Chapter Two

The Queen's Dragon
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Dawn illuminates the port of Afohnies in a beautiful golden light, and the sky looks like one of those unbearable corny oil paintings. Mercifully it’s still relatively quiet, except for the warning bells of the port tower. Ringing the change of the direction of the flow and mark the end of the first shift. The shadows of birds can be seen lurking on masts, rooftops and everywhere that allows these harassing thieves a good view. Their existence causes fishers to load and unload their goods nervously. Wiping the cold sweat from their forehead, between reassuring glances towards the protecting covers of their catch. Being careless has a high price as it never goes unnoticed by the sharp eyes of a gull.

Unsurprisingly Jiyong is not only among the latecomers. No, his nutshell is the very last to make it. He still refuses to call this small lateen-rigged felucca a boat. Technically, yes it works as one. It’s just a one-man vessel, with a single sail and a pole to move through the port. A pole he currently clings onto like his dear life depends on it. Fiercely he pokes, stirs, and paddles it into the stream beneath him. As always at this point, he greatly regrets his late coming. Surely one fish just isn’t worth the sweat and blisters he will gain from trying desperately to move back to the pier. But with just a bucket full with a couple of dazed fishes in front of him, every single one counts. By the look of the number, it will barely cover today's expenses and that hardly and only if he is lucky. They haven't been biting well those last couple of days, and the nets have been empty too. It merely has gotten worst. It seems as if even the fishes start to avoid the waters around here. Alike with the vessels. He hasn't seen a galleon in weeks, maybe even months. Whispers of the street rumor a curse. Brought upon them as punishment for the inane blood that stained the ocean and poisons the fishes. Maybe, if he were superstitious he would give a second thought to those tells, but he isn't. Also, he has seen the dolphin school south the mainland. Therefore he knows the real cause - adorable, bastards. As mesmerizing they were to look at, the damage of a whole bunch of them raiding the sea is feel-able in a meager yield. He may not be very literate and mostly self-educated, but he is keen and cognizant. With a decent amount of luck, and sharp senses as he always pays careful attention to his surroundings. It isn’t difficult to tell that in order to raise the population again, it is necessary to cut down on the fishing. But he needs the money urgently, and so do the others. He doesn't fish because he wants to, it's essential. He already cut as many corners as possible. Well, that’s not exactly true, there were some holes left. But he still has some sort of standard left and desired a tiny bit of comfort.

His back ages and his arms are getting heavier with every movement. It takes a lot of willpower and strength not just to give up and let himself drift back out again. It certainly wouldn’t be his first time either. But there is something called pride and also self-esteem. Somewhere between the piers, the port master is lurking. Watching him struggle with a smug grin plastered on his face. And he couldn’t let him have this satisfaction and the laugh. Also, the fish is less worth if he has to wait half a day to sell it. The customers won’t consider them as fresh fish anymore, especially since he can’t keep them cool out there either. He curses under his breath but tries to keep a straight face. Everything, to not let his inner distress and exhaustion show as he moves his Peanut towards the pier. Sure enough, he can see Sungyu stand there, amused as always waiting for him. The last tolls of the bell just fade away as he finally docks his boat. Dramatically Sungyu takes a look at his tiny golden pocket watch, before turning to the harbor tower as if he needs confirmation for the time to be exactly right.
“Precisely 6 o’clock 38 minutes and 46 seconds - R.O.D barely manages to be back on port -check. How long do ye think on staying this time Mr. Kwon?”
He would like to beat this priggish attitude out of him, but he also has some sort of manners left and frankly he is too busy trying not to pant like an exhausted in heat on a hot summer day. Trying to keep his face, but it doesn’t stop him from barking back, “as always!”

“I certainly enjoy yer optimism Mr. Kwon and let’s assume ye don’t miss the currents, again,“ to his defense he has just missed them twice. Once he had overslept, and the other time, well, he also had overslept; but purposely, after b

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-Tigress-
#1
Chapter 5: Ah this chapter still affects me. The ending part about Jay and the story shared, ugh it's so bitter and sad without being bitter, you know? I am so so so so curious though as to what that letter says and so really, honey, get to writing haha ;)
but honestly, I don't think I say it enough but I am so very much enjoying how you're building this world. It's enticing and fun and rounded and I am so very curious how it will play out! Especially since SOMEONE isn't giving me spoilers lol. But the way that you take the time to describe the surroundings and really set the scene, while adding emotional connections to places and people, it really does remind me of a published novel. Wel done my dear ♡
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#2
Chapter 4: LMAO Bomi's inrush soll makes me laugh. Okay though, I really like the additions made to this chapter and how you cut it. Channie was perfect in his role and the idea of a gentle giant baking is just adorable ♡.♡ I tried to guess who the unclothed man was but there are so many idols that I gave up! I guess I'll wait and see haha.
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#3
Ooooooh I see you mention VIXX as characters.... that makes me think your little revenge is coming for my Ken Ken haha. =D
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#4
Chapter 4: Awww gosh well that was ended on a sad note. I actually loved how natural that conversation between the tow of them felt. It really did flow so well and lead one topic to the next... great job! And Minjun, despite only having a bit if "screen time" really shines as a character. Bomi's appearance made me laugh, and Minjun's comment about her. And then of course Jiyong's ungenerous opinion of baby Sohee at the moment. He'll change his mind when he reads the note and sees her! Thank you so much for the update darlidadarling, it really made my day better ♡♡♡
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 3: OMO first off I have to say that your mention of "puppy of a human" made me giggle, that very much sounds so much like Baekho ♡.♡ And then Sunggyu is in perfect casting, he is definitely the stingy and pompous dockmaster!!! So I really liked seeing those two even with their small roles and how well they fit them!!! Oh and i see why you wondered about the petri-heil haha. =) It works!
I really love how Jiyong's chapter is so different from Sohee's pov, like you see how he is very much tired and grumpy at having to work and very much desires to leave Afohnies! The opening made me laugh, I can picture him being too stubborn to give Sunggyu the satisfaction of seeing him fail haha. But I did pause at the Moby reference because I wasn't expecting to see a literary work references in a a fantasy world haha. It worked, though, and I like how you talk about his education here without yet absolutely having to.. it sets who he is and how he came to be himself in really nice tones. My only other question is if everyone will speak with the same accent sunggyu has? or is he from somewhere else that gives him that way of speech?
The dolphins bit made me laugh. I was not expecting Jiyong to be a fisherman and so it was a small shock to me, but it makes so much sense and yes, I think he is like a lion in dress... ill-suited to this and wanting to be back where he is king! So I look forward to more!!! FIGHTING!!!
-Tigress-
#6
Chapter 2: OH MY GOSH this is a beautiful intro!!!
I love the way it starts off, talking about the hymn of Afohnies, and then shifting into about how it's all just not happening right then. That made a drastic comparison that was really striking! I loved picturing the banners over the windows and the red roses in the waters, I have to ask, it is for her Crowning that they throw the flowers?
I love how you explaind the setup of the city through using her memories. Thaat sibling scene was especially great, it showed the joy and closeness that they shared while also explaining how things work. And then you go and rip the heart out by telling of his death! T.T But that was a really great depiction, too. The way that you spoke of the hungry and broken families, and then shifted it in to speak of greed and the effects of it. I like the way you were like, "even the fairest man" and then shifted to tell that you meant her father, that was so cleverly done!And really sad too.
The explanation of the festival is probably my favorite part of the chapter: I love the part you wrote about the lanterns and how she pictures them as souls. Her wishes afterward really made it feel striking and it lingered in my heart!
And then you end with that sentence. Goodness that was really good! I really liked how you don't actually tell that she has become the Queen, but well I mean it's implied in the title so it is obvious haha, but I like that you didn't state it outright. And the adjucting the burdensome crown... Perfect.
I am so looking forward to reading more!!!
-Tigress-
#7
OMG you updated!!!! ♡♡♡♡ I will read as soon as I'm out of a moving vehicle hahaha
DGNA_Forever
#8
This looks so cool! I love kingdom stories, so I look forward to seeing what you do with it♡. Good luck!
-Tigress-
#9
Chapter 1: OMO honey is this advert supposed to be in here? =)
-Tigress-
#10
ASFGHJKL THAT DESCRIPTION! OH I got tingles!