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Droplets

It’s the inevitable breakup, the words they speak but they clearly don’t mean, and the moment when you stop noticing the gleam in their eye that made you fall in love with them in the first place. That’s what I hate about having someone. Sure, the kisses and back rubs and butterflies and fun times out with your friends, the closeness of it all, it’s great. Eventually you’ll miss it. You’ll miss it right after the fighting and the tears and the inevitable loneliness that you’ll feel. But it’ll happen again. It’ll all happen again.

 
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ThatOneOtherWriter
#1
Chapter 7: I feel like I'm supposed to know something here, and it's killing me. Like I'm the detective missing the answers and it's right in front of me. I love it and the description and the idea of something frowned upon but enjoyed either way.

-scratches head-

I like things that make me think.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#2
Chapter 6: Aw~ The care.

Inner thoughts are always fun to write. Takes skill for the first person point of view though and you nailed it.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#3
Chapter 5: O_O
I
Wow.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#4
Chapter 4: True words, man.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#5
Chapter 3: I love this one. It can beg for more and still stand alone like this and it's creative. They pretend to be who they are to survive. Bravo. Like seriously, bravo.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#6
Chapter 2: I also miss the darker wiles of your muse. Especially the mystery. I've reread but I honestly can't tell what else happened other than what you told.

Amazingly done~!

The all-elusive "it."
It's killing my curiosity.
ThatOneOtherWriter
#7
Chapter 1: You still have your knack for surprise twists. Not the major twists [so far I've seen] but the small details we tend to overlook and they're pleasant.

I've missed your writing.

The description was good. Manly man to weak hearted resistance, all done well. -clap-