Cut 5 • Month One

Desperate • A Cut Writing Contest • Closed For Month One
 
cut 5 / month one
Cut 5 • Month One
 

Just like the wind blowing on his empty heart, it was now blowing on his cold cheeks.

Causing Taekwoon to place his hand on Hongbin’s numb yet soft cheek.

“Hongbin,” a small sutter came out of Taekwoons lips caused by the cold.

Hongbin slowly nodded and grabbed onto Taekwoon’s fingers and enlaced their hands together.

“Are you cold?” The older questioned, letting go of the yongers hands, and taking a pair of gloves out of the large pockets in his dark blue jacket.

Hongbin nodded again, he was about to take the gloves out of Taekwoons hand. When he noticed that the older wasn't wearing any gloves too.

He stepped back and shook his head. When Taekwoon have him a confused look he only replied by pointing at Taekwoons glove-less hands.

Taekwoon looked down at his hands and smiled. He extended the gloves out to Hongbin again. “I'm not that cold Hongbin you can take them.”

Hongbin looked around at the people surrounding them and then gave Taekwoon an ‘are you sure’ look. And Taekwoon nodded. The small fake freckles on his cheeks showing.

By now Taekwoon should have noticed all of the people that were  giving Hongbin the stink eye.

But even if Taekwoon had seen all of his fans faces. He chose to ignore them for Hongbin.

His attention was only on Hongbin tonight as they stood under the Christmas lights.

Because Hongbin was different.

And most people would think that Taekwoon may mean that in a way were Hongbin was different as in he couldn't speak.

But no, Taekwoon meant Hongbin was different because the younger was a master piece.

The reason was because only master pieces felt something more than attraction or infatuation towards another human.

And even if all of Taekwoon’s world wide fans claimed to ‘love’ him. He could never believe that. They only loved Taekwoon for his voice

None of them were like Hongbin.

Hongbin loved Taekwoon truly, and he had never ever heard the olders melodious voice.

But even in the end, Taekwoon needed only one type of person. A person that he could hear the words ‘i love you’ from every single day of his life. And he knew Hongbin would never be able to do that.

A/N: Hi!! It's been a while. But i decided to post this nice cut I wrote last night on my phone. And with this one you can change the names of the characters(Takwoon is dominant)and the genders(Hongbin would be the girl). So I hope you like this! Please mae sure to ask me if you have any questions!

 
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ellethereal
#1
Chapter 2: Hey for cut 2 can i change the character to a male?
byeolreenxx
#2
Also, sorry for the amount of questions I ask but am I allowed to include rated scenes as in detailed ones or should I just be vague or no rated Ms?
SheirynFiya
#3
Hi! Just curious, does "cut" means the entries so or the prompt tht we have to use...? Sorry im new to these things so im having trouble trying to understand the concept. And we're allowed to do member x oc right? (Boy x girl) :)
byeolreenxx
#4
Chapter 3: Hi what does 'marked by Hansol menas?'
ellethereal
#5
Chapter 6: Hi, your contest is pretty interesting, it reminds me of my school's summary writing with a first sentence cut xD But I can't change any words at all? Bc I'm quite particular about how my sentences are phrased and stuff... and i find some parts of your given cut kind of weird, like for eg. the part "He shut his eyes close. A small sigh escaping his voice." I find it abit weirdly phrased, even though maybe this is your style of writing. I would have phrased it differently, like "He shut his eyes tight, a small sigh escaping his lips." Maybe it would be better to let us change the phrasing / sentence structure because each of us have our own writing style. Well it's just a suggestion, if you don't want it that way then it's fine.^^ Also, I think maybe a sentence/ paragraph cut is better, because idk, for me it'll be better because most of the other part of the story will be our own idea/interpretation of the prompt cut, rather than having a huge cut in our story that is not even ours. I'd like to participate, but I don't think I'll make it for the deadline this monthxD
5AngelsBAP
#6
Chapter 1: I may NOT like Vilx or X Mon, but I may write a fic based on your story, but I'll look it up cause I'm working on DaeUp "The Walls Around Us" and I have no time, but I found the plots interesting :D