We_Fly - Personal Maid (fireworkrainbow - review)
Rainbow Rain Request Store - (Hiatus)
Review of Personal Maid by We_Fly
Title: Quite interesting but abit too simple and not unique...[ 7/10 marks]
Description/Foreword: you described the characters well but some descriptions are stuck together and needs to be different paragraphs [ 10/15 marks]
Creativity/Originality: [ 7/10 marks]
Storyline/Flow: [ 24/30 marks]
Characters: you have too many charcters in the story to memorize [ 6/10 marks]
Grammar/Writing: [ 9/10 marks]
Bonus/Entertainment: [ 10/15 marks]
Total: 73/100
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