How To Fall in Love

Description

 

There are five steps in falling in love. Love their looks. Love their heart. Love their worth. Love their love. And love them for eternity.

 

Foreword

 

A story I posted in livejournal as seyensay for aikoi_wings. It's only a five step story. Information about the character is within the story. The story is choppy and simple in my best attempt. Please enjoy!

There is not much else to say about this story. It's a bit unoriginal, since it's a story that gives an instructional guide on "How To Fall in Love." Which loses its originality. I appreciate all comments for this story, especially critique, even if I die in a little inside with each critique, but if it's good reasoning then please give your best critique.

 

 

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Disclaimer:

This is an OLD STORY and is not included in any crowdfunding!

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SyaranyDJ #1
I love this story! :)
Serene #2
Aw. What a cute ending. I chuckled.

As for the story as a whole: the only thing that comes to mind right now off the top of my head is that, at times, I had difficulty figuring out who was speaking. Like it seemed the listener in the conversation was actually the speaker.
nyappy
#3
Whahahhaha I love the end its justl like the story would repeat!!