Sleeping with Danger

Droplets

“Ten, nine.” I tried to focus, a little harder than I already was.

“Eight, seven, six, five.” I could only hear his voice.

“Four.” I could only feel his touch.

“Three.” I could only smell his scent.

“Two.” I could only see darkness.

“One.” Only he existed.

 

“When I snap my fingers, you will still be under my control. You will refer to me only as Master. If I hit you, pinch you, squeeze you, even just touch you, you will respond to me with an obedient “Thank you, Master.” Do you understand me, Greta?” I gave a barely audible squeak.

 

“Good.” He placed a hand at the base of my neck.

 

“Thank you.”

“Thank you who, Greta?”

“Thank you.” I couldn’t speak much else. I knew in my mind that I wasn’t going to say it. I was in control. I was the one who could control what I said, not him.

“Thank you who?”

I tried to force it. “Thank you, M-”

 

I could hear the smile in his voice as he spoke again, moving his hand up my neck and squeezing only a little, compared to the heavy touches from before. “What’s my name, Greta?”


I took in a deep breath just before he pressed down, restricting my breathing. There was that strong hand that I remembered. “Thank you, Michael.”

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ThatOneOtherWriter
#1
Chapter 7: I feel like I'm supposed to know something here, and it's killing me. Like I'm the detective missing the answers and it's right in front of me. I love it and the description and the idea of something frowned upon but enjoyed either way.

-scratches head-

I like things that make me think.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#2
Chapter 6: Aw~ The care.

Inner thoughts are always fun to write. Takes skill for the first person point of view though and you nailed it.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#3
Chapter 5: O_O
I
Wow.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#4
Chapter 4: True words, man.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#5
Chapter 3: I love this one. It can beg for more and still stand alone like this and it's creative. They pretend to be who they are to survive. Bravo. Like seriously, bravo.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#6
Chapter 2: I also miss the darker wiles of your muse. Especially the mystery. I've reread but I honestly can't tell what else happened other than what you told.

Amazingly done~!

The all-elusive "it."
It's killing my curiosity.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#7
Chapter 1: You still have your knack for surprise twists. Not the major twists [so far I've seen] but the small details we tend to overlook and they're pleasant.

I've missed your writing.

The description was good. Manly man to weak hearted resistance, all done well. -clap-