One-Shot

Counterintuitive

My nose wrinkled in disgust as the scent of coffee wafted into my face. I was used to smelling coffee all day at work, but it was even worse when I was forced to clean the espresso machine. I pulled the cleaning cloth away and frowned. Whoever had cleaned the machine last obviously didn't do a very good job. The cloth was nearly black from all of the coffee residue. This only made my life more difficult. I knew I'd be going home smelling like coffee.

"Mingyu." At the sound of my name, I turned towards my coworker. Minghao and I didn't normally work together. It was actually our first shift together since I started working at the Coffee Bean two months before. We were friends outside of work and attended the same college, but somehow we hadn't worked together.

"Yeah Hao?" I was thankful for a distraction. I could only hope that Minghao would take pity on me and clean the espresso machine for me.

"Why do you still work at a coffee shop if you hate coffee so much?"

"I need money. College is expensive you know!" I chuckled after my overly enthusiastic reply. 

. Did that sound suspicious?
Or worse, defensive?
Was the chuckle too awkward?
It definitely was, wasn't it?

The jig is up Mingyu, you have to spill everything now. You have to do it. Minghao is way too observant not to notice how strange you're acting. There's no way he didn't notice and he's going to question your behaviour. You'll have to spill the beans once he mentions how weird you are.

"Okay." Minghao shrugged, moved his blond bangs out of his eyes and returned to practicing his latte art. I blinked at his uninterested reply. That was easy.

A bell from above the door chimed. It caught my attention and I turned too greet the customer that had walked in. One glance at who it was and my heart leapt to my throat. I knew it was him since he came in at the same time every weekday.

"Hi welcome to the Coffee Bean!" Crap. I definitely sounded way too excited didn't I?

Oh boy. Oh man. He wasn't wearing his normal black jeans, instead wearing a pair of pastel shorts. Oh he looked really good in shorts, but he looked even better in pastel shorts. I mean he looked good in his usual outfit, but my brain short circuitted at the sight of his calves. Holy crap. He looked really good.

"Hi. Can I get a large black coffee and a cinnamon bun please?" The raven haired customer asked as he pulled out his wallet. Butterflies erupted in my stomach at his deep voice. Even though he'd come in the day before, his voice was still pleasant to hear.

"Name?" I asked even though I knew it. Just like how I knew he would order a large black coffee and ask for his bun warmed up and then sit in the corner table by the windows and study from his literature textbook.

"Wonwoo. Can I get that bun warmed up?"

"Of course!" I chirped. Immediately I cringed at how perky I sounded. Be cool Mingyu, be cool. "I'll bring your order to your table once it's ready." He nodded and put the change I'd just given to him in his cardigan pocket. I turned around to make Wonwoo's coffee only to find Minghao already had it on a tray. He even put the cinnamon bun in the microwave.

"Now I know why you still work here." Minghao rolled his eyes. I blushed and glanced towards Wonwoo, just to make sure he hadn't heard Minghao.

"What do you mean? I have no idea what you're talking about." I chuckled nervously. Okay Mingyu, you need to stop chuckling it's definitely awkward.

"You have the subtlety of a chainsaw," The microwave beeped at Minghao grabbed the bun. He set it on the tray beside the mug of coffee. "Here, take the tray so you have an excuse to talk to him." Minghao picked up the tray and shoved it into my chest.

"What? No I can't do that!" I whisper yelled at Minghao. The coffee sloshed a little at my erratic movements. "I never talk to him outside of taking his order. Seokmin normally brings it to him!" 

"Well looks like today's your lucky day." Minghao bent over his latte art, his earrings dangling over the drink. I think the foam supposed to be in the shape of a cat, but it looked more like a blob. I scowled at Minghao and walked past him.

"By the way your latte art ." Minghao grinned at me.

"Just go before the coffee gets cold." He gave me a shove on the back. I tripped over my too long legs and stumbled over to Wonwoo's table. 

Don't spill the coffee.
Don't spill the coffee.
Don't spill the coffee.

I chanted in my head as I walked towards where Wonwoo was sitting. I stood beside his table, but he didn't look up from his notebook. 

Don't spill the coffee.
Don't spill the coffee.

With shaky hands, I grabbed the white mug off the tray. I felt the burn from where my skin was pressing onto the mug. I moved carefully, still chanting in my head.

Don't spill the coffee.

I scanned the table for a free space where Wonwoo didn't have any learning materials. I leaned slightly over the table, my hips digging into the edge. I lowered my hand slowly, aiming for the free spot between Wonwoo's left hand and his textbook. Still shaky, I placed the coffee on the table.

I let out a sigh of relief when the coffee cup landed on the surface with no issues.

 

"Hey Mingyu!" I felt a clap on my back and jumped at the contact. Thankfully the coffee had already been placed on the table. Unfortunately, the cinnamon bun hadn't. I'd jolted so much that cinnamon bun jumped off the tray.

I turned towards Seokmin who had patted my back roughly. He gave me a wink and a signature grin before he walked up to the counter without any other words. I glared at him before I turned back towards Wonwoo. The cinnamon bun had landed right onto the pastel shorts I'd practically died over earlier.

"Oh my gosh I am so so sorry," I immediately began to bow apologetically. I straightened, but my mouth didn't stop. "That was our last cinnamon bun from the batch I baked this morning since we had a surprisingly busy breakfast rush and I set that bun aside for you just to make sure there was one left because I know you like them but now I've ruined it. I am so sorry. Can I get you a caramel cinnamon scone instead? Free of charge of course since I wrecked your cinnamon bun." 

Wonwoo was silent for a moment and then began to laugh. If I thought his voice was nice, then his laugh was 1000 time better.

"You set a cinnamon bun aside for me?" He asked. My eyes widened, not realizing I'd revealed that in my word vomit.

"No? I mean maybe? Yes." I wanted to melt into a puddle just to avoid this situation.

"That's sweet of you," Wonwoo smiled up at me, his cat like eyes closing slightly. I smiled back widely, red filtering onto my cheeks. "A scone sounds nice." He stood up to wipe the cinnamon frosting off his shorts.

"Can do." I turned to leave, but Wonwoo's hand grasped my wrist. I spun around and we came face to face.

Was this a drama or was this my actual real life? My brain short circuitted again.

"After you grab that scone do you want to sit down and have a coffee with me?"

"I don't like coffee." I blurted.

"You work at a coffee shop, but don't like coffee. That's a bit counterintuitive isn't it?" Wonwoo laughed, his nose wrinkling cutely. I smiled and nodded. "Fine, a tea then. Doesn't matter what you drink as long as we can talk."

"Yes. Of course. Definitely!"

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asahdako
#1
Chapter 1: Seeing the title, I reckoned that this story will be in the scale of a story with the dash of "technicality" into it...and it was.

Another thing was that this story would've been better with more background on the whole scenario within the story. I see the first phase of the whole affection thing but it would've been better to elaborate it further.

All in all, good fic :)
upgrader
#2
Chapter 1: SUPER cute!! I love the cinnamon bun reveal at the end, it was such a sweet and dorky touch. It really showed Mingyu's personality, and you could tell that Wonwoo was touched by the gesture. I'm torn between feeling that there could have been more and feeling like it ended in the perfect place. I feel like if there had been an awkward and sudden confession at the end it would have been too much too soon. I do like when oneshots have open endings so I don't mind that overall. Maybe if there had been more of a backstory with how often Wonwoo comes in or the first time Mingyu met him? How long has he been working at the coffee shop? Background info like that can sometimes help open endings feel more robust and satisfying because it helps you guess at what could come next. Overall, I thought this story was super cute. I also liked some of the formatting choices you made with the centered texts, it added a nice touch.
icytoes
27 streak #3
Chapter 1: Heh. It’s so cute. Wish there was more though. Great job authornim!
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: ASDFJKL I'M PRACTICALLY SWOONING OVER HERE CAN YOU HEAR THE SOUND OF A GIRL SQUEALING LIKE A DEAD SEAL OVER HERE YUP THAT'S ME OMGBBQWTF SOMEBODY HOLD ME-
I don't like first-person stories and don't normally read them, but something about your fanfic just kinda stand out and seem different from the rest of the first-person stories I've seen.
I especially like how you took the opportunity of using first-person to convey Minyu's thoughts. He's so cute and so funny omg my heart *clenches heart* This is one of the good things about first-person that most writers fail to incorporate: They have the ability to make things funny with the minds of their characters, not just only see through their eyes. Our mind is always running with a million thoughts, and it's nice to see what are some of the random thoughts that pop up in a person's mind.
Do I make sense? Hopefully I do, but probably not-

Anyway, this was an excellent fanfic and nicely written, me likey! <3
INFTINSPIRIT97
#5
Chapter 1: Mingyu is just too cute and too clumsy for someone his height xD
lefemui
11 streak #6
Chapter 1: Awww, so cute, so sweet, I melted... Story is good!!
Grackie
#7
Chapter 1: It was really good, I liked how inside of Mingyu's head we were, and it was really cute to see him gush over wonwoo. Good job ^^
amusingmurdermachine
#8
Chapter 1: I really like Mingyu's character. He's adorable when he's gushing internally over his crush and struggling. Personally, as an onlooker, I'm ironically being charmed Mingyu when he's looking at the one he adores. You made good use of the first person POV especially because it provided the readers direct insight on Mingyu's character. We also got to have a nice insight on Minghao's character based on Mingyu's carefulness around him.

The one thing that is maybe a bit lacking for me is an insight on Wonwoo. You know, besides the physical. Maybe Mingyu could mention a few flashbacks on when and why he started having a crush on Wonwoo, enough that it would make him keep working in a cafe even though he hates coffee?

But really, that's just something to spice things up and make your story more engaging. It's understandable that some things would be left untold because it's in one character's POV only and in reality, you wouldn't naturally justify your feelings about something that's always been there every single time you come across it.

So yep. Overall, this is so nicely written and is quickly added to my list of faves this week. Looking forward to your next entries! :)
OnceUponAnEXO
18 streak #9
Chapter 1: Asdfghjkl!! ლ(*꒪ヮ꒪*)ლ This is so sweet!!!! I don't usually like first person narrative because too often they end up sounding narcissistic ^^; but you did a really great job and avoided that! And it was very easy to like Mingyu! His awkwardness was really cute (^ヮ^)b

My favorite line was "You have the subtlety of a chainsaw." I laughed so hard! .·´¯`(⌒ヮ⌒)´¯`·.