Chapter 4: "I wanted to see what you'd do...If you hadn't reached out, I would have." the line that made my heart flutter; this is so cute. I'm in heaven.
"Jonghyun kissed like he was singing." I imagined things and that is nOT OKAY. But i love this line because when Jonghyun sings he's not just passionate, he's indescribable--stunning and love that you used such a simile here :)

Chapter 3: Their back and forth texting/banter is adorable. It kind of reminded me of the dynamic between them on instagram with all of Jonghyun's comments. Off to read the rest~

Chapter 3: This is such a great story .. I'm blushing at jongkey..it's so adorable..

And comment on your comment about lonely
I felt the same as I'm also feel what jonghyun felt and it's true the song isnt about sadness but hope. Something that you want to find and out of loneliness. The song is very meaningful to me also emotional. There's no word to explain how I felt when listening to his song .

Chapter 1: The words that you said about Lonely not being about sadness but hope, it really got to me. He did say he hasn't felt happy yet and when I heard that, I felt really devastated. He's been smiling these days and I hope (yup the word came out^^) they are sincere and yea...I hope Jonghyun's also happy at the same time. I love Jonghyun and I love SHINee and I love SHINee World~ I hope that all of us will be happy and satisfied. Jonghyun Please be HAPPY! BTW I'll read now (haven't read yet but already making a comment...) Got emotional just now...I'm very happy to know SHINee and SHINee World!

Chapter 3: Hii^^ I'm bad at writing in english but I just need you to know that your story is very pretty and make my heart melt♡ I love your writing style and of course, the way you put the two, so natural between them.♡ Please update soon, we're waiting for more *^*
AAAAANNND THANK YOUU~♡

Chapter 2: Dear author, it's almost impossible that you wouldn't have subscribers when the story is sooooo beautiful and well written. I just love it. As soon as I listen to Lonely, I had your same feelings about it. And even if it is just in my mind and also in yours, I like to think that Key would be a nice cure to that loneliness that invades Jonghyun's soul. About the side characters, Irene and Jinki are perfect. Jinki's last statement about getting back his friend left me speechlees. Please keep updating.

Chapter 2: I love the best friends! I loved the way you wrote Irene! So lovely! Also, I'm glad that Jjong has someone as caring as Jinki!
I'm so excited for this!

Chapter 1: I would certainly love to read more, this was lovely. :)