Chapter 2: Awwww this is actually very realistic. The heroine decides to marry a man who loves her, and she feels comfortable with him. Besides it was Namjoon who left her. Oh my Namjoon..
First love is the most beautiful (or I think so) but the current and last love is whats important. I dont know but I hope the next chapter, please dont make Seorin linger her feelings with Namjoon anymore >●< it will be really complicated.
One thing I want to point out though... Namjoon left Seorin and for the entire 7 years they didnt even contact each other and update about their lives once in a while and then they make a reunion like that? Um Idk about this part but it seems unrealistic to me..

Chapter 3: I like how the story ended on a light note, like how Namjoon moved on. But also, I guess I was expecting more of a struggle from Namjoon? Like maybe if you had included scenes from that one year Namjoon was struggling with a broken heart I would enjoy it more, but otherwise it's a beautifully written story. It's short and sweet (unlike me I'm short and bitter) - good job author-him! <3

Chapter 2: Completely off topic but I thought the chapter title was misspelled because dan and and and idek anymore my head @@\

On a more relevant note, I'm rather picky about formatting so a suggestion would be to differentiate the text when it's a flashback and when it's not. Like maybe italicize the flashback parts? It makes it easier for us readers to keep track of where in the timeline we are in ^^

Also, I think that if you had placed that scene with Ji Changwook after Namjoon and Seorin met (like maybe Seorin coming home to Changwook sleeping with baby Mya?) it would create more of a shocking element. That aside, I think there's room for elaboration of Namjoon's emotions and thoughts. It'll make us more sympathetic of his character and maybe even make us cry lololol

Anyway this was a good read~ now onto the epilogue!

Chapter 1: I've never related to a kid more than Seorin omg. I once banned my brother from entering my room because he accidentally folded a page in a book of mine xD

This is a very good premise though. Gives us a solid view of how their relationship started and I don't even know what else to say other than they're so cute!!! >///<

Chapter 3: namjoon thought mya sounded like gu junpyo lmao

anyway yaaay, i like to think of this as a happy ending! the entire plot was promising from start to finish and i found the story to be really refreshing and sort of calming in a way. it was like a gentle breeze passing by and im proud of you for writing this and getting to the end :3 well done, you! keep up the good work ♡

Chapter 2: okay first of all, congrats to thr side couple on their office romance lolol im easily tempted by food hehe~

and now seorin and namjoon... wow o: on one hand, i wish they had reunited earlier and i hope he'll still show her the house (omg itd be so sweet if she saw it by chance without realising he had been the one to build it) but shes really happy with changwook >-<

oh and there were a couple of quotes i liked in this chapter including "Dreams would always remain dreams". time to read the final chapter ^^ im looking forward to it!

Chapter 1: such a cute start~ those silly kids hehe xD im a bit surprised that a princess like seorin who acts so childishly would actually read stephen king, though! thats some pretty intense stuff o_o even i cant get through it lolol anyway im looking forward to reading how their relationship will develop /rolls self to next chapter

“Taehyung, it’s best to keep only memories than property that brings pain.”

awww this fic is going to be an emotional read! im going to start reading this now and im pretty excited especially because kim sohyun is one of the characters~

i was first attracted to this story because it interested me how you used characters other than idols but when i read the description, i felt pretty much blown away. the way you worded it was so emotional and im sure im going to love reading the story even more ^^

Chapter 3: Indeed, there is something different with your story. The plot, how the story progress, how the characters' relations to each other developed, it's refreshing. Although it's sad to learn that Seorin was married to Changwook and Namjoon was heartbroken on Seorin's birthday, the positivity of Namjoon's personality is lovely. Thanks to Taehyung, though, that he asked those questions at Namjoon. And Sohyun for insisting him not to sell the house. I love Taehyung and his gf relationship x) Sohyun and Namjoon also look great together (yeah I know Sohyun's married but their friendship is what something that made them looked adorable). How the story proceeded to its end is also decent but I love it when you wrote the scene of little Seorin and little Namjoon. They're so cute! So, to conclude it all, it's a refreshing read, the storyline is clear and pretty neat, and I adore how well the words flow. I simply love this ^_^

Thank you for writing and sharing it with us!