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[Year 2017 - Present]

 

"If one day, you're out walking alone and then you felt a presence beside you. Don't feel any fear or a need of running away, cause that would be me who was waiting for so long to get out of this darkness..."

 

"What's with that dream again?" Sinb woke up with that question in her mind. It isn't a long time since she have heard that voice in her dream again.

 

"12:30 A.M" She muttered before she lifts her head up and checked the view of the nightsky through the window beside her bed.

 

And there she realized that it is already time for the best view of the night sky "I almost skipped this moment" The time where the moon shines the best, and there she forgot about thinking of her strange dream like before.

 

She gets excited whenever the moon is on it's perfect shape and her way to cherish it is to capture it's beauty through her own photography or a painting.

 

She quickly runs to her cabinet, taking out her camera and a drawing pad. She opened the windows and sneakly climbed up the rooftop as quiet as she can trying to avoid any kind of noise she might create. 

 

She always did that during the full moon break. But once she finished everything, The photos she took for almost 30 minutes and the painting she did for almost 1 hour might look perfect in someone's view but she has never been satisfied.

 

She just felt like there

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yupupddin #1
Chapter 4: Please i need the next chapter!
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 1: Ooh... such a mysterious start. I'm assuming that Yuju is the source of that voice echoing in Sinb's head when she was sleeping (and ain't that scary already? it's like in horror movie haha especially with the darkness stuff XD). But jokings aside, I like the way you keep us hanging with the last scene. So apparently, Yuju (with the hanbok) has finally returned to meet with Sinb! Usually in movies, we see that important events happen when the sky was roaring with thunder and lightnings so it was pleasant to read something like that in fiction haha.
She's wearing hanbok, so I assume this is going to be a time travel fantasy story? Ooh I'm a er for this genre honestly XD
There are already a lot of questions in my head now. Whether if Sinb's obsession with capturing lunar rainbow has to do anything with the plot or it's just her passion. Whether if Sinb had a past life or not, etc.
The plot aspect is working great for me, but not quite the writing style. It's not about grammar (yours is good and you just have to proofread a bit and all should be fine!), not about your narration (it was nice and easy to follow) but it's about the presentation? Like how you make two(?) empty lines to separate each one-to-three-sentence paragraph doesn't work that well for me. Usually we do that to cut different scenes making the transitions less surprising to readers so in your case, you should consider making paragraphs longer and only separating that way when the transition really needs to take place (if that makes sense?)

I've never read a Gfriend story before and I'm not exactly a part of the fandom (though I do adore Yuju the multi-talented and Sinb the ice princess and they are my favs in GF actually) but I hope you still welcome me to read your story :)
SHINeeMe08
#3
Chapter 4: Woah this is a great story...haha sinb get annoyed at her other name,"Shawing" haha
haraeyul
#4
Chapter 4: Hahaha I'm laughing at that loosen screw parts XD that's my joke with my siblings tho XD HHaha and you're spoiling about Yuju author ah... It'll be more mystery if you didn't reveal about Yuju in future XD HAHAHA BTW, I'm not a lover of supernatural story but I'm starts to love reading it with this ff. Wanna know why? The answer is just one, because the actress in here are Gfriend and not a cocky guy with a beard that can attract any girl who fall in love by just seeing his beard *rolled my eyes* XD HAHAHAH

P's. Don't mind my ridiculous and unrelated rant. Idk what's going on with me this lately XD
RedSapph
#5
Chapter 4: I don't know if I should hate Yewon or not :3
LoonPrincess #6
Chapter 3: Love it!
RedSapph
#7
Chapter 3: "Did you take drugs? Are you sure the screws on your brain aren't loose?" am I the only one who understand this? XD and "SinB - rookie lawyer" I remember Because she is Eomma lol
You really spoil us about Yuju author-nim!
RedSapph
#8
Chapter 2: Like haraeyul author-nim, I just found this because of the recommendation XD but I read the one in SinJu collection though
Cucumberbaby
#9
Sinju squad is here
haraeyul
#10
I found this ff after reading your recommended in your other ff XD but i'll not read it for now (busy *heavy sigh*) but i'll read it once i've out from this busy life ^_^ btw, hwaiting!