Soul in the Abyss

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The principle was that no witness shall live. The innocent Kim Mingyu was merely taking a break from his study for some air when all of a sudden... his neck was at stake, her blade was no more than an inch away. Wait, but isn't that....?

 

m a i n   c a s t;

 

 K i m  M i n g y u  

your normal university student

 

R o s e a n n e  P a r k  

 "prohibeo"

 

J e n n i e  K i m 

 "bodyguard"

 

J e o n  W o n w o o

Mingyu's best bud...?

                                                                                             

s u p p o r t i n g   c a s t;

 

W e n  J u n h u i 

"slayer"

 

 L a l i s a  M a n o b a n    

"prohibeo"

 

K i m  J i s o o 

"lord"

K w o n  H o s h i

 "slayer"

 

X u  M i n g h a o

?

 

H a n s o l  V C

?

                                               

                                                   

 

Foreword

2017 © Copyright by zezehfuh

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Credits;

Artworks by Custom Collective Artworks by zezehfuh design

 

ps: yeah, I'm a law student, I license the sh*t out of everything HAHAHAHA

 

 

 

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rosiesyvesl #1
Chapter 4: soo when's the update? sksjsjhssjn
rougechanel
#2
Chapter 4: So few authors who writes SVTxBP yet all are the best with the manner on writing and the delivery of characters.
Hope you will update in the future!
kaikrisCNYeon #3
Chapter 4: wow. can't wait for this to get much much updates! I rarely read vampire stuffs but this just grabbed my attention thou I was suppose to sleep XD I LOVE THIS!!!
aqilahzamri__ #4
Chapter 4: Please update,im just found svtxbp
panda22017 #5
Chapter 4: what the hell? this is actually so good??
finally a Blackpink--Seventeen storyy thankyou so much author-niim
this is lit! I'm definitely waiting for the next update
and I love how every scene (?) has different atmosphere (?) to it?? am I even making any sense, but the way you write it really builds the atmosphere dang you're good!!!
ynanavarro #6
Chapter 4: I finally found a bpxsvt fanfic T0T iam so happy~
ynanavarro #7
Chapter 4: I finally found a bpxsvt fanfic T0T iam so happy~
payukoornz
#8
Chapter 4: dammit darl, I love the way you write so much, it's so engaging. I love how you write the chapter with scene changes, I can imagine it like a movie.
and Wonwoo tho... I want a friend like him
and HOSHI BE HOT
waiting for next update!!
Elythia
#9
Chapter 3: AHAHAHA omg that's so hilarious xDD It's such a joy reading your writing, because despite the appropriate use of description during necessary moments, you also have a witty sense of humour. Wonwoo is such a great friend e u e The first 'official' meeting is quite cliche but still, it never fails to crack me up. I have a feeling Mingyu and Rose would have a frenemy kind of relationship (which is my favourite type of relationship tbh). What'll happen next? Is Rose going to kill him... or will something unexpected happen? Hmm... I just hope it doesn't take the stereotypical path which often happens in these kinds of stories (A and B meet -> they fight a lot -> A wanted to kill B but ends up falling in love with B -> they become a couple, but their relationship is forbidden so lots of drama happen -> happy ending yay). I mean I don't mind cliches if they're executed well, but I also hope there'll be a plot twist to make this journey a memorable one lol. Anyways, the layout is really pretty but it may be a bit of a hassle since the readers have to scroll horizontally sometimes, and this can disrupt the reading flow. It's not a terribly big issue, though it may serve as a problem if your chapters get any longer. But anyways, all the best in writing! I look forward to the next update o/
Elythia
#10
Chapter 2: The premise is super interesting! It's been some time since I've watched an action and fantasy fic, but this seems fun ; u ; BlackpinkxSeventeen is not exactly my cup of tea, but you may change my mind hehe. Anyways, here goes. Your descriptions are really detailed and vivid. It's as if you're carving images into our heads with every magical sentence that you write. The problem is that most of your sentences are incomplete. Although sometimes, incomplete sentences can bring about a certain effect, you're overusing them (e.g. "One building to another, leaping through towers and sideways." - There's no subject over here, so the sentence isn't complete.) Also, Mingyu's (I presume it's Mingyu) new entrance is a bit unclear. I thought it was some random villain lol. At the moment, I'm quite confused as to what the setting's about exactly... What is Rose's role? Why are they suddenly fighting? Hopefully we'll get an explanation to that soon. But you've kickstarted this story off with a bang, and you've piqued my interest. I'll keep reading on (: