Mr.Neul Paran

Hana Kimi (super junior version)

‘’who is he???’’

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DONGHAE POV

That’s so embarrassing. In what happened to the restaurant, why is this happening to me??? *sigh*

 

Here we are, in the park. We were just talking about random things, walking. Then he stopped.

 

‘’Wae?’’ I looked at him then he holds my hand and hides in the bush.

 

*dugeun* *dugeun* *dugeun**dugeun* *dugeun* *dugeun* my heart keeps beating like crazy NOT

THIS AGAIN

 

‘’ ‘’w-w-w-w-w what are you doing?’’ I asked him. IS THIS LEGAL? DO YOU LOVE ME TOO I

KEEP LOOKING AT HIM

 

‘’over there’’ he pointed ‘’ Kyuhyun and someone talking over there…’’ then I look at where he

pointed out

 

‘’eh???’’ I asked him

 

‘’who is he???’’ oh~ that’s was closed I thought…

 

‘’Ah, That’s Choi Siwon.’’

 

 

YOUR POV

‘’Ah, That’s Choi Siwon.’’ He said to me ‘’he competed with Kyuhyun in national competition’’ Ahhhhhh,

that’s why he looked familiar to me. I look at him again

 

‘’what are they talking about?’’ I keep wondering then I think of a plan

 

‘’come on’’ I grab Donghae ‘’ I don’t think this is a good idea’’ I hear him say

 

‘’its ok, come on’’ then we transfer to the tree that near to them so that I can hear them

 

‘’ you look more weaker Kyuhyun’’ I heard Siwon said *bwoh, who do you think you are*

 

‘’what do you care?’’ Kyuhyun said ‘’I’ve already quit so don’t bother anymore’’ he was about to walk

away

 

Then I heard Siwon ‘’how about joining the next national competition before quitting?’’ I see him

smirk but I hope Kyuhyun said yes

 

Kyuhyun look at him ‘’No’’ *sigh I know that’s he going to say’’

 

‘’why??? Are you afraid???’’ I heard Siwon chuckled ‘’I think that you are just afraid, you already

heal but you don’t have a guts to jump again’’

 

‘’aish’’ I was about to go there when Donghae stop me

 

‘’let me go’’ Donghae keep stopping me ‘’ let him be, that’s Siwon personalities’’ Donghae look at me

*sigh* ‘’ ok fine but if he insulted Kyuhyun again’’ Donghae just nodded

 

‘’what do you know about it???’’ that’s it Kyuhyun Hwaiting

 

‘’I know everything” that cocky Siwon said again *oh how I hate him* ‘’you just don’t know what to

do so you quit. So you are having excuse there or there. You are really a sissy Kyuhyun’’ *OK

THAT’S IT*

 

‘’YAH’’ I called him, Donghae keep stopping but I can’t take it anymore

 

‘’who are you to insult Kyuhyun like that ha? A guy like you always be no. 2 to him so stop insulting

him’’ I said to him

 

Siwon scoffed ‘’who are this girly-idiot?’’ he said *why you*

 

‘’I’M NOT A GIRLY IDIOT’’ ‘’I’m a guy” I said to him proudly

 

‘’are you… you know? Interested in him too?’’ Donghae said and we just looked him weirdly

 

‘’hahahhahah, Kyuhyun is this idiots your friends?’’ Siwon said cockily

 

‘’Yes, were friends, and Kyuhyun never lose to a guy like you’’ I stick my tongue out

 

‘’yes, that’s right’’ then I feel Donghae hand touch me. Then he fell on the ground. I just keep my

eyebrow high. ‘’do I have a disease?’’

 

‘’HAHHAHAHAH, Kyuhyun I know why you like that, because you have weirdly friend here’’ then

Siwon walk away

 

‘’that’s right walk away’’ then I look at Kyuhyun and smiled to him but he walk away too.

 

NARRATOR POV

”HAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAH”’ Ryeowook keep laughing like he was

possessed

 

‘’what the matter with our dorm leader?’’ one of the member said ‘’ I don’t know, he’s so weird

lately’’ ‘’isn’t he weird after all???’’

 

‘’HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA’’  then Ryeowook shouted

 

Then he’s head starting to turn around like an exorcist ‘’hahhahhahhaha, I’m curse I tell you,

CURSEDDDDDDDDDDDD’’

 

‘’omo, he’s cursed. Go tell Yesung what to do’’ ‘’we need his help’’

 

‘’hahhhahahhahahhahahhahahhahahhahaha’’ Ryeowook keep laughing

 

YOUR POV

‘’Kyuhyun shi, are you sleeping???’’ I was lying to my bed he doesn’t answer *maybe he is still angry

to me*

 

‘’*sigh* don’t worry about it” I said to him and I hide to my blanket

 

*next day*

 

KYUHYUN POV

I was walking Sanggeun when I saw the track and field. *sigh* aish

‘’how long do you keep planning to hide there?’’ I know he’s here, do you know how I do it? Of

course I know everything. I’m the great CHO KYUHYUN.

 

___________ went out where he’s hiding then run to Sanggeun and pet him. We played with

Sanggeun then we sit.

 

‘‘how long do you know Sanggeun?’’ he asked me ‘’a year ago, it was raining and I saw him alone so I

take him.’’

 

‘’since then, we always take the same path whenever we walk’’ ‘’everyday, I went here, and see the

fields’’

 

‘’but I can only watch, there’s nothing I can do’’I don’t know why I am telling this to him but I feel

comfortable

 

‘’Siwon right’’ I pet Sanggeun ‘’I am afraid. I’m afraid to stand at this field’’

 

‘’so that’s the reason you left?’’ he said and I just look at him

 

‘’its ok, there’s no need to rush.’’ Then he looked at me and smile. Why does he have to smile at me?

I just looked away

 

‘’why don’t you understand?’’ I said to him ‘’neh?’’ he said to me

 

‘’you really annoyed me, do you know that?’’ I looked at him then I stand and walk away

 

‘’I DON’T CARE’’ I heard him scream. I looked at him. ‘’you are already healed, so there’s no way

you can’t jump again’’ he went near to me

 

‘’you could –‘’ I cut him off ‘’SHUP UP OK???’’ he looked shocked when I said

 

‘’I. Don’t. Want. To. Jump. Again. Ok???” I looked at him annoyed

 

‘’you will jump again one day, I’ll promise that’’ he said and I just scoffed to what he said and walk

away

 

NARRATOR POV

‘’Ok, ladies and gentlemen, here we are at the Neul Paran auditorium to start our Mr. and Ms. Neul

Paran. Now let’s started.’’ Mr. Lee said. They all cheered.

 

The first one is the Yoona4. They started to dance.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mcuPOqv40hk&feature=related

 

(Pretend that is them)

 

The second one is Yoona. All the boys are cheering for him.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjBplkjHs4A&feature=related

 

She started to act cute the boys. (no bashing pls hehehhe)

 

‘’aish, she sure look like a cutie cute but I won’t waste any film to you’’ Jessica said

 

*meanwhile*

 

‘’RAWRWWRWRRWRWRWRR’’ Ryeowook said. He look pale and have a big eyebag.

 

‘’Ryeowook shi are you ok??’’ one of asked him

 

‘’rrrrrrrr, I asked Yesunggie to take away the cursed inside-e-e’’ he said creepy ‘’but more

EVVVVVVIIILLLL spririt possessed meeeeeeee hahhahahhahahha’’ he said. All of his was scared and

panicking because they don’t know what to do.

 

Then a mystery sound came in again ‘’ it’s my first time to failed’’ then disappeared

 

*back to the auditorium*

 

‘’now to the Ms. Neul Paran has ended. Let’s get started the Mr. Neul Paran. 1st contestant Kim

RYEOWOOK’’

 

‘’hahahhahhahahhahah, I’m not RYEOWOOK HAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHHA’’ he’s head keep turning

around

 

…………………………………… all the student was shock

 

‘’0-ok let’s proceed to the n-next one’’

 

‘’ok that’s weird’’ heechul said ‘’yah, heechul ah’’ Kangin called him

 

‘’Kyuhyun, Donghae and _________ are not here yet. Do you think you can win?’’ Kangin said to

Heechul

 

‘’hahaha, do you think where going to lose like that’’ then he stop laughing then he see the dorm 2

 

‘’aye, all of come here. Faster ppali ppali (hurry)’’

 

They all gathered ‘’ ok this is what we are going to Sungmin, Leeteuk go find __________. Yesung

and Eunhyuk find Donghae and the rest find Kyuhyun.’’ Heechul said to s

 

‘’if we win the LCD we could…’’ he whisper to the members and they all smile creepily. ‘’now

GOOOOOO’’

 

They all searching for the three. ‘’kyuhyunnie’’ ‘’donghae’’ ‘’__________’’ they keep looking around

 

*In the auditorium*

 

‘’ let’s all applause to Kangin who perform a great judo skill.’’ And they cheered and then Kangin

take a bow

 

‘’now next to perform is Eunhyuk from dorm 2’’

 

Eunhyuk

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAJDovtCm6E&feature=related

He shouted ‘’SISTAHHHHHHHHH’’

 

Then he started to copy the dance and even the dorm 2 played with him

 

‘’ok, that’s enough. Let’s applause to Eunhyuk who bring as a great laughter’’

 

‘’the next one Leeteuk who is playing piano’’

 

Leeteuk

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=648ZJIBGCs4

 

they were all silent and touch to Leeteuk played

 

‘’yeheyyyyyyy’’ then Leeteuk take a bow

 

‘’that’s a very touching performance from Leeteuk now get to the next one is Sungmin and his magic’’

 

Sungmin

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjJp0sIEArw

 

he have an a beautiful assistant that all the student in the auditorium was shock to see Sungmin

with a girl

 

‘’THAT WAS UNBELIEVABLE’’ Mr. Lee said

 

‘’the next one is Donghae that will be dancing’’

 

Donghae

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rYhjOq920pU

 

Donghae is great dancing that everyone was wowed

 

While this is happening ‘’where are they???’’ heechul said

 

‘’we can’t find them’’

 

‘’what are we going to do???’’

 

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so how's it????

do you like it

sorry it's kinda boring

hahahhahahha

I heard kyuhyun is ok now so you don't have to worries

he's now filming the mv with KRY for the SUPERSTAR K3 ost

KYUHYUN INJURED HAND

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mistressdean
#1
I love how you match the characters up perfectly haha they totally fit their roles ^^ especially kyuhyunnie
hairdryer
#2
I clicked on the randoms tory button and it brought me here ^^
Love Hana Kimi XD
kazeryu23
#3
yesung as kayashima?? gawd. that was the best! :))))
I can really imagine yesungie playing his part! XD
tenmachan
#4
hahak..i love hana kimi so much... when i read that SM will release hanakimi korean version,i always ask who suit for oscar chac??? heechul?? then i read this foreword..laughing so much that my stomach hurt.. u very good choose the characters...lol..poor wookie.. and yoona 4.. aigoo~ but bout sungmin...he too cute!
ChoKyute
#5
PLEASE UPDATE SOON~~~~;w; T^T
naznew #6
i falling in love with your story..please update soon..
KyeopTaemin #7
I BEG YOU ( kneels down ) please update your story.... THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ
zhiara25
#8
update soon...<br />
please i want to read more of this...
Ainaeunchul
#9
update please..
zhiara25
#10
new reader here i think yesung fit to be Kayashima Taiki the one who reads aura hehehe...<br />