TWO. rajin's plea

The Little Blue Bird (an epic high fantasy saga)
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The sky today is a heather grey; the clouds are an endless sea in the sky, stormy and seamless. A smell of rain permeates the city. She bumps into me suddenly, her cloudy aura exploding into mine.

“Rajin.” I stand defiantly, staring her down. She’s wearing simple grey robes, and I can sense the arsenal of stones she carries. She’s fully armed.

“Seolhyun!” she smirks, blue eyes twinkling, “I have found you at last. Still frolicking with those petty humans I see. What a shame, we could use some Hunters like you.”

I don’t respond. I know that she’s right; the mages of today are being hunted down by the humans, simply because they are afraid of our powers. Without Hunters, we would be vulnerable, for Hunters are the best fighters amongst all the mages. The others, Fullburst, Assassins, and Flux mages have their own uses.

“Seolhyun,” she whispers and reaches out to grab my hands with her cold, delicate fingers, “why must you forget about your brothers and sisters? We must stand united against the wrath of humanity. Please.” Her last word is infused with a deep sorrow, and I look at her straight in her pitiful eyes.

“I need you to promise me that you will not let your kindness get the better of you.”

“I’m not a saint, Rajin. You know why I’m still in the castle.”

“For the money, you say. But I know you. There’s something else you’re hiding. But I will not

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notice: this story is currently a beta version – it's quite terrible in terms of writing style, and the story itself is incredibly messy and unstructured.

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Wanshine0221
#1
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#2
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#3
Chapter 7: wait what was Jin's side of deal?
He just wanted her to be his knight?

I seriously love the idea of fic.It's intriguing in many ways. I would say , the fiction needs a bit of details, like in first chapter, the scene was quite frankly terrifying and dialogues suited the scene but it couldn't draw much emotions even though the scene had potential to do so. So add a bit of detail like how character felt in certain situations and story would be flawless.
It was short and interesting read which I appreciate :)
I would like to see where it goes in future because I am curious about so many things.
Exoright
#4
Chapter 6: Goodness they can actually draw powers like inflicting pain on somebody from a rune stone?
Who is sehun to her though?
Exoright
#5
Chapter 5: Why Joohyun is so against mages?
There has to be a reason behind her agendas!
And lol soulstealer suits a lot to Kyungsoo :)
Exoright
#6
Chapter 4: Jin seems to have fallen for Seolhyun already and he wants to protect mages?
Why are humans afraid of mage's powers in first place?
Exoright
#7
Chapter 3: I thought Rajin was on dark side for the story and want Jin to go down?
Seolhyun actually is planning something, isn't she?
Exoright
#8
Chapter 2: Why the kingdom need to be saved?
I mean what's the threat.
Seolhyun seems a bit fishy here.
Exoright
#9
Chapter 2: Why the kingdom need to be saved?
I mean what's the threat.
Seolhyun seems a bit fishy here.
Exoright
#10
Chapter 1: 0_0
What was that?
That was kind of terrifying.