The VIXX Observational Diaries

Description

She always thought that she was the textbook definition of the term Average-joe. Her hobbies consisted of musical composition, Korean pop music or K-POP for short and a mild interest in Anime. It was no tragic backstory, but losing her parents in an accident might have explained the lack of outward emotions. Ever since then, every month there would be a generous amount of won that was deposited into what used to be her families joined bank account but since she turned 18, it was legally hers.She never brought the phenomenon up with the police, but always secretly wondered who was sending the money. 
One day there is a letter in the mail that informs her that her late parents never told her that she had an uncle that worked for Jellyfish Entertainment. 

Foreword

Seung-Dal read the letter over at least three times before reality finally sunk in. 

Dear Lee Seung-Dal,

You have probably been wondering who has been depositing money into your bank account each month for quite some time now, I apologize for not telling you who I am. My late sister, up until her untimely end would write to me and express her daughter's aptitude for music but more importantly the ability to capture detailed observations secretly. I would like to offer you a chance to make a name for yourself through the agency I work for, and most and foremost, I hope that we can become closer as a family. All I ask is for you not to directly interact with the members until their debut. 
Sincerely,

Uncle Hwang

PS. I will arrange for someone to come by and collect you and your belongings.
LeeHyeRan
Please let me know if you have any suggestions or complaints.

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MidnightOnyx
#1
Chapter 6: Hmm, just from a reader's pov, I'd love to see the dialogue between the others. That said though, it's not always easy to do so from a writing perspective. I say do what you think is best. If you're having trouble, maybe try to imagine you're each member and think of having to relay how you felt upon your first meeting of each taking into consideration their individual personalities and how you as the member, could possibly feel. Just a thought though. Great chapter, it's very conversational, I feel like the dialogue flows well, I like the choppiness of their thoughts. Each person is at a different point about the same situation, it's nice to see how each one perceived it. Oh one more thing, the pairings you did, did you have a reason for picking the pairs? I find that interesting too!
MidnightOnyx
#2
Chapter 5: Good job with this so far, your descriptions are great. Just to make sure I'm thinking of this the right way, the reader is watching all these things take place and is writing about it in her diary/journal correct? And that she is in some way now connected with the company, but to what degree hasn't been revealed to us readers just yet. I just want to make sure I'm on the right page. Ahh sorry I'm so late in reading, anxious for the next chapter!!