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Soul in the Abyss
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Chapter one

No witness shall live

It's passed midnight. The once crimson sky had turned gloomy and dim. Not a clatter nor chatter, just peace and chill. But not in the modern world, though. Lights after lights burst into the moonless night, the rowdy road, skyscrappers towering over thousand feet, illuminated pathways, headlights slicing through the dry asphalt. But of all places they chose the rooftop of a partially finished construction building. Classic. 

 

One with strawberry blonde locks, tapping her feet relentlessly, her slim blade she swiffled around her slender fingers. Anxious and strained, until she felt a light tap on her shoulder. Took her long enough.

 

"How many?"

 

"I reckon twenty-six. Thirty at most"

 

"Damnit!" She cursed under her breath, her fingers running past her hair. "Weren't you supposed to get rid at least half of them?!" 

 

The younger girl puffed her cheeks, with her lower lips puckered, "I thought I'm supposed to include the dead!" She hissed back.

 

The girl in strawberry blonde hair sighed, eyes rolled in frustration, she could taste the annoyance writhling in , barely surpressed. She tilted her neck to face the younger, gripping her shoulder hard. "How many times have I told you," she clicked her tongue, "we have no business with the dead." 

 

Feel wronged, the girl in shorter hair was about to retort. "B-bu-bu-but--AH!"

 

Two shots. Beams of green laced the blades. Quick, but dodged. This was no time to talk.

 

At least ten, armed with blades, chains and themselves, wrapped in hooded cloaks. Hisses that passed through menacing masks captured the cold air in little transparent smokes, their eyes deadly and cold as ice. No hesitation, no glances back and forth, poised jets of green light flew alongside a throw of their blades. Just before they reached, another figure stood inbetween the two opposing facts.

 

Graceful as a gazelle, deadly as a viper. She had leapt from a few rooftops away. She turned, dismissing their little tricks with her hand, subsiding the sorry attack. She glanced at her two companions. A little nod and they soared upward, away from the hooded figures.

 

One building to another, leaping through towers and sideways, they were fast as little cats. 

 

But their pursuiters were not less quick. From five to six. More followed, stalking in, unseen, converging from three directions. 

 

"Go on first. I'll deal with this"

 

And the girl pulled her strawberry blonde locks into a tight ponytail. A little smirk now plastered on her plump lips as she clutched her double blades each in her hand. With more grip, red beams laced her blades. She let them reeled straight into their abdomen, one by one, perfectly in a straight line. The closest hooded figure swerved to avoid her and his hood slipped, and by the red light of her blades, she saw the viscious grin of a man she vowed to despise. 

 

"Tch!"

 

A little duel now between the two. Blow after blow. She hissed and he laughed like a maniac. 

 

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rosiesyvesl #1
Chapter 4: soo when's the update? sksjsjhssjn
rougechanel
#2
Chapter 4: So few authors who writes SVTxBP yet all are the best with the manner on writing and the delivery of characters.
Hope you will update in the future!
kaikrisCNYeon #3
Chapter 4: wow. can't wait for this to get much much updates! I rarely read vampire stuffs but this just grabbed my attention thou I was suppose to sleep XD I LOVE THIS!!!
aqilahzamri__ #4
Chapter 4: Please update,im just found svtxbp
panda22017 #5
Chapter 4: what the hell? this is actually so good??
finally a Blackpink--Seventeen storyy thankyou so much author-niim
this is lit! I'm definitely waiting for the next update
and I love how every scene (?) has different atmosphere (?) to it?? am I even making any sense, but the way you write it really builds the atmosphere dang you're good!!!
ynanavarro #6
Chapter 4: I finally found a bpxsvt fanfic T0T iam so happy~
ynanavarro #7
Chapter 4: I finally found a bpxsvt fanfic T0T iam so happy~
payukoornz
#8
Chapter 4: dammit darl, I love the way you write so much, it's so engaging. I love how you write the chapter with scene changes, I can imagine it like a movie.
and Wonwoo tho... I want a friend like him
and HOSHI BE HOT
waiting for next update!!
Elythia
#9
Chapter 3: AHAHAHA omg that's so hilarious xDD It's such a joy reading your writing, because despite the appropriate use of description during necessary moments, you also have a witty sense of humour. Wonwoo is such a great friend e u e The first 'official' meeting is quite cliche but still, it never fails to crack me up. I have a feeling Mingyu and Rose would have a frenemy kind of relationship (which is my favourite type of relationship tbh). What'll happen next? Is Rose going to kill him... or will something unexpected happen? Hmm... I just hope it doesn't take the stereotypical path which often happens in these kinds of stories (A and B meet -> they fight a lot -> A wanted to kill B but ends up falling in love with B -> they become a couple, but their relationship is forbidden so lots of drama happen -> happy ending yay). I mean I don't mind cliches if they're executed well, but I also hope there'll be a plot twist to make this journey a memorable one lol. Anyways, the layout is really pretty but it may be a bit of a hassle since the readers have to scroll horizontally sometimes, and this can disrupt the reading flow. It's not a terribly big issue, though it may serve as a problem if your chapters get any longer. But anyways, all the best in writing! I look forward to the next update o/
Elythia
#10
Chapter 2: The premise is super interesting! It's been some time since I've watched an action and fantasy fic, but this seems fun ; u ; BlackpinkxSeventeen is not exactly my cup of tea, but you may change my mind hehe. Anyways, here goes. Your descriptions are really detailed and vivid. It's as if you're carving images into our heads with every magical sentence that you write. The problem is that most of your sentences are incomplete. Although sometimes, incomplete sentences can bring about a certain effect, you're overusing them (e.g. "One building to another, leaping through towers and sideways." - There's no subject over here, so the sentence isn't complete.) Also, Mingyu's (I presume it's Mingyu) new entrance is a bit unclear. I thought it was some random villain lol. At the moment, I'm quite confused as to what the setting's about exactly... What is Rose's role? Why are they suddenly fighting? Hopefully we'll get an explanation to that soon. But you've kickstarted this story off with a bang, and you've piqued my interest. I'll keep reading on (: