Lunar Rainbows (Full Version)

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Lunar Rainbows are rare natural atmospheric phenomena that occur by refraction of moon light on the water droplets in the air. Other than the difference in its light source, its formation is exactly the same as a solar rainbow but is much fainter.


Rainbows are rare yet it marks its presence through a beautiful colorful bridge-like formation up in the sky, but how much rare could it be when you're waiting for it to come in the night sky?


Is there way for two hearts to meet once again though the chance that was given is to live through the time that was far apart? 

 

Hi Guys, 

I'm back HAHA and I'm sorry but I did some changes in this story.. I hope you'll read it well from the start cause I decided to change the plot a little bit ^_^ I promise to make it a better one
 

-Sorry for the Cover image, I was sleeping in class the time we take the photoshop subject >.< please someone help me HAHA

 

- #2

Foreword

Characters:

 

1. Hwang Eun Bi

Hwang Sinb
- A 20 year old Law student who have a strong passion in arts and nature and loves the perfect shape of the moon.
- Her life was simple with everyone she loves but everything changes after an accident.

Shawing
- She was a protector and a hunter together with her twin sister Yewon.
- Her symbol was blade and she was chosen to be the keeper of the glass bead of soul.
- She was betrayed by her own sister. 

2. Choi Yuna

Goddess of the Moonlight/Yuju

- An unknown being which she introduces herself as the goddess of the moonlight who wanted to prove that darkness of the night isn't a thing that people should be frightened of.

- But something happened that was against her destined path of life.

3. Kim Yewon

Umji
- 18 year old highschool girl who was in a team of archery in their school.
- She was Sinb's younger sister.

Yewon

- She was a hunter and twin sister of Shawing.
- Her symbol was arrow and she was also known as archery fairy. 

 

I hope you won't get confused of who's who, specially on Sinb's character xD more characters to show up as the story goes on~~~

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yupupddin #1
Chapter 4: Please i need the next chapter!
prod_GLEE #2
Chapter 1: Ooh... such a mysterious start. I'm assuming that Yuju is the source of that voice echoing in Sinb's head when she was sleeping (and ain't that scary already? it's like in horror movie haha especially with the darkness stuff XD). But jokings aside, I like the way you keep us hanging with the last scene. So apparently, Yuju (with the hanbok) has finally returned to meet with Sinb! Usually in movies, we see that important events happen when the sky was roaring with thunder and lightnings so it was pleasant to read something like that in fiction haha.
She's wearing hanbok, so I assume this is going to be a time travel fantasy story? Ooh I'm a er for this genre honestly XD
There are already a lot of questions in my head now. Whether if Sinb's obsession with capturing lunar rainbow has to do anything with the plot or it's just her passion. Whether if Sinb had a past life or not, etc.
The plot aspect is working great for me, but not quite the writing style. It's not about grammar (yours is good and you just have to proofread a bit and all should be fine!), not about your narration (it was nice and easy to follow) but it's about the presentation? Like how you make two(?) empty lines to separate each one-to-three-sentence paragraph doesn't work that well for me. Usually we do that to cut different scenes making the transitions less surprising to readers so in your case, you should consider making paragraphs longer and only separating that way when the transition really needs to take place (if that makes sense?)

I've never read a Gfriend story before and I'm not exactly a part of the fandom (though I do adore Yuju the multi-talented and Sinb the ice princess and they are my favs in GF actually) but I hope you still welcome me to read your story :)
SHINeeMe08 #3
Chapter 4: Woah this is a great story...haha sinb get annoyed at her other name,"Shawing" haha
haraeyul #4
Chapter 4: Hahaha I'm laughing at that loosen screw parts XD that's my joke with my siblings tho XD HHaha and you're spoiling about Yuju author ah... It'll be more mystery if you didn't reveal about Yuju in future XD HAHAHA BTW, I'm not a lover of supernatural story but I'm starts to love reading it with this ff. Wanna know why? The answer is just one, because the actress in here are Gfriend and not a cocky guy with a beard that can attract any girl who fall in love by just seeing his beard *rolled my eyes* XD HAHAHAH

P's. Don't mind my ridiculous and unrelated rant. Idk what's going on with me this lately XD
RedSapph #5
Chapter 4: I don't know if I should hate Yewon or not :3
LoonPrincess #6
Chapter 3: Love it!
RedSapph #7
Chapter 3: "Did you take drugs? Are you sure the screws on your brain aren't loose?" am I the only one who understand this? XD and "SinB - rookie lawyer" I remember Because she is Eomma lol
You really spoil us about Yuju author-nim!
RedSapph #8
Chapter 2: Like haraeyul author-nim, I just found this because of the recommendation XD but I read the one in SinJu collection though
Cucumberbaby #9
Sinju squad is here
haraeyul #10
I found this ff after reading your recommended in your other ff XD but i'll not read it for now (busy *heavy sigh*) but i'll read it once i've out from this busy life ^_^ btw, hwaiting!
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