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✧༝ ESTRELΔ ༝✧ May the stars shine down on you *:・゚✧*:・゚✧ ON HIATUS

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My character : chosen

Here is where the reviews will go! The middle picture will link to the app. I work with a three strike system. If you're accepted you're good to go, but if you're pending you need to fix some things. If you haven't fixed everything in three tries (which means you don't really pay attention to the reviews and mistakes...) I'll reject your character. I can also reject people on the get-go if the app is really a huge mess. But I'll grant you a second chance with a different character in case that happens... But if you know how to apply, that shouldn't be happening, unless there is just this weird af subject in your app that makes me really uncomfortable... Anyway have fun applying!

 

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my 2nd character : accepted

My second character, Yoon Dohyun, will be present as a backup in case I don't reach enough trainees, but is not guaranteed to be part of the estrela lineup.

 

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CODINGFAIRINA : accepted

HI RINA oh my goddd I woke up to this boy and im so excited cause this is legit the first app to Estrela in TWO YEARS and its this handsome fella? I’m so happy ;w; Also I thought that it was funny to get a Taeyong because Summit’s talent twin is Taeyong lskdjflsl what a coincidence. Oh he’s a mom hell yeah, I love how we keep giving each other mom characters, you give me Kyunhee for the loona inspired story, I give you zack for the loona inspired story, it’s full circle. AND HES JACK FROST JUST LIKE MINJAE OH MY GOD HES A FROST SIBLING THIS IS MY HEADCANON NOW sldkfjdls im jk but I still love this little bit. Why did *Michael Jackson hee hee* sound in my head when I read about the hee-hee nickname. I wouldn’t be surprised if a groupmate ever pulls that one out lol.

Oh he’s so smol, look at that ;w; smol mama, at least Summit will be happy to see that! Omg squishy tummy, no abs in sight. How cute is that (and what a difference compared to dohyun who is musclé af)? Oh god mullet era?? NOT ON MY SIGHT GIRL NO NO NO WAY NO MULLET EVER COMES CLOSE TO MY GROUPS! I cant stand the sight of a mullet D: we’ll see if I ever get over myself to draw him in a mullet but tbh I’m unsure. A ring lip? Boy that’s y oh my lord. His style is so fitting for him but I can see him wearing these oversized clothes and look absolutely adorable while he’s trying to look all cool and . What a bean. I love him.

I’m so happy that we already have a mom figure for estrela cause I mean… it’s definitely going to be needed lmao. We are three boys in now and we already have a horribly insecure unhealthy weight swinging boy and one that breaks everything that he touches and is on the spectrum. Both of them need a momma to keep them in check for sure. God bless savior Rina for giving us what we need. I love how you describe his mama-ness, with the scraped knees and flying fists cause it really gives me the feeling that he’s dealing with a bunch of rowdy boys, and that’s exactly what’s Estrela probably going to be. He’s so considerate, all the little things he does for Estrela, that is so awfully sweet, I’m all soft for him. I feel like my heart’s going to melt away and that I’m developing diabetes at the same time slkdjfsl. He’s seriously such a cute bean, ah. That he’s hot-tempered is so interesting because I am sure that most of the estrela boys wouldn’t expect it. It will be scary, Dohyun might burst into tears cause he’s afraid of conflict. It will be a mess and I am here for it. He’s not just the soft mama, he has some thorns that people have to watch out for. He feels real, he’s not the perfect soft mom, he has his own struggles and not everyone will actually get along with him, but that doesn’t make him a bad person. I love his personality, Rina, you did amazing, as always ;w;

A red velvet stan omg yes he has taste!! And Febreze, I thought that I was the only one who likes the fresh smell of Febreze. I bet he’s spraying it around like mad after a training session lol. Oh he dislikes his mother… I haven’t gotten to his background yet so this makes me very curious… There is drama and heartbreak in store for me, I can feel it. Oh my god that little dance is so cute ;w; dohyun would definitely enjoy it as hes a dancer in heart and kidneys (idk if it’s a saying in English but it is in dutch lmao). Also seeing that you suggest a ten and taeyong dance makes me think that they have to do baby don’t stop… imagine that. I can’t get it out of my head now. Oh he has a long time relationship behind him? That’s interesting, you don’t see that mentioned often in apps, I usually just don’t think of such things lol. Girl you’re really making me scared of that mom figure, seeing how he seems to despise her. I’m scared help. The red velvet thing is also making me imagine him and dohyun absolutely going nuts to power up together and the rest is like ‘oh god what are they doing’ slmdfjkdslm. NIKOLAI ARGENTI, STOP HOEING IN FRONT OF THE CHILDREN HELPPPP THIS JUST TOOK ME OUT!!

Okay finally I kept getting distracted and I’ve been trying to get through this for a few hours already, and I’m finally here, onto the background. Okay mom’s a cheater? We hate her already, shaking my ing head. And she just took Kyunhee and dipped? What a witch, seriously, this poor dad. SHES ABUSIVE TOO??? SERIOUSLY IM GOING TO FIGHT HER MYSELF yikes bro Kyunhee is one unlucky little bean. Same for his little brothers. Man I really feel for him, he worked so hard to protect his brothers when he was just a small child himself. OH off this woman is the worst, she just tells him to leave his brothers behind?? off woman, seriously, this is making me fume. I’m so MAD?? Oh that step-mother, I’m so glad that she welcomed him with open arms, despite neither of the parents being biologically related to Kyunhee at all.

So now Kyunhee has a loving dad and step-father, and 4 cute little half siblings? Aww, I’m glad that he finally got to flourish with only loving family members. Pfff I imagine all four of his parent figures falling out of their chairs when they realise that this Dohyun boy that Kyunhee is raving about is actually THE Yoon Dohyun, Olympic medal winner and national hero. Also I love these text convos so much, especially the sleeping picture, its just amazing. And yes, while Summit is a calm bean, he needs some help, he is plagued by insecurities and his past of giving up, and his weight… oh his weight is VERY worrying. But at least hes not actively causing a ruckus… right? Of course shoe throwing makes an appearance, it’s a hoesquad fic, when does shoe throwing NOT make an appearance when we are involved lmaoo. Also oh my god, so many boys in the works, I haven’t heard of most of them, whose are they? I wanna go sneak a peek please ;w;

HAHA of course they all about being a sap, let him be a sap slmdkfjls Also damn, so far Estrela has been developing a very nice and talented dance line, which is great because a lot of their songs will require a lot of energy and dancing. They only have like two calm title tracks so far. Every time I hear a high tempo energetic boy group song im like ‘is this estrela?’ sldkfjlsm Oh yeah he’d definitely be an option for the leader, I think he might just have the title of leader of the trainee group already, I mean im not saying anything about the final group but him being so responsible and protective while also being the ultimate main good guy in the estrela universo just makes his chances very high. Oh god him being a bear and his fans being honeybees is so cute ;w; I love that!! Oh thank god we have a vocalist even though he’s not really the one that is being pushed to the front because Summit is definitely a rapper (I mean taeyong raps) and Dohyun, if he makes it, would be some sort of sub-rapper that yells things in the chorus or smth. Of course he will get to sing if he makes it cause 8 members but if he was in topp dogg he’d be the Xero.

Oh I can imagine, the sunlight trainee pool is a mess and shrinking because the boys don’t expect a debut after necalli, then the lord and savior kyunhee comes in and suddenly the boys are all very well behaved and organized instead of the mess they were before. He’s going to clean up this mess for sure, and then when they announce that the BBC trainees will be joining, he thinks ‘oh god… more boys to keep in check… kill me.’ But then THAT boy appears and maybe he doesn’t mind looking after the BBC trainees? 😉 And yes, if Kyunhee makes it, I think you know where he will end up as solo release, because of the original story, and how alike he is to one of those members in his estrela universo story, and niko being present as well… I think you know perfectly where he’s ending up, huh. ‘this weird group’ ok these netizens?? Imma fight them. Also, this sunlight won’t last long thing with how reckless Cheonsu is being with his groups, yes, I can see that being a general thought from netizens, great storyline potential… Also honestly, Sunlight has Lee Hyuk, who does very good choreographies, but I agree with the fans here that Kyunhee should definitely choreograph. In fact, I might have already figured out exactly which one title track might be the first Kyunhee choreographed song. One of many.

Okay his solo song is seriously a vibe, it is SO GOOD and the story is also amazing. I know perfectly what role I’m going to give him and in which unit he belongs. You just gave me exactly what I wanted, maybe you knew what was going on, you probably did, seeing how Niko is present.

Okay this is now a two page review smldkfjlsm help. And yeah uh I’m sorry I haven’t put too much info on dohyun up yet, like probably every one of my characters but Dohyun is one of the BBC boys, so they will meet once the trainee groups are put together not long before Summit makes his debut. Also can we talk about the picture you took for dohyun here?? Look at him?? Hes so rude? THOSE LIPS?? I’m such a simp for taedong, it’s unreal. Let’s pray that Dohyun makes it, but on the other side, that would mean I didn’t get enough good apps… Now im torn D: His story basically is that he is a brand new trainee coming into the program so he’s not really skilled enough to become idol, let alone release a solo. He can only dance and do gymnastics, and his road to estrela is a race against time to see if he gets idol ready quick enough to join, because his fame as gymnast could really give estrela a push with the public. I bet everyone thinks dohyun is this cool dude cause he was this gymnast that could do intricate performances that require a lot of concentration but hes just… dohyun. And everyone thinks ‘who the is that, is that really THE yoon dohyun? No way, right?’

In fact, Dohyun is pan if I remember correctly, so Kyunhee, you have a chance! Even though Dohyun’s eyes might be drifting towards that other little gymnast for the moment… Dohyun has this strange skill of despite being naïve and unable to tell sarcasm, he can figure out people… He’s hypersensitive, he can feel those things, and will figure out that Kyunhee needs a nap and ask him to have a private hangout, just so he could get that nap. But he’s also the kind that will ugly cry like a kid upon witnessing conflict. I’m basing Dohyun’s hypersensitivity a lot on my own experiences with hypersensitivity, actually. HE GOES TO SCRUB THE BATHROOM NOOO STOP THAT’S TOO FUNNY PLEASE?? Niko you devil. HE FALLS?? NO WAY oh my god he might miss a comeback, that’s not good… :o What if it happens during a concert too… Oh boy oh boy. A storyline is growing in my head, I’m ready for it. I can imagine dohyun trying to cook for Kyunhee to return the favor, but he literally cant cook to save his life so he’d probably end up burning instant noodles or something. But at least he's trying his best :c It’s so sad that he really thinks that his love is never going to be returned, I mean… who knows? Oh if they ever do end up doing baby don’t stop (maybe on an album as official song, who knows), the fans will FREAK THE OUTTT like they would be fed so well with the shipping content fr. ‘the queen sighs and returns to her queenly business’, this killed me. Is Summit queenly business too? 😉 It’s so funny I can now imagine kyunhee just seeing summit and going ‘oh hey if it isn’t the queenly business’. And then Summit would probably respond with ‘and if it isn’t the dodo simp’, something pinklove has probably told him to say.

Okay what the when did this turn into a whole essay? I honestly don’t know. Good that you became impatient because I was sleeping qslmdkfjkls and its all good! And I agree, he’d be a great leader for estrela, keeping those rowdy boys in check. Also, no worries, I might know what era he might be on hiatus from, because there is a particular song that could fit lyrically. He’d probably still choreograph those songs while he’s recovering cause he wants to stick his nose into things anyway. Anyways, it’s about time I wrap this essay up. Kyunhee is an absolute blessing and I see no mistakes, so he is accepted! Congratulations, Kyunhee has officially made it into the program!!

 

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382-ren
#1
Chapter 6: Hi~
Still thinking of the character to go with rap or vocal or dance. Lol. Got a few path to go. Got one question. Summit rap color in debut song, topdog is like who? By his talent twin he probably the main rapper. I just don't want a clash of style if I choose to send a rapper. [by the style it probably be yano. Hmmm...]
wonpilist
#2
Chapter 8: Ahhhh Jungil's unstable weight makes an appearance, my poor bub... CEO LIM NO YOU CANNOT HOLD BACK SUMMIT YOU WILL LET HIM DEBUT ene *angry noises* but oh look it's the queen herself! LMAO she's just dumping food on his plate huh,,, sounds about right. She's here to raise his confidence and feed him u n u this is perfect, pretty much exactly how I imagined their relationship would be like but poor Jungil being /confused/ is stellar

OHHH QUEEN IS HERE WITH IDEAS yesss she picked Jungil, of course she did---and of course she's sure, she's right, Jungil = the ace

"So you've got one track"
"no, three and two music videos"
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PFFFFT YES THIS IS---THIS IS GOLD, POOR JUNGIL, YOU'LL ENJOY IT THO, YOU GET TO WORK WITH MADAME QUEEN

(still gonna throw hands @ the ceo though just watch me)
yeomra
#3
Chapter 4: hello there, just wanted to say i love the idea for this fic !! i also had a few questions to ask if that's okay! i'm sorry if you mentioned this somewhere and i missed it, but if our charas have a producer/composer/songwriter position talent, are they allowed to participate in the production of their solo song or the group's discography?

also, what are your thoughts about any sensitive topics being included in the oc backgrounds? are you comfortable with writing them, or would you rather avoid writing certain topics? sorry for asking so much but thanks in advance !!!
wonpilist
#4
YES, I HAVE BROUGHT THE MAMA ENERGY we have to give each other parental units because god knows the brats everyone else turns in need supervision. I was going to turn in my necalli boy first, but Kyunhee was quicker to finish and I thought it would be good to submit someone to Estrela first xD HE COULD VERY WELL BE A FROST SIBLING, TBH

Summit and Kyunhee can share smol status unless someone turns in an app shorter than them xD MULLET ERA MULLET ERA *chanting* okno lmaoooooo sorry :'D Kyunhee is a whole bean

Oh yeah just wait... the brats I've seen members of the squad planning to send are also brats and they definitely need Mamahee to keep them in check. I was going to send a brat in place of Kyunhee but then I was like... Estrela need An Adult and so here he is. Oh yeah, he's probably going to lose his at some point if something happens and Estrela will def be O_O because where did their soft-spoken mom go

Kyunhee is a hardcore reveluv and his one heteroual cell is attracted to Kang Seulgi lmao he definitely has taste. DOING BABY DON'T STOP, THAT WOULD BE---- well thanks that's in my head now too sjkfnbsdjg WELL SOMEONE HAS TO YELL AT NIKO TO STOP BEING A HOE WHEN THERE ARE CHILDREN PRESENT

Kyunhee's birth mom but yes he gets four adoring parental units and only one of them is actually related to him lmfao his half-siblings are terrors, but yeah they're cute too OH YEAH parent squad would definitely be falling out of their chairs. Estrela disrespect Kyunhee on the Regular (vvs my diamonds i don't need no light to shine----) but they're his kids(tm) and he wouldn't trade them for the world. Kyunhee is very concern about Summit and his weight, he + Jiae are the Summit Protection Squad. And yes, shoe throwing is iconic for us :D

Nikolai + Sejun are Booty, Daehwan and Sunwoo are Ariel, Spencer is Haru, Justice is me, and I think there are more brats going to be made by the squad and I'll add them in as I get info =w=

I was thinking about doing a main vocalist route and then I had the idea of 1million choreographer Kyunhee and it all went downhill from there, so yeah, they're gonna have a great dance line and even if there's that one non-dancer, Kyunhee will be there to help him out---oh yeah he's going to be So Tired when the BBC trainees arrive because he already cleaned up one trainee pool and now here's more brats for him to organize (but all will turn out alright). LMAO yeah fight the netizens, they're going to be a recurring theme in my apps.

Spider is a great song and Kyunhee is the good guy the estrelaverse deserves to face off against Nikolai.

Kyunhee, emotions? Nah, he's gonna go scrub the bathroom instead. Listen, if they did Baby Don't Stop, we would all be well-fed but also dying. Jiae doesn't have the Time to deal with Kyunhee being stupid, she has a Summit to woo and sad songs to write and other queen to attend to (ofc Summit is queenly business too!). THE QUEENLY BUSINESS AND THE DODO SIMP, THAT----I'M DECEASED MNBSFMSFBSF

I'm glad you enjoyed Kyunhee OuO!
kamihimechi
#5
Chapter 3: SIEEEEEEN!!! Is it okay if I use my own source code for the app as long as I include all of your info?? I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS AND ALL OF YOUR OTHER FICS LMAO. (Expect to see LOTS of bubs from me <3)
Golden-Blood
#6
Chapter 5: Dvjmsdkcvmtrjinfwmf I really have to get going with my apps ! :D
Golden-Blood
#7
Chapter 1: Eeeep! Hopefully I can start working on my apps for sunlight ent again! I'm excited to see the groups come together and see how everything moves forward!
buttfluff
#8
Chapter 5: I LOVE SUMMIT AND IF ANYBODY COMES AFTER HIM, ILL FIGHT
ahem
anyways

im here for this and i cant wait to give you crazy cat man niko
(and new precious baby carter)
wonpilist
#9
heehee is coming fight me
BlueSkySeeker
#10
Chapter 2: Look I'm not saying I'm prepared to finally give you tiny smol feisty floof Daehwan but that's exactly what I'm saying