Chapter 1: What happened at the endddd I want a sequel real quick huhuhu this is so smart. Like always, Seventeen's prodigy Woozi made the song beautifully and how you relate the song with the story was even more beautiful ❤

Chapter 1: I need sequel pleaseeeeeee

Chapter 1: i imagine the ending with jihoon looking at a crying seungcheol then spits out "why are you crying, HYUNG? realizing something? after all these time? you bye" then goes back to the dorm because it

Chapter 1: PART 2
After his tears end Jihoon lifts his head from Seungcheol's shoulder to look into Seungcheol's eyes "Why did you leave me?". Seungcheol raises his hand, caressing Jihoon's cheek with his thumb as he talks "I thought that it was the best for you. I thought that you were better off without me. That I was holding you back". "Stupid" Jihoon hits Seungcheol's shoulder lightly as he sniffles "You're stupid Choi Seungcheol". "I'm sorry baby." Seungcheol bends down to Jihoon's level to look into his eyes lovingly. “Stupid” Jihoon mumbles as he closes the distant and kisses Seungcheol tenderly. Seungcheol wraps his arms around Jihoon and deepens the kiss.
"I love you" Seungcheol says after they separate "I love you Lee Jihoon, I'm sorry that I hurt you. I promise I will never make you cry again." Seungcheol leans in to kiss the corner of Jihoon's eye "Don't ever cry because of me Lee Jihoon, I'm not worth your tears"
"Stupid" Jihoon says as he hugs Seungcheol's waist and leans his head to Seungcheol's chest "You're worth everything to me."


"OHMYGOD!" "Sshh Vernon, they are going to hear us!" Seungkwan puts his hand over Vernon's mouth to prevent getting caught. "HOW DID YOU KNOW THEY WERE GONNA DO THIS!? SINCE WHEN-" "You are so dense Vernon-ah" Seungkwan shakes his head disappointedly "You're lucky that I love you. Come on, we should go before they notice us." Seungkwan takes Vernon's hand and starts walking towards their dorm as Vernon continues expressing his astonishment.


Sorry I couldn't stop myself from putting that little Verkwan here^^ Also sorry that I wrote SO long, also couldn't stop myself^^
I still hope that you will continue this story with a second chapter tho, thanks in advance<3

Chapter 1: I hate open endings. Even if I write a good ending in my head, I never know if it's the one in the writer's head so it doesn't satisfy me. I even prefer bad endings to open endings lol.
And I have to post this as 2 parts because apparently my comment exceeds the limit lol.
In my head: After Jihoon turns around, him and Seungcheol just look at each other for a while, their tears still visible on their faces. Jihoon asks "What are you doing here?", stuttering. Seungcheol answers "I was worried because you didn't eat.", his eyes never leaves Jihoon's as he talks. Jihoon averts his eyes "You don't have to worry about me, I am doing okay by myself", "You are, but I am not." Seungcheol says. Jihoon looks at Seungcheol with wide eyes. Seungcheol takes one step closer to Jihoon "I can't Jihoon, I can't be okay when I don't know if you're doing okay, if you've eaten enough, if you've slept enough, if you're happy." Jihoon's tears starts to fall again. Seungcheol takes another step closer "I need to know that you are okay. Even if I'm not the one beside you, I need to know that you're happy." "But why?" Jihoon asks as his tears fall nonstop "Why Seungcheol? You were the one who became distant, you were the one who moved away from me. You left me! You took away my happiness from me. Why are you acting like you care?" "Jihoon-" Seungcheol takes the last step and takes Jihoon in his arms. Jihoon doesn't fight as he continues to cry on Seungcheol's shoulder. "I'm sorry baby, I'm sorry that I hurt you, I'm sorry that I took away your happines, Jihoon, I'm sorry, please forgive me." Jihoon asks "Why?" over and over between his tears. Seungcheol caresses Jihoon's back, soothes him until his tears end.

Chapter 1: This . . . homyghad. This is exactly what I thought what happened when I first heard the song. Jicheol. I even replayed their pre-debut videos /sobs/ Thank you for this, author-nim (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ This is so beautiful. anD VERNOM YOU DENSE KID, READ THE ATMOSPHERE OMYGHAD! Anw, I'm suing you for breaking my glass heart-- jkjk ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

I actually hate open endings but, well, exception do exist ;----; And I'm not even sure I wanna know what really happened coz what if it isNT A HAPPY ENDING?!! I'll just end this with a kiss and a tight hug (in my mind) for my poor jicheol soul who you hurt-- lol. Love ya~

Chapter 1: this is good.
well, i cant stop thinking of them reconcile at the same spot they're first being a couple after reading the open-ending. and then as Laughter's lyrics, Seungcheol and Jihoon hoped it will be just great as they tried harder. ^^
kkkk, thanks for sharing this thou~

;0; I wanna read this but the chapters not there!! Did u accidentally deleted it ovo?

Did you accidentally delete the first chapter? Or is it just me? I wanna read it~ *whining nonstop*

Chapter 1: "Everything stops for Lee Jihoon"

bECAUSE TAO IS THERE TO STOP TIME WOHOHOHOHOGOHO #no

THE ENDING IS SCARY SOMEONE HELP xDD WHAT IF CHEOL'S ACTUALLY AN ALIEN AND JIHOON'S NOW KIDNAPPED TO SOME WEIRD PLANET OUTSIDE MILKY WAY-

Thank you for writing this I like it I'm sorry for being weird ;w;