My Little miss not so innocent is a keeper!

Hello! Destination in Mind is a keeper! I look forward to your review! xoxoxoxo

asdhfjkasd sorry for the question but is it completely mandatory to do a blog? i can promote the shop in my feed (it would be a lot easier that way) or @ my readers via the next update, but i really, really hate putting up a lot of blogs and i rarely do them bc a lot of ppl would be notified.

i've credited in the foreword tho!

stars are wormholes in the sky is a keeper :P
good luck ! ~

Chapter 2: Hiya! Thanks for the review—and yeah, Cutlass is a super long read, so take however long you'd like on that!

I'm glad you liked the story, though I have a couple of questions? Grammar has never turned out to be an issue for me when it comes to writing in general (most of the time it's the categories I get full marks in, rip), and while I know I have run-on sentences sometimes, I do have a beta and I'm pretty sure she fixes most of the grammar mistakes, a lot of which are typos. I asked a couple of friends, and I've never been told that the grammatical errors were glaring because I'm pretty sure a lot of it is just typos like I said (admittedly, in the middle of the story, I was writing something else that was in present tense, so there might've been a couple of tense slips around chapters 4-5), so could you give a couple of examples...? I'm just a bit confused because it's never turned up to be a problem before.

Also, could you please elaborate where the five marks were docked for characterization? Thanks!

Chapter 1: Hello!! I was wondering how long it approximately takes for you to review and how many fanfics would be ahead if I were to request?

Happy to see a new and active review shop :D! Hope you'll do good!

(Also, is it possible to request for more than one fic to be reviewed at a time, or...?)

Hiya! I've requested. The story's pretty long, so... read up to what you'd like? The characterization might take some time because it's long, but unless you want to, please don't make yourself go through all 70 chapters ;-;

Thanks in advance!!

Chapter 1: Ihi, thank you very much for the review! Do you think I can copy and paste your version of the description? It sounds so much better than mine ^^;

I honestly feel like it's rushed too. Initially, I don't want them to be friends, not totally enemies either, just two people who don't talk to each other.
Thank you very much on the overall review, no wonder i got very little subs. hahahah, I'll take your advices for it.
Again, thank you thank you very much on this!

Do you think I should rewrite the whole thing again? I feel like rewriting the whole thing again now that I see what's wrong with it? :)