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Soul in the Abyss
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chapter
Two

I think I know you

"Rose!"

 

Her voice echoed. She marched quicker throughout the spacious hallway, passing through gigantic windows like great slits in the thick walls. The only sound perceptible was the proud clicks and clacks of her high heels.

 

Her breath came in small spurts, hot and nervous. "Roseanne! I said wait!"

 

But Rose ignored the poor girl.

 

"I've rechecked my barriers. And I told you they're solid."

 

That one sentence managed to stop the slender lady on her track. The younger smiled confidently as she walked herself closer.

 

They continued to walk side to side.

 

"So...? What are you gonna do, Rose?"

 

Again Rose remained mute, steadily walking along the hallway.

 

"If you're so positive he saw you, you should've ended him right there and then! What were you thinking?!"

 

Rose heaved out a hard sigh, still stubbornly ignoring the younger.

 

"Rose... the authorities are gonna find out soon! You better take care of this before they found out, or are you seriously gonna deal with the aftermath? You know the punishment is not--!"

 

"UGH! God Damnit, Lisa! Stop bothering me! I'm already aware I'm in deep without you telling me!"

 

She shrugged the blondie away, walking a few steps away, before finally turning herself around. "Do me a favour and make yourself useful. Go find out his background!"

 

Lisa pouted, clearly unimpressed at her sudden order. "Why me? Why don't you do it yourself? Don't drag me into your problem!"

 

Suddenly, a flicker of red particles flew around Rose, spiralling every part of her, her body ever so efficiently. Rose smirked. "Well," she pointed at her body, "as you can see, my time is up! So... bye bye! And you better do it!"

 

And with that she disappeared into thin air.

 

 

 

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Iced coffee in his left, bunch of papers in his right. Lips curled, head hung low, he strutted slowly along the empty courtyard towards his faculty building.

 

In a distance, a dazzling high glass building marked with the faculty's name in capital letters and all its students all tousled and tangled. Welcome to the land of engineers where spectactles are customary and mathematic is your staple food.

 

The usually bright and intelligent sophomore, Kim Mingyu, was way too quiet and absent-mind

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rosiesyvesl #1
Chapter 4: soo when's the update? sksjsjhssjn
rougechanel
#2
Chapter 4: So few authors who writes SVTxBP yet all are the best with the manner on writing and the delivery of characters.
Hope you will update in the future!
kaikrisCNYeon #3
Chapter 4: wow. can't wait for this to get much much updates! I rarely read vampire stuffs but this just grabbed my attention thou I was suppose to sleep XD I LOVE THIS!!!
aqilahzamri__ #4
Chapter 4: Please update,im just found svtxbp
panda22017 #5
Chapter 4: what the hell? this is actually so good??
finally a Blackpink--Seventeen storyy thankyou so much author-niim
this is lit! I'm definitely waiting for the next update
and I love how every scene (?) has different atmosphere (?) to it?? am I even making any sense, but the way you write it really builds the atmosphere dang you're good!!!
ynanavarro #6
Chapter 4: I finally found a bpxsvt fanfic T0T iam so happy~
ynanavarro #7
Chapter 4: I finally found a bpxsvt fanfic T0T iam so happy~
payukoornz
#8
Chapter 4: dammit darl, I love the way you write so much, it's so engaging. I love how you write the chapter with scene changes, I can imagine it like a movie.
and Wonwoo tho... I want a friend like him
and HOSHI BE HOT
waiting for next update!!
Elythia
#9
Chapter 3: AHAHAHA omg that's so hilarious xDD It's such a joy reading your writing, because despite the appropriate use of description during necessary moments, you also have a witty sense of humour. Wonwoo is such a great friend e u e The first 'official' meeting is quite cliche but still, it never fails to crack me up. I have a feeling Mingyu and Rose would have a frenemy kind of relationship (which is my favourite type of relationship tbh). What'll happen next? Is Rose going to kill him... or will something unexpected happen? Hmm... I just hope it doesn't take the stereotypical path which often happens in these kinds of stories (A and B meet -> they fight a lot -> A wanted to kill B but ends up falling in love with B -> they become a couple, but their relationship is forbidden so lots of drama happen -> happy ending yay). I mean I don't mind cliches if they're executed well, but I also hope there'll be a plot twist to make this journey a memorable one lol. Anyways, the layout is really pretty but it may be a bit of a hassle since the readers have to scroll horizontally sometimes, and this can disrupt the reading flow. It's not a terribly big issue, though it may serve as a problem if your chapters get any longer. But anyways, all the best in writing! I look forward to the next update o/
Elythia
#10
Chapter 2: The premise is super interesting! It's been some time since I've watched an action and fantasy fic, but this seems fun ; u ; BlackpinkxSeventeen is not exactly my cup of tea, but you may change my mind hehe. Anyways, here goes. Your descriptions are really detailed and vivid. It's as if you're carving images into our heads with every magical sentence that you write. The problem is that most of your sentences are incomplete. Although sometimes, incomplete sentences can bring about a certain effect, you're overusing them (e.g. "One building to another, leaping through towers and sideways." - There's no subject over here, so the sentence isn't complete.) Also, Mingyu's (I presume it's Mingyu) new entrance is a bit unclear. I thought it was some random villain lol. At the moment, I'm quite confused as to what the setting's about exactly... What is Rose's role? Why are they suddenly fighting? Hopefully we'll get an explanation to that soon. But you've kickstarted this story off with a bang, and you've piqued my interest. I'll keep reading on (: