Droplets

Description

I've recently came into a horrible bout of writer's block, and I want nothing more than to fix it. For some time now, I've found that recieving feedback (both positive and negative) helps me to carry on in my work.

Here, I have compiled the bits and pieces of things that I've written since I last finished my novel, when the block had first began.

Please, if you will, take the time to read a couple, or if only one, of these excerpts and tell me what you think. Anything you say will be greatly appreciated! Thank you!

 

PS. If you'd care for me to elaborate on any of these, PLEASE let me know in the comments. It would help a lot!

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ThatOneOtherWriter
#1
Chapter 7: I feel like I'm supposed to know something here, and it's killing me. Like I'm the detective missing the answers and it's right in front of me. I love it and the description and the idea of something frowned upon but enjoyed either way.

-scratches head-

I like things that make me think.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#2
Chapter 6: Aw~ The care.

Inner thoughts are always fun to write. Takes skill for the first person point of view though and you nailed it.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#3
Chapter 5: O_O
I
Wow.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#4
Chapter 4: True words, man.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#5
Chapter 3: I love this one. It can beg for more and still stand alone like this and it's creative. They pretend to be who they are to survive. Bravo. Like seriously, bravo.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#6
Chapter 2: I also miss the darker wiles of your muse. Especially the mystery. I've reread but I honestly can't tell what else happened other than what you told.

Amazingly done~!

The all-elusive "it."
It's killing my curiosity.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#7
Chapter 1: You still have your knack for surprise twists. Not the major twists [so far I've seen] but the small details we tend to overlook and they're pleasant.

I've missed your writing.

The description was good. Manly man to weak hearted resistance, all done well. -clap-