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RYU HWAMIN PINK :: KIM TAEHYUNG :: CHOSEN
melissa says : this is my own little brat! @ manda: pst, you have done enough, gurl. no worries! thank you very much for the layout!
amanda says : goals tbh. also i'm not the best when it comes to code so yes there will be a visible scroll bar i know it looks hideous im SORRY :" (
MOON KYORIPEACH :: MIN YOONGI :: CHOSEN
melissa says : this is seriously lit.
amanda says : here is my lovely little fireball !
PARK EUNBYULBABY BLUE :: JEON JUNGKOOK :: ACCEPTED
melissa says : hey there minnie and thank you for being the first to apply! you have no idea how much this means to me. c': anyway let's move on to your review, shall we?
there is nothing wrong with her basics though i find it really cute about her dimples part. cough.
moving on to my favorite part aka love section~ jungkook being adventurous in skinship. i see you there. *insert smirk and finger guns* afajshf their first meeting is seriously cute. though i'm kinda surprised eunbyul did not murder him unlike hwamin cough. aww jungkookie if you don't wanna charge you won't get to see eunbyul longer!! sdghsegse THE ENDING IS PERFECT IM SQUEALING HERE!!
overall eunbyul is really a cute character as seen from the interview and the interactions. cute as in awkwardly cute. cough.
amanda says : hi minnie ! i'm so sorry for such a late review. since all of the issues mel pointed out are fixed, this will just be me gushing about your app. hehe. first, i love all of the detail you put in. it's obvious that a lot of effort went into it and i appreciate that ! i'm so happy to see jungkook being used for the baby blue plotline, i think it fits really well !
ah, jungkook and eunbyul are so cute ! i love their relationship and their interactions. the fact that he can be protective over her, omg, i love <3 and the trivia you put for their relationship was so fun to read ! and the ending you put for the love story, seriously adorable. i just want to protect their relationship forever, omg. all in all, this app was so cute and fun to read ! thank you so much for applying ! <3
JIAN JIEQIONG LAVENDER :: KIM ROWOON :: ACCEPTED
melissa says : helloooo claire! firstly, i would like to thank you for applying! now let's move on to the review. dun dun dun!
for the basics, i don't find any major mistakes and i find the weeaboo nickname kinda cute? it kinda reminds me of wee woo and seeing that your fc is someone from pristin, ohoho ( < w < ) anyway! on to her personality, no mistakes here though i did notice she is leaning more on the negative side which i think its fine? since she won't be a mary-sue. moving to her background, i can clearly see how she became a crazy otaku till now and i like that she never change her personality despite many people giving her disgusting looks like aINT NOBODY GONNA STOP ME FROM LOVING ANIMANGA. ew daehwi how can you not love jieqiong just because of her weird ? stop judging people ok. e u e omg she plays otome games. why does this suddenly reminded me of mystic messenger-
pMSL she is following him!! it should have been the other round but WHAT IS SHE DOING?? jieqiong looks so irritable in rowoon's point of view oh god if only there is an interview part for the android. i wonder what he would say HAHAHA omg jieqiong jump into conclusions too fast during their first meeting even though i laughed at the take her money part HAHA are you gay? BLESS ME WHAT DID I JUST READ HAHAHAHA noooo the headstrong girl had gave up D: look what you have done now rowoon :/
ohoho i personally think the pink plotline suits taehyung ever since i watched him on hwarang so... : ) but you did a great job!! overall i like jieqiong even though there are some incomplete sentences in your app cough.
amanda says : hey claire ! first thing i noticed is the lovely color scheme you chose. it's so pretty ! her nicknames are so funny, i really enjoyed reading that part. all of the basics are fine, and i feel like your choice of fc fits her so well ! the background was well-written and really lovely to read. her relationship with daehwi is quite interest. beard. it would be interesting to see how he and rowoon interact, especailly when daehwi catches feelings.
speaking of roWOON I SCREAMED WHEN I SAW HIS NAME I LOVE SF9 BUT I LOVE HIM THE MOST AHHH. im so excited that someone applied with him ! i can't get over her relationship with him- the fact that he's cold but she still tries to get his attention, aw <3 i love their love story, it was a pleasure to read. i also really like the scene requests you put as well ! thank you so much for applying !
GO SUNGAHLAVENDER :: SON HYUNWOO :: ACCEPTED
melissa says : hey hey, sami! wow another lavender plotline! thank you so much for having interest in this app. let me move on to the review!
her basics looks good, nothing missing or needs to be add on. i do appreciate the little explaination you did with her personality. her background is short but at least i do know how she became addicted to anime so that's good. this is literally the first time i see someone having a pet in th relation section !! i think i will add in more makoto interactions with hyunwoo instead of sungah cause it will be hella cute. jk JK. arm floaties. i haven't seen adults using this before. my, this will be funny yet refreshing to see for some reason.
oh yas. dem long legs is so-- long. hyunwoo seemed fitting for this android guy! idk i can literally imagine his cold poker face. HAHA sungah be like notice me senpai and hyunwoo be like gtfo. poor hyunwoo, sungah please give this guy a break. i will take it that sungah is not really a phone user since she will not bring her 'phone' wherever she go. actually hwamin did not tell everyone in the group about her android until someone brought the android topic up or when someone noticed her being weird. but it was not that major so i'll let it slide. HAHA living in her closet. BLESS THE SMOL SPACE IN THE CLOSET. BLESS HIS LONG LEGS. for the ending,
that pretty sums up my review! i find your app short but it gives me an idea of how sungah's like despite the details. besides clarifying the highlighted part in the comments, your app is accepted!
amanda says : hey sami ! i love how simple yet pretty your app is. sungah's style is like mine lol rip. her personality matches with her plotline very well ! OMG I LOVE HER CAT LMAO and the fact that she named him after her favorite anime boyfriend lmao i can't.
IM HONESTLY SCREAMING at the way sungah compares kyori to taiga bc she was actually one of my inspirations for kyori ! i love love loved reading the whole love interest/love story part. your writing in general was so sassy and funny, making the entire app a pleasure to read, but the love part was my favorite. overall i really enjoyed this app so much ! thank you for applying !
LEE MISOLAVENDER :: BAEK JUHO :: ACCEPTED
melissa says : hello alice! the third lavender plot! guess i know which plot is everyone's hot favorite now oho! before i start the review, i want to thank you for being interested in applying this fic!
so let's start with the basics. i find yehana suits this plotline because of her cheery looking face? she just looks so bright and seemed like a cheerful person! and her fashion sense really reminds me of the typical crazy otakus. really. her personality seems fine, no mistakes. i like how her name originates from her happy personality! now that i read her background, it seems kind of sad and she even tried covering up her insecurities with her bright colorful outfits.
on to the love section~ ohhhh so they shared a bed. ( < w < ) ahh about the phone case, i wanted it to be on its own shape and size even though the phone became an android but since you let him have it as a pair of shorts then alright! cough im exposing part of teaser 3 here oh god. kahfaauhf the ending is so dramatic I LIKE IT. ITS LIKE SOOOOO KDRAMA AND ANIME-ISH.
about valentines, i'm not entirely sure? since i like the timeline to match almost the same as our real time here. until you edited the part highlighted in pink, the rest of the app is fine for me!
amanda says : hey alice ! ok the first thing i noticed is another sf9 android i feel blessed ??? love me some sf9. i really like just how much of an otaku she is. you definetly took the lavender plotline and ran with it, which is good ! her style is so unique and crazy ! i can for sure picture kyori affectionatlely teasing her about it.
i also saw that you fixed the error mel pointed out, so good job ! i really enjoyed reading the love story part ! dang, all of you guys got these love stories that just leave me squealing, idk how much longer i can survive ! i'm sorry for this review taking so long, but thank you so much for applying !
SON CHAEYULBABY BLUE :: JUNG HYUNMIN :: PENDING
melissa says : hey there twilla! first and foremost, i'm sorry for delaying your review. ;; and thank you for taking the time to apply! let's start with the review, alright?
finally an app that isn't lavender! the basics are fine, no mistakes at all. being friendly and awkward kind of contradicts but you have explained everything so that's fine. her background seems short but it tells me what i want to know. ahh that kinda , the only places she visits is the school, her parents' hospital and home. but this made me think. if she visits these three places most of the time, does she even hang out with hwamin, kyori and the others? because hanging with hwamin is the main reason why her phone turn into an android isn't it? you can just explain in the comment section but if you want to edit your app, it is fine with me too!
aw looks like hyunmin is taking care of chaeyul well. ; u ; like a big brother. omo when you want to study but ends up watching dramas. i can totally relate. HOLY A KISS DURING THEIR FIRST MEETING ALREADY? HYUNMIN YOU'RE SCARING THE GIRL ALREADY!! wow an android that wants to make his owner feel what's love. i guess he likes her already the moment they met i mean- THEY KISSED. so hyunmin is making chaeyul feel what being in a relationship is like but he wants chaeyul to be with yunseok? WHAT IS THIS SORCERY HYUNMIN? but aww that jealousy ohoho his plan backfired.
chaeyul is an interesting character, though i cannot grasp her character a few times but i can understand where you are heading to after reading through again. please change the mistakes i highlighted and other than that, you're good to go!
amanda says : coming soon!
KIM SIJINWHITE :: KIM SUNGGYU :: PENDING
melissa says : hello maggie! ah yes, i remembered your comment! thank you for having interest in this fic~ OMG THE FIRST APP FOR WHITE PLOTLINE IAFHSKJFH. shall we start on the review now?
first off is her basics. what an interesting explaination as to where she got her nickname from. lying on the bed and daydream. that's me everyday. HAHA OMG SIWOON IS SUCH A NICE BROTHER TO LET HIS SISTERS DRESS HIM UP. brother goals. ; A ; i like siwoon already omo can hwamin have a crush on him? akfhak jk i'm sorry #stayloyaltotaetae sure sure, she can have one of the girls as her roommate! well that is if you ask the others. i see you did not add hwamin and kyori in your relations? please remember to add them in since you mentioned that sijin met them during middle school. sparkly gel pens. those are so elementary school i. eating a lot and not gain weight, why do i see myself in this.
akjghakg its gyujiji the old man! i got a feeling i'm gonna laugh throughout this love section because something about him cracks me up everytime. both of them being stubborn is SO CUTE IM CRYING AT SUNGGYU BEING THE LIL KID AND BOWING HIS HEAD AWKWARDLY. oho yes, we do cuss as well, no worries. ; ) fjskhk sunggyu you can just google youself, you're a freaking phone what for you use a computer. loved her with all his motherboard HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHA OK I DIED GOODBYE. HE BRAIDS HER HAIR DA WHERE CAN I GET A SUNGGYU? i need to slap myself ok i'm so sorry taetae i love you, really.
ohhh i like the group chat thing. maybe i should! thank you for suggesting that! ohh no worries, i on the other hand, have been procrastinating so being late is fine. cough. HOLY THAT FLUFF IM SQUEALING KHSGKJS I DIDN'T KNOW SUNGGYU CAN BE THIS OPPA I MEAN HE IS ALREADY A GRANDPA HOW DOES HE KNOW ALL THIS FLUFFY SHIZZ??!! overall i enjoyed reading your app! if you can add in what's highlighted, you'll be good to go!
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IM HYERIMWHITE :: JEON WONWOO :: REVIEWING
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LEE ALASTAIRWHITE :: CHOI JUNHONG :: REVIEWING
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SONG EUNRAERAINBOW :: BOO SEUNGKWAN :: REVIEWING
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NAMEPLOTLINE :: ANDROID :: STATUS
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