Goddess of the Moonlight

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After the girl on a hanbok dress introduces herself as the goddess of the moonlight, Sinb cracked up laughing out loud.

 

Thinking that the girl must be out of her mind, she leans closer and snaps her forehead before she jokingly asks "Did you take drugs? Are you sure the screws on your brain aren't loose?"

 

The goddess was flustered with Sinb's actions. No one in that place would ever dare to put their hands on creatures like them. And even talk unmannerly like how Sinb does.

 

Hunters are the only ones who have the guts to even face them but just to catch them. And this time, Shawing or what we called now as Sinb, doesn't seemed to care and treats her like she's not any different even after she revealed that she's actually a goddess.

 

"I am truly a goddess, how dare you touch my forehead with that filthy hands of yours?" 

 

"How do you expect me to believe that?" Sinb grins trying her best not to laugh on a weird conversation with some kind of a weird woman.

 

But the laughter that she was trying to keep hidden on her face have gone when the woman's eyes started to change it's own color into blue and the light coming from it becomes brighter.

 

Then a moment later, the wind started to blew her hair and the leaves from the ground flies around them.

 

Then the woman's hanbok dress changes into a white glowing dress which makes her look more like a real goddess as she slowly rise up in the air.

 

Sinb's eyes widened as she witnessed all those creepy things for her and she stumbles on the ground while looking at the creature in front of her. 

 

"Yy-You...What kind of..." Sinb courageously opens but her voice trembles because of fear.

 

"I told you I'm a goddess yet you didn't believe me. Then how about this?" With some alluring movements of her hands, she commands the wind to lift Sinb up.

 

But as she tries to do it, the wind suddenly went gone and the leaves swirling around them became motionles and slowly fallen.

 

"What was happening?" She asks in her mind before she felt some heaviness on her body and then she was dragged and fell down to the ground.

 

"Aaaahhh" She winced in pain from her ankle. 

 

"What was that feeling? Is this a feeling of being hurt? Of being in a so much pain?" She never knew that feeling, she's a goddess after all. But now that she can feel it, how can she handle this pain in the future. When everything will turn out to be hurtful.

 

What actually happened that time is a mystery for her that she herself can't explain and it was too sudden. She can't suddenly use her power and she felt pain. What does it exactly mean?

 

While the goddess is trying to stand up, Sinb found this chance to run away.

 

Seeing the same patterns of trees and bushes on her way, the place becomes more mysterious for Sinb who used to live in a City but all she can see now, is a world she isn't used to be. 

 

Not being familiar to the place, sh

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yupupddin #1
Chapter 4: Please i need the next chapter!
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 1: Ooh... such a mysterious start. I'm assuming that Yuju is the source of that voice echoing in Sinb's head when she was sleeping (and ain't that scary already? it's like in horror movie haha especially with the darkness stuff XD). But jokings aside, I like the way you keep us hanging with the last scene. So apparently, Yuju (with the hanbok) has finally returned to meet with Sinb! Usually in movies, we see that important events happen when the sky was roaring with thunder and lightnings so it was pleasant to read something like that in fiction haha.
She's wearing hanbok, so I assume this is going to be a time travel fantasy story? Ooh I'm a er for this genre honestly XD
There are already a lot of questions in my head now. Whether if Sinb's obsession with capturing lunar rainbow has to do anything with the plot or it's just her passion. Whether if Sinb had a past life or not, etc.
The plot aspect is working great for me, but not quite the writing style. It's not about grammar (yours is good and you just have to proofread a bit and all should be fine!), not about your narration (it was nice and easy to follow) but it's about the presentation? Like how you make two(?) empty lines to separate each one-to-three-sentence paragraph doesn't work that well for me. Usually we do that to cut different scenes making the transitions less surprising to readers so in your case, you should consider making paragraphs longer and only separating that way when the transition really needs to take place (if that makes sense?)

I've never read a Gfriend story before and I'm not exactly a part of the fandom (though I do adore Yuju the multi-talented and Sinb the ice princess and they are my favs in GF actually) but I hope you still welcome me to read your story :)
SHINeeMe08
#3
Chapter 4: Woah this is a great story...haha sinb get annoyed at her other name,"Shawing" haha
haraeyul
#4
Chapter 4: Hahaha I'm laughing at that loosen screw parts XD that's my joke with my siblings tho XD HHaha and you're spoiling about Yuju author ah... It'll be more mystery if you didn't reveal about Yuju in future XD HAHAHA BTW, I'm not a lover of supernatural story but I'm starts to love reading it with this ff. Wanna know why? The answer is just one, because the actress in here are Gfriend and not a cocky guy with a beard that can attract any girl who fall in love by just seeing his beard *rolled my eyes* XD HAHAHAH

P's. Don't mind my ridiculous and unrelated rant. Idk what's going on with me this lately XD
RedSapph
#5
Chapter 4: I don't know if I should hate Yewon or not :3
LoonPrincess #6
Chapter 3: Love it!
RedSapph
#7
Chapter 3: "Did you take drugs? Are you sure the screws on your brain aren't loose?" am I the only one who understand this? XD and "SinB - rookie lawyer" I remember Because she is Eomma lol
You really spoil us about Yuju author-nim!
RedSapph
#8
Chapter 2: Like haraeyul author-nim, I just found this because of the recommendation XD but I read the one in SinJu collection though
Cucumberbaby
#9
Sinju squad is here
haraeyul
#10
I found this ff after reading your recommended in your other ff XD but i'll not read it for now (busy *heavy sigh*) but i'll read it once i've out from this busy life ^_^ btw, hwaiting!