Like family trips

Hate Becomes Love

'seulgi and wendy going to vacation with suzy '

 

in morning, seulgi house

 

... ZZZZzzzzzZZZZZzzzzzz ~~~~

seulgi fon ringing ~~ 

"hello" , yes Oh sorry love i will wake up now  just give me 5 minute ,

and i will arrive on time there " .

"are you sure you can" ? 

" for you everything I can do love " . 

"okay then but please drive safely don't  to rush okay ". 

"okay bye,  love you . " ( Muahh) 

"bye , love you to . " (muah )

 

 

 

 

 

 

wendy house....

 

 

in morning she prepare so much 

wendy get up early in the morning just to make sure all the equipment and items to be brought for this holiday enough. she feel so excited that now she can spend her time with her lover one. she always dream that one day she and seulgi will go to holiday together but in this holiday seulgi asking her that to invite suzy to but wendy don't mind because she also like kids. this vacation feel 

LIKE A FAMILY TRIPS .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

seulgi on the way ~~

 

 

 

Pinnn... pinnn~~~~

wendy hear seulgi car arrive and she feel excited to welcome her love coming inside 

 

 

Open door ...

"hello beautiful lady " *seulgi grins * hhehehehehe

"hye my handsome girlfriends " *wendy also grins *heheheheh

"can I get my morning kiss " ? 

" Oh sure can you want it to be here or here " (wendy pointed to lips and cheek) 

"Ofcouse i want it to be Here " (seulgi pointed to her lips and make a cute face) 

wendy peck seulgi lips for 2 seconds ~

" ahhhh it not enough i want more " *seulgi sign* 

" enough seulgi I will give you more in car later " hehehe 

seulgi feel excited and now she carry all the luggages to transfer in bonet

total luggages that wendy brought 3 and seulgi only brought one bag and boxing bag pack

seulgi don't really mind about what kind of cloths she have to wear.. she just wear comfortable cloths and it make her the easier to packing. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Irene house,

 

 

 

 

 

 

"morning unnie" ...

" morning suzy " .. 

"unnie can i have careal insted I don't feel like want to eat much" 

"okay then wait i will take it for you"

"okay , thanks unnie " 

 

 

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after breakfast ~

someone coming to their house and Irene already know who she is .

 

 

the Gate open slowly...and irene feel like OMG she look so handsome and charisma 

" hye " irene how are you " ? 

"hye " I'm fine thanks for asking " . 

"where is suzy" ?

"she is inside eat breakfast don't you wanna join us" ?

"can I " ?

" ofcouse can seulgi coming " 

"okay but can I invite my girlsfriends to " ?

"sure can and my mom not at home so it safe " hehheh (irene force to laugh) 

"Oh yeah it good then i'm afraid if immo Yoona know about this to soon " 

"it okay coming and invite you girlsfriends to I will wait inside " .

"okay thanks Irene" (seulgi smile like sunshine) 

irene feel really deep inlove but what she can do is just smile ...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

AFTER BREAKFASTE , 

 

 

"unnie why you come here " (suzy asking seulgi ) 

"Oh i want to invite you going vacation with me and my friends " .

"OH my are you serious unnie, I want It borin just stayed at home for holiday " .

"i know princess so now go up and pack all the cloths and equiment that you want to bring " .

" okay unnie, but can irene unnie join us for this vacation to " ?

" urm i don't know because i don't aspect she will join , but if you want you sister to join us i don't mind maybe it a good idea " . 

" okay thanks unnie " (suzy kiss seulgi cheek ) i will ask her now "

" okay when you guys already finish I'm waiting down " . 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wendy & seulgi POv

 

" love " , suzy want to invite her sister you don't mind right " ? (seulgi asking wendy)

"i don't mind love, don't worry i know maybe that kids want be with her family member " 

(seulgi kiss wendy on forhead) 

" thanks for understanding everything " . 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

suzy and irene

while irene busy to packing suzy things ..

suzy come in and tap her sister shoulder and said " unnie join us please " 

" what you mean by joining you " ? 

"i'm already asking seulgi unnie  take you to into this vacation so lets Go " 

" are you serious " , seulgi asking me to join you guys? 

"yeah unnie so lets pack faster because she said that we don't have enough time to catch fly scaduel " . 

"where we want to go" ? 

" seulgi unnie said we will goes to hawai  " , stay at her home in there " . 

 

" WHAT " Hawai , OMG she so rich ... 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Caldariat #1
Damn.... seriously the grammar is all over the place, mostly understandable but sometimes I don't even know what you're trying to say...
Get a editor.
ThirdieKim
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this is so messed up
abcd77 #3
Since you asked for comment, I'll give you one.
All I can say is...Wow...this story really needs to be re-write to something better.
I'm not trying to be mean or whatsoever, but the fragment, the grammars, are all messed up.
The plot is really nice, I'd love to read it when you make this better. You read other fics, right? And I suppose you already know how things work.
I was not going to say anything, because I thought I would hurt your feeling as the author, but you seem really fond to get comments and all. So, I just suggest you to re-write it or whatever. Make it easier to read, because I'm sorry, some people's eyes might got confused.
I know you can do it. Fighting!
lilyseulgi #4
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