’re disgusting” Donghae shout at him… then Eunhyuk was about to

cry… Donghae see it and he feel guilty

 

‘’Ok, Ok, Ok… I’m really sorry if I shouted at you… it’s just that… grgrgrgrggr’’ he hugged

Eunhyuk

 

 ‘’you still don’t have any plan? That’s what you get for getting to confident…’’ ___________

said to him

 

Donghae glared at him then he sees Yesung

 

‘’Yesunggie, my buddy’’ Donghae said putting his arm around Yesung ‘’ you’re going to help me

right???’’ but Yesung just shook his head and walk away bringing his turtle with him

 

Then Donghae see Heechul entering the rest house

 

‘’YES!!! Heechul-hyung you need to help us… Garam high school insulted us and we need to fight

back’’ Donghae said to Heechul but Heechul just keep staring blankly at the air

 

‘’what’s wrong with you hyung?’’ Donghae keep waving his hand in front Heechul but Heechul

walked away

 

‘’w-wait’’ Donghae block him

 

‘’Aren’t you have pride for our school??? The Garam is challenging us…’’ Donghae keep pursuing

Heechul

 

‘’Aniyo’’ Heechul said

 

‘’but-‘’ Donghae was about to said something

 

‘’I DON’T CARE’’ Heechul shouted and everyone was shocked

 

‘’sorry but ask somebody to help you’’ Heechul quickly walk away

 

Everyone just looked at him especially Sungmin

 

‘’but who else want to help us???” Donghae said disappointed and Yesung just patted his shoulder

 

‘’insulting Nadam high school is a crime’’ they hear someone said then they turned around

‘’We need to punish who ever do that’’ Kangin and Ryeowook said

 

‘’AISH, Why are you guys here?’’ Donghae shouted

 

KYUHYUN POV

I was sitting on the floor, exhausted from training… then Leeteuk sit with me and give me a

bottle of water…

 

‘’so how the training for you???’’ he asked me

 

‘’I already tired getting just to get my energy back’’ then Leeteuk just laugh

 

‘’but I’m really glad you came back to train’’ Leeteuk said giving me an Kimbap good, I’m really

hungry after that long training

 

‘’From what I see, the one who have talent should really work hard’’ he said but I just keep eating

 

‘’yah, are you listening? Your love for High jumping changed but your attitude still the same…

Evil and naughty’’ Leeteuk said to me and I just glared at him

 

‘’Anyway, since __________ arrive to our school… you really change back’’ He said and I stop

from eating…

 

‘’now eat this… you need to gain your energy back’’ he said offering the food

 

‘’you’re really sounding like my mother’’ I look at him in disgust

 

‘’Aish, just eat it’’ he shoved the food to my mouth I’m really thankful to Leeteuk… he’s the one

that really believes in me

 

  

DONGHAE POV

 

Donghae-shi , sorry to bother you but I know you’re doing some good things… hope you do well…

HWAITING <3

 

-Seohyun

 

I just looked at my cell phone… I should really stop doing this, she might get hurt in the end

 

‘’Donghae-ah’’ __________ called me then I quickly hide my cell phone

 

‘’w-what i-is i-it?’’ I said stuttering

 

‘’why are you stuttering??? Anyway, do you have Kyuhyun cell phone number?’’ he said shyly

 

‘’ahhhhh, I know his old one but I think he already changed number recently’’ I said to him and he

just nodded

 

‘’why? Do you need anything to ask him?’’ I asked

 

‘’Aniyo’’ he quickly replied

 

‘’but I’m really happy for Kyuhyun’’ I said looking at the beach… it’s was already night and the

beach look so wonderful

 

‘’he go back again to the training camp’’ I said sitting and the staircase then I feel __________

sit beside me

 

‘’me too… I’m really glad for him’’ he said

 

I look at him… he’s staring at the beach too, he’s smiling genuine…

 

‘’tomorrow, at the challenge we’re not going to lose’’ I said to him

 

‘’I will try my best to win… even though Kyuhyun is not here we will win’’ I put my fist in the air

 

‘’your right… HWAITING’’ we will not going to lose

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ahh... Finally~ i updated kekekekke... i really miss my reader. I'm really happy because of many new subscibers and commentors... thank you again to those who congratulate me  :))) so what do you think of this chapter??? hope you enjoy it :)))

NOTICE: i may not update for a looonnnnngggggggg time... i'm really sorry, something came up.

we're going to have a vacation somewhere.. well, i don't know... maybe in JAPAN... yehey~~~ but i'm

not sure yet because of the incident right... we might just vacation somewhere in philippines but i

really want to go there... we already plan it out but because of the disaster we may not go there... but

still i'm sorry again... i don't know how long this trip is but i will try my best to update and find way

ok???

KAMSAHAMNIDA ~ SARANGHAE <3

Now HERE's your favorite

BONUS KYU

Kyuhyun~ you should help your wife not the Monkey

Heechul is too beautiful to be one of Wonder girls :)))

Yesung is being traumatized~

and even Kangin...

Sungmin's strawberry shortcake

this is really confusing, don't you think??? kekekek

Donghae~ you are hurting Hyukkie

the other version... kekekek

TSK!TSK! Even siwon got influenced by EVILKYU

Childish Hae ft. annoyed Yesung

How sweet Kyuhyunnie~

what's the problem Donghae?? aren't you happy??? kekekek and Leeteuk what do you mean by granpa, it's GRANDMA...

Hankyung protect heechul from that SHISUS-guy

he need antidote...well~ where is it??? nah, he's kinda cute in that way

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mistressdean
#1
I love how you match the characters up perfectly haha they totally fit their roles ^^ especially kyuhyunnie
hairdryer
#2
I clicked on the randoms tory button and it brought me here ^^
Love Hana Kimi XD
kazeryu23
#3
yesung as kayashima?? gawd. that was the best! :))))
I can really imagine yesungie playing his part! XD
tenmachan
#4
hahak..i love hana kimi so much... when i read that SM will release hanakimi korean version,i always ask who suit for oscar chac??? heechul?? then i read this foreword..laughing so much that my stomach hurt.. u very good choose the characters...lol..poor wookie.. and yoona 4.. aigoo~ but bout sungmin...he too cute!
ChoKyute
#5
PLEASE UPDATE SOON~~~~;w; T^T
naznew #6
i falling in love with your story..please update soon..
KyeopTaemin #7
I BEG YOU ( kneels down ) please update your story.... THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ
zhiara25
#8
update soon...<br />
please i want to read more of this...
Ainaeunchul
#9
update please..
zhiara25
#10
new reader here i think yesung fit to be Kayashima Taiki the one who reads aura hehehe...<br />