YOU

Hana Kimi (super junior version)

YOUR POV...

"you  dinner's ready'' your mom said..

 

'' Later mom, im watching t.v. ''

 

then there's a knock on the door...

 

your to busy watching so you didn't hear it then someone touch your shoulder

 

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....

 

"mom??? you scared out of me..you should knock first''

 

'' honey, ive been knocking your door but you didn't answer so I open the door...what

are you doing anyway ?? Your food going to be cold come down to eat'' your mom

said..

 

'' Mom im watching my favorite athlete, the high jumper Cho Kyuhyun''

'' oh...the young high jumper ''

 

'' deh, he's the best in high jumping.''

 

'' You have a crush on him,dont you???''mom said

 

''MOM!! I only idolize because he inspired me...but he's kinda cute''

 

''hehehehe,, ok honey but after you watch tv.. eat your dinner ok???''

 

''ok mom''

 

                           Hi,,, im you... im living here in united states but im korean. My

mother and father are korean but we move here because of my father's job... As you

see,, im watching my favorite athlete Cho Kyuhyun. He's a good high jumper and he

inspired me. I've been idolize him since i read a magazine about him. He's studying in

Neul paran high school, 180 cm tall , blood type a , his bday is february 03. Since

then i already like  idolize him....ahemmmm hehheh

 

NARRATOR POV

‘’WAHHHHHHHHHHHHH’’

 

Your mom heard the scream and quickly goes to your room…

 

‘’honey what’s wrong? What’s happening? Are you ok?’’ your mom said while panicking

 

‘’KYUHYUN GOING HERE TO TRAIN, YEHEY’’ jumping in excitement

 

‘’ that’s it??? You’re screaming because of that??? ‘’ she said it with a slightly

irritated

 

‘’ Mom I’m sorry I didn’t mean to scream like that, I’m just excited’’ you explained

while looking in ground for being sorry

 

‘’ it’s ok honey. But next time don’t scream like that, you’ve got me worried.’’ ‘’ you

really LIKE kyuhyun don’t you??’’

 

“MOM !! I don’t LIKE him, I IDOLIZE him. That’s very different word with each

other.’’ While doing the bunny sign

 

‘’ ok.. you IDOLIZE him, it’s that ok to you now?? Hahaha ’’ your mom said while

copying the bunny sign

 

‘’mom!!’’ you whined.. ‘’by the way mom, from what I said kyuhyun is going here to train

in the training camp!!’’ you said jumping

 

‘’Really?? That is not really far from here honey..’’

 

‘’I really want to see him, can I mom???’’ showing your aegyo to your mom

 

‘’ of course, honey.’’ While pinching your checks. ‘’ ‘’so when is it??’’

 

‘’Tomorrow afternoon’’

 

‘’Ok honey, but remember to sleep early ok???’’

 

‘’ Ok mom good night, love you’’ hugging your mom

 

‘’ good night, love you too honey’’ kissing your forehead

 

Your POV

Oh my god~ oh my god ~ I can’t wait till tomorrow!! What shall I wear? Is he going

to like me or hate me??I hope not.. I can’t sleep , ahhhhh , I’m so excited..

 

*NEXT DAY*

 

cRRRRIIIINNNNGGG~~~ CrrrrrrIIInnnnnGGG ~~

 

‘’ ahhhgrgrgrggrggrggr, s-s-t-o0p’’ you whined as your alarm clock ring

 

‘’what time is it?? I'm still sleepy… 0_0 0_0 0_0

11:30 am

‘’AHHHHHHHHHH!!! Oh my god, I’m late!!!’’ as you struggle to your blanket and accidently fall…

 

!!!!!!!!!!!PAKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

‘’o-o-u-c-c-h-‘’ as your face flat to the ground

 

You quickly took a bath and get ready as you go down…

 

‘’m-ouo-nuirng mo-oum, daoud’’ as you chew your food hungry

 

‘’Honey, slow down. You might choke. So, how’s your sleep?? Did you sleep well??

 

‘’mom why didn’t you wake me?? I’m late…’’

 

‘’I’m sorry honey but you sleep so peaceful… I don’t want to bother you anymore…’’

 

‘’ it’s ok mom, I’m going now mom…’’as you packed your bag

 

‘’And where do you think missy??’’ your dad questioned as you nervously turn back

 

‘’OH dd-ad, didn’t I tell you?? Uhmm I- I – I have a – ihaveaprojectinscholtoday~’’ 

you said like you’re going to pee in your pants (hahhahah)

 

‘’project?? In school?? But It’s Sunday… ‘’your dad look at you suspiciously

 

*OH NO, why didn’t think about that??* You taught.

 

‘’Honey, let your daughter go already she’s a big girl already’’ your mom said

 

*yesss~~ thanks mom* as you mouthed to your mom

 

‘’ but honey we need to discipline our child so she turned better person in the future’’

your dad keep arguing with your mom

 

*dad please just let me go this time * as you whined in your head

 

‘’ honey, she need to see other people, too… she hardly have a friend because you

don’t allow her togo out’’ you explained to your dad

 

‘’ but –‘’

 

‘’ and remember the incident, no one… I mean NO ONE ever courted or talked to our

daughter…

 

*grrrggrgrgr* as you remember that day

 

~flashback~

‘’oh hi, can I ask you where is the principal office here’’ as a guy talked to you as he

smiled to you omo he's kinda cute hehehheheh

’ oh you just go to the second floor then turn to your right and—‘’ you cut off by your dad

 

“_________ WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING!!!’’

 

‘’DAD??’’ as you looked your dad weirdly

 

‘’ WHO ARE YOU??WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO WITH MY DAUGHTER??

IF YOU GET NEAR TO MY DAUGHTER AGAIN… I WILL KILL YOU RIGHT IN

FRONT OF THE WHOLE SCHOOL..’’  your dad talked to the guy while giving a

deadly glare.. Honestly, if glare could kill the guy is already loooooong gone…

 

‘’ DAD, aishhhhhh’’ you walked away as you embarrass to the whole school

 

‘’ honey I’m just protecting you to that GUY’’

 

‘’ he was just ASKING FOR DIRECTION’’ as you irritatingly answered your dad

 

‘’But that’s where all started… they all asked for direction and next you will know

they will be asking where your bed…is’’

 

‘’DAD” as you blush thinking about it

 

AND THAT WHERE YOUR HIGH SCHOOL LIFE RUINED
 

*RETURNING TO THE STORY*

You shivered thinking about it

 

‘’ Honey you could go to your SCHOOL to do your PROJECT… just be careful ok??’’

your mom said while winking at you

 

‘’hehehehe mom thanks’’ you whisper to her

 

‘’anything for my lovely baby daughter’’ pinching your cheeks

 

‘’MOM!! I’m not a baby anymore’’ *pouts*

 

‘’ ok honey, go now you will be late’’ your mom assist you to the door

 

‘’ok mom I’ll be going…’’ ‘’bye mom’’ you kiss her in the cheeks ‘’ bye dad, sorry’’ as you

kiss your father

 

‘’ok, but if I see you with other guy again you know what will happen’’

 

‘’DAD!!’’

 

‘’honey don’t worry… your father just kidding around now off you go’’ your mom said

 

‘’ ok mom~ bye mom~ bye dad~~’’ as you waved them goodbye

 

As you’re far…

 

‘’ I wasn’t kidding’’ you dad looked you mom

 

‘’ just let it go honey, you have many thing to do’’

 

‘’BUT---‘’

 

“Love you too honey’’ as she kiss him

 

‘’aish honey your always kiss me when I’m angry, but I love you too’’ as he return the kiss

 

THAT’S WHY I LOVE THEM………

Do you like it??

I hope you like it~~

I know kyuhyun still haven’t shown up

Promise next chapter he will be there

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

COMMENT REPLY

hahhahha
tnx to all the comments
i really appreciate it


@Ladyscorpio
hahhah ur ryt school project is just an excuse it happened to me once hahahhah

Tnx for subcribe hope you support  me and super junior

@aki-chan
i know.... i was thinking of yesung but some one said it's said wookie is he's better to be oscar because in the attack on the pin up boy they really clicked,, shin sano is serious and i think kibum is really the best character i think to act this role

Tnx for subcribe hope you support  me and super junior

@bluesujulove15
tnx for loving my story, i watched the japanese vr. they aired it here but it's a long time so i dont really remember well.. i update soon as posible

Tnx for subcribe hope you support  me and super junior

@trueblooded_ELF
i love them too
i love nakatsu too he's do funny and weird hehehh
im sorry i changed eunhyuk because one of my friend said that donghae is better hope it's ok
i hope that many suju member will gt the role in the HANA KIMI KOREAN VERSION

Tnx for subcribe hope you support  me and super junior

@kim_seul_young
thnx for loving this...:)))
it's really hard to choose the character who going to play the role
yeah your right,i hope that they will follow my characters (hehhehe) or atleast some suju right...????
HWAITING~~

Tnx for subcribe hope you support me and super junior



TO ALL THOSE SUBSCIBE AND LEAVES SOME COMMENTS
I REALLY REALLY APPRECIATE IT
HOPE MORE SUBSCIBER...

I WILL UPDATE SOON I PROMISE TO MY FELLOW WRITER AND READERS
MUAPXXX
SARANGHAE~~~~~~~
~

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
mistressdean
#1
I love how you match the characters up perfectly haha they totally fit their roles ^^ especially kyuhyunnie
hairdryer
#2
I clicked on the randoms tory button and it brought me here ^^
Love Hana Kimi XD
kazeryu23
#3
yesung as kayashima?? gawd. that was the best! :))))
I can really imagine yesungie playing his part! XD
tenmachan
#4
hahak..i love hana kimi so much... when i read that SM will release hanakimi korean version,i always ask who suit for oscar chac??? heechul?? then i read this foreword..laughing so much that my stomach hurt.. u very good choose the characters...lol..poor wookie.. and yoona 4.. aigoo~ but bout sungmin...he too cute!
ChoKyute
#5
PLEASE UPDATE SOON~~~~;w; T^T
naznew #6
i falling in love with your story..please update soon..
KyeopTaemin #7
I BEG YOU ( kneels down ) please update your story.... THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ
zhiara25
#8
update soon...<br />
please i want to read more of this...
Ainaeunchul
#9
update please..
zhiara25
#10
new reader here i think yesung fit to be Kayashima Taiki the one who reads aura hehehe...<br />