MARATHON...

Hana Kimi (super junior version)

‘’ bring down _______, ok???’’ mystery guy said

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YOUR POV

‘’finally’’ Heechul having a meeting with the dorm 2 ‘’ it’s all we’ve been waiting for, tomorrow is the

marathon‘’ they all cheer.

 

‘’shhhh’’ ‘’ the special award has been announced’’ then all the dorm 2 became quite.

 

‘’ the dorm who wins get …’’

 

‘’WEEKEND OFF- CAMPUS ALL YEAR~~~~~~~~~’’ He shouted and the whole students are

cheering. They all jumping and shouting around.

 

Is that important??? I thought. Then I went Heechul who is also jumping with happiness.

 

‘’ is that really a GREAT award???’’ I asked him then he wrapped his arm in my shoulder ‘’ he

doesn’t like skin ship don’t he??? ‘’ I thought sarcastically

 

‘’of course, if we get that award…’’ ‘’ I can meet BOA, SULLI, VICTORIA, and many more’’ he start

drooling again. Then Sungmin get in ‘’ it will a very special day for you, hyung’’ the he hug Heechul

from the waist. I can see that Heechul is shocked for sudden appearance of Sungmin.

 

‘’ if there’s a blocked in your way I will take care of them’’ he whisper to heechul that seem to hear

a ghost whispering to his ear. I just look at them and I find it very funny then Sungmin look at me.

‘’WAE?!’’ then he went out.

 

NARRATOR POV

‘’neh, tell appa (dad) that I’m going to visit him next weekend.’’ Donghae said on the phone.

‘’Tell him that I miss him and get better ‘’ Donghae hung up. He was about to go to their room when

suddenly Yesung appeared.

 

‘’oh~’’ Donghae was shocked ‘’ you scared out of me, ehheheh’’

 

‘’ did you see a ghost or something?’’ he went over to Yesung but Yesung just shook his head.

‘’alright’’ then he was going to their room.

 

‘’Is your appa ok, Donghae?’’ then Donghae stop. ‘’ yeah, he doesn’t have much time to live’’ then he

leaned on the wall. Then Yesung went near him and patted his shoulder. ‘’ he told me that put the

others before myself, but I never know what that’s even mean.’’

 

‘’ but if I win tomorrow, I could visit him every weekend’’ Yesung just nodded

 

‘’there is no way that we could lose the marathon’’ Donghae said with full of determination.

 

‘’we will definitely win, especially ___________ are there’’ then Donghae look at him. ‘‘ANIYO’’ ‘’

I’m going to win this’’ then Donghae walk away while Yesung just looked at him.

 

Kyuhyun POV

I’m playing a game when I hear _________...

 

‘’ are you sleeping???’’

 

‘’yes, I’m asleep’’ is he stupid or not… what if I’m truly asleep do you think there’s someone to

answered you

 

‘’ Kyuhyun shi, sorry yesterday... I didn't mean to-’’ he said ‘’ then why do you have those

articles???’’ I said. I keep wondering why he has those.

 

‘’ the truth is that I’m a fan of yours. I already knew you high jump’’ ‘’ a year ago, I was watching

when I saw you high jump’’ ‘’ it was my first time to see that someone could jump so beautiful’’

 

I turn off my game and said to him ‘’ I already forgotten about the past’’ then I put the blanket

over me. Then he begun to sing ‘’ I cannot forget… I like that person’’ I was shocked about that but

I shrug it off.

 

‘’ then you’ve already forgotten what you’ve said before?’’ what?

 

‘’hard work will definitely rewarded’’ ‘’ the rest…’’ ‘’… is to believe in yourself’’ I open my eyes

quickly as I heard that.

 

‘’you said that in the magazine’’ ‘’ those words inspired me’’ ‘’ you’ve put an endless effort in you high

jumping. That’s your everything, right??’’ ‘’ So that’s why-‘’

 

‘’STOP’’ I said ‘’ who are you to said that to me? You don’t understand. I quit because I didn’t want

to do it anymore’’ ‘’besides I’m not going to die if I’m not going to jump again’’

 

‘’ you will die’’ he said neh???

 

‘’someone who can lie to themselves is…’’ ‘’lonely and in pain’’

 

 ‘’about the marathon, if I win could I see you high jump again?’’ I scoffed then stand up.

 

I look at him ‘’ do you think you can decide what I should or shouldn’t do???’’ I just rolled my eyes

and went out.

 

‘’ if I win, I want to see you jump KYUHYUN shi’’ I still hear him said

 

‘’lonely…pain…lonely…pain…lonely…pain…’’ is that how I feel? Is that what I’m feeling right now?’’

 

NARRATOR POV

*next day*

 

‘’THE 30TH ANNUAL NEUL PARAN HIGH DORM COMPETITION’’

 

All the girls from the outside coming in. There’s a band playing. Merchandises are selling. All of

the students are getting ready for the coming event.

‘’hmmm, although the award is great, isn’t the principal playing with us??’’ heechul said to the dorm

heads.

 

‘’ the principal is just putting us to a test’’ Kangin said posing with judo style

 

‘’ Aniyo, it’s all about intelligence and creativity, hahahahhah’’ Ryeowook laughed again

 

You were looking around then someone step on your feet. ‘’ouch’’ it’s really painful for you. You look

around and see who did it but you can’t find him then Donghae went to you.

 

‘’ may the best man wins’’ then he went back. You see your feet it’s bleeding.

 

‘’ATHLETES ENTER’’

 

All the dorm leaders are went in one by one. All the girls were cheering and the band started

playing.

 ‘’ principal, everyone is ready’’ Mr. Lee said

 

‘’ok!’’ Yuri runs to the window and all of the student see her and they all cheered.\

 

She was holding a gun as a starter. ‘’ are you going to fire from here???’’ Mr. Lee said nervously

‘’neh, cover the ears’’ and Mr. Lee quickly cover his ears. ‘’not you pabo, mine…’’ Yuri said ‘’ oh~

mianhe’’ with that Mr. Lee cover Yuri’s ear

‘’ok, be ready students’’ then all the student went to the starting line

 

*BANG*

 

All of the students starting to run. Heechul is the one who is leading then a woman pull him to the

side.

 

‘’this is the girls name you’re currently seeing now’’ the girl show a paper and heechul took it.

 

‘’BWOH? It’s nothing really honey. It’s fake.’’ Then he caressed the face of that woman.

 

‘’Honey??’’ then there’s another girl from his behind. Heechul was shock through this.

 

‘’ I can understand if you date one more but 15’’ ‘’I –‘’ heechul was about to explain but another girl

cut in ‘’ what is the meaning of this’’ ‘’ are you playing with us’’ heechul was so confuse on what to do

‘’ Sungmin! Take care of everything ah-‘’ ‘’what is the meaning of these!!!!!!!’’

 

‘’CHULLIE BELONGS TO ME’’ Sungmin said and run away.

 

In the other side, you are leading the marathon even your foot is still bleeding.

 

*in the bathroom*

 

Some guys are talking

 

‘’__________ is still leading, what are we going to do?’’ some guy said

 

‘’don’t worry his foot is already spiked’’ then one of cubicle’s room opened and it was…Kyuhyun

‘’ tell me all you know’’

 

The guys was shock and was about to run but Kyuhyun blocked they way.

 

‘’ is this Kangin order?’’ he was holding the neck of that guy

 

‘’no, it was our own decision’’ the guy said ‘’ if we don’t win… Kangin will punish us’’

 

Kyuhyun scoffed ‘’ you spike somebody’s feet in order to win so that you will not be punish?” hold

the neck harder, then the guy said ‘’ it’s more painful than you know’’

 

‘’then tell that to Kangin’’ then Kyuhyun punch the guy face. The guy is now on the ground ‘’ you guys

are so pathetic’’ then he walked away.

 

*on the other side*

 

‘’Come on guys faster’’ Ryeowook said to s. They all gathered together and they changes

clothes. The camera girl caught that and takes a picture. She sends it to the principal and the

principal saw that. '' the dorm 3 is cheating even the dorm head''

 

‘’ all dorm 3 are disqualified’’

 

The news quickly spread and Ryeowook knew about this.

 

“OH~ MY SCHEME-‘’ then he fainted ‘’Ryeowook, Ryeowook’’ calling him

 

‘’hard work will definitely rewarded’’ that saying keep running to your mind.

 

You are behind Donghae and he was behind Kangin. * I need to win* you thought

 

‘’hey, __________’’ ‘’ your foot is bleeding, you should stop now’’ Donghae pointed at your foot.

You just ignored him. ‘’why did you push your hard?’’ ‘’I want to see him smile again’’ then you run

off and passed him ‘’him?’’ Donghae left dumbfounded

 

‘’ the athletes are starting to return’’ Mr. Shin said in the microphone. ‘’ who will come first?’’ ‘’ oh!

Here’s our leading group –‘’ ‘’IT’S _____________’’

 

Kyuhyun, who is watching too, see _________ leading.

 

‘’__________! _________! __________!’’

 

All of the student cheering and shouting for you. Kyuhyun staring to look worried because you’re

starting to slow down and Kangin has passed you.

 

‘’Kangin, came to lead’’ you still trying to catch up with him and you’ve passed him but then you fell

down because your feet starting to feel so much pain.

 

Then Donghae and Kangin already passed you. You were holding your feet in pain. ‘’argh~ argh~’’

then Donghae stop running and see you suffering.

 

Kyuhyun quickly went down and run to you and Donghae see that. Then Donghae run to you too.

 

‘’DORM  1’s KANGIN IS THE WINNER’’ Mr. Shin announced

 

‘’gwenchana? (are you ok)’’ Kyuhyun said to you checking your feet.

 

‘’I’ll bring Dr. Hankyung’’ Donghae said. You still bearing the pain you feel.

 

‘’ can you still stand up?’’ the Kyuhyun help you stand up and piggyback you. You were shocked

because you never seen this Kyuhyun before.

 

(imagine that you are the one who is piggyback by Kyuhyun)

 

 ‘’S-sorry, I-I cou-couldn’t finish the race’’ you hugged Kyuhyun neck

 

‘’ why am I feel jealous over that?’’ Yoona said then all the starting to clap.

 

‘’___________! ____________! ____________!’’ they still cheering and clapping for you.

 

‘’with this, whether the kid learned or not, it look likes many flower will blossom.’’ Yuri said to Mr.

Lee ‘’ I think my job here is done.’’ ‘’ I will come back again, so please take care of them Mr. Lee’’.

 

*In the clinic*

‘’How is he?’’ Kyuhyun asked Hankyung

 

‘’ well, he’s ok now, nothing’s serious. He sure know how to endure the pain’’ Hankyung putting a

bandaged on your feet.

 

Kyuhyun was about to leave ‘’ yah” Donghae called him ‘’neh?’’

 

‘’ are you really not going to jump again?’’ Donghae look at him with hope but Kyuhyun just was

walked away.

 

*meanwhile*

‘’ is that so?’’ Donghae was talking with Yesung ‘’ he was already in critical condition when you

called.’’

 

‘’why I am always late in this important moments?’’ Donghae just sit in the bench

‘’ you’re father is still here… behind you’’ Yesung pointed behind Donghae.

 

 ‘’ he must be proud at you right now.’’ ‘’ for you to stop the race and help _______’’

 

‘’ put others before……myself’’

 

‘’ you made it on time’’ Yesung said then Donghae look behind him. ‘’from now on, I can see you

everyday’’ then Donghae smiled at Yesung and walked away.

 

*in the clinic*

 

‘’hmmmmmm’’ you are starting to wake up

 

‘’where am I?’’ you said while rubbing your head

 

‘’in the clinic, thanks to you I’m working overtime’’ Hankyung said

 

‘’mianhe’’ you were about to stand up then your feet starting to ache. ‘’ah~’’ you hold your foot.

 

‘’no, it’s ok just stay.’’ ‘’I want to ask you something’’ then he went near you

 

‘’neh?’’ you still holding your foot

 

‘’What is… a girl doing in the boy school’’

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mistressdean
#1
I love how you match the characters up perfectly haha they totally fit their roles ^^ especially kyuhyunnie
hairdryer
#2
I clicked on the randoms tory button and it brought me here ^^
Love Hana Kimi XD
kazeryu23
#3
yesung as kayashima?? gawd. that was the best! :))))
I can really imagine yesungie playing his part! XD
tenmachan
#4
hahak..i love hana kimi so much... when i read that SM will release hanakimi korean version,i always ask who suit for oscar chac??? heechul?? then i read this foreword..laughing so much that my stomach hurt.. u very good choose the characters...lol..poor wookie.. and yoona 4.. aigoo~ but bout sungmin...he too cute!
ChoKyute
#5
PLEASE UPDATE SOON~~~~;w; T^T
naznew #6
i falling in love with your story..please update soon..
KyeopTaemin #7
I BEG YOU ( kneels down ) please update your story.... THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ
zhiara25
#8
update soon...<br />
please i want to read more of this...
Ainaeunchul
#9
update please..
zhiara25
#10
new reader here i think yesung fit to be Kayashima Taiki the one who reads aura hehehe...<br />